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 Wednesday, November 04, 2009
Agent Advice: Dan Conaway of Writers House
Posted by Chuck

Agent Interview by
contributor Ricki Schultz.

"Agent Advice" is a series of quick interviews with literary and script agents who talk with Guide to Literary Agents about their thoughts on writing, publishing, and just about anything else.

This installment features Dan Conaway of Writers House. Dan
has been Executive Editor at Putnam, Executive Editor at HarperCollins, Director of Literary Acquisitions at PolyGram Films, Story Editor at Citadel/HBO, Creative Executive at Tribeca Films, and Associate Editor at W.W. Norton.

He is looking for
: literary fiction, true crime, commercial fiction, historical fiction, thrillers/suspense; and his nonfiction interests include history, pop culture, narrative, and journalism. He does not accept e-mail queries. See full submission guidelines here.


GLA
: How did you become an agent?

DC: When I was an editor at HarperCollins and at Putnam, the agent I did the most business with—Simon Lipskar at Writers House—had become pretty much my best friend in the world.  And one of our many standing jokes (our favorite: “friends don’t let friends write books”) was that how when (not if) I got fired, I’d come work for him. 

GLA: Does that mean you were on the verge of being fired when you left Putnam in 2007?

DC: No—at least, not that I'm aware of! But I've always had this paranoid fixation with the number 52—that being the age at which I always figured my corporate superiors would at last judge me too expensive relative to my productivity, and cut me loose, leaving me to wander about aimlessly like some gray-suited ad-man in a John Cheever short story.  And what happens to editors when they get fired—and they all get fired, eventually, don’t they?—is, they become agents.  At the time I left Putnam, I’d published or had acquired bestsellers by Ridley Pearson, Martha Raddatz, David Stone, and Steve Lopez, and had published some other pretty amazing books along the way. So I wasn't feeling vulnerable at that time. But I did a little math and realized that 52 corresponded with another number: 17, as in the age my three triplet daughters would be when I turned 52. Three college educations to pay for? That seemed like a particularly bad year to get fired.
      
So, long story short, it occurred to me that my stock probably wasn’t going to get much higher than it was right then, and that if I really imagined I wouldn't survive to get my gold watch at the age of 65, maybe I should make the move to becoming an agent preemptively. Writers House was looking to grow the agency, so I was invited to come aboard. That was about two and half years ago.

GLA: What’s the most recent thing you’ve sold?  
 
DCThe End of Everything by Megan Abbott, sold to Reagan Arthur for her eponymous imprint at Little, Brown. A two-book contract; and we've since sold the book in a number of foreign countries, too. 

GLA: What are you looking for right now and not getting? What do you pray for when tackling the slush pile?

DC: Slush or not, I keep my prayers simple: Let's start with a handful of really wonderful sentences strung together just so. "Just so," of course, speaks to the impossibly subjective nature of this racket. 

GLA: You used to be the anonymous voice behind Mad Max Perkins of the now-inactive BookAngst 101, the blog that started out as a way to candidly discuss the industry with other editors and publishing types but emerged as a resource for writers.  Do you miss it?  Have you found another outlet for such conversations?

DC: I do miss it! BookAngst 101 was a wonderful experience, for a whole bunch of reasons. As time passed, it became less about industry stuff and more just my riffing on one thing or another, kinda self-indulgent, I suspect, but it was a uniquely satisfying outlet for me. But ultimately the energy I put into Mad Max is work that is more profitably channeled to my clients, with whom, in many cases, I'm allowed a great deal of creative input.

GLA: In an interview you did last year for Susan Henderson’s LitPark, you said you weren’t looking to take on any new clients.  Still true?

DC: Kinda yes, kinda no. I will take on new clients when I'm bowled over.   

GLA: Do you notice any trends in what you tend to represent in historical fiction? Elements that particularly grab you?

DC: First off, I'm never interested in anything but beautiful writing; engaging, urgent storytelling; characters you fall in love with—above all, voice. I'm reading a new novel right now by Robyn Young, a huge bestseller in the UK; the novel is called Insurrection, the first in a new series about Robert the Bruce and the wars for Scottish independence, and it's blowing me away on all these fronts. 

GLA: What draws you to a true crime story?

DC: How annoying would it be if were to give you essentially the same answer? And yet it's true: I'm always looking for basically the same thing! Regardless of genre—thrillers, narrative nonfiction, anything—it's the writing and the voice and so on that are the determining factors for me.  
      T
rue crime is a particular publishing challenge, because the phrase itself signals down-market crap-ola, and yet, so many of the most beloved and enduring works of narrative nonfiction could be categorized as such. The reason there will always be interest in good true crime stories is the same reason that dramatic adventure stories like The Perfect Storm or Into Thin Air continue to resonate: They're real stories, often about communities in crisis, dealing with matters of life and death. For more than a decade, I've wished I could find a new category tag/euphemism that would allow people to publish what we mean by "true crime" without the stigma the phrase connotes. If you come up with one, let me know.

GLA: If you were teaching a class on nonfiction writing & submitting, what would be item number one on your syllabus?

DC: On the submitting side, I'd say: Keep the pitch short and to the point. On the writing side, I'd say: When you think you're done—that is, after you've rewritten it a couple of times, set it aside, wait a while—then sit down and rewrite it again. Whatever you submit, it needs to be as good as you're capable of making it.

GLA: Concerning your nonfiction interests, what are three topics you would classify as overdone?

DC: For me, execution is everything, so anything handled the right way can still be interesting. We may not have another seafaring story quite so big as The Perfect Storm, but great stories told well, regardless of category, are likely going to find interest. One category that seems especially tough, though, is military memoir regarding Iraq and Afghanistan. 

GLA: What would writers be surprised to know about you?

DC: What a terribly slow reader I am. 

GLA: Best piece(s) of advice we haven’t talked about yet?

DC: It's not advice, really, but perspective: This really is a profoundly subjective business.  Editors and agents respond to what they respond to—not so much to whether there might be a market for something, but whether they themselves are sufficiently moved by something to be the right person to help find that market. There's lots of good writing that doesn't quite light my fire; that doesn't mean there's anything wrong with it—it's just that it's not right for me.


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 Sunday, November 01, 2009
Agent Advice: Erin Murphy of the Erin Murphy Literary Agency, Inc. (Part II)
Posted by Chuck

This interview with Erin is
Part II. Read Part I here.

"Agent Advice" is a series of quick interviews with literary and script agents who talk with Guide to Literary Agents about their thoughts on writing, publishing, and just about anything else.

This installment features kids agent Erin Murphy of the Erin Murphy Literary Agency, Inc. Erin specializes in kids book and has agented for 10 years.  She's based in Arizona.

She is seeking: Erin has a unique submission policy and only likes queries from writers she has met at one time or another, or writers who come through an impressive referral.  She seeks kids booksyoung adult, middle grade and picture books.





GLA: Let's talk picture books.  These are very difficult to get published, it seems. What can writers do to enhance their chances?

EM: I know it sounds simplistic, but write the very best picture books you can. I think the market contraction has been a good thing, for the most part. I'm only selling the very best picture books my clients write—but I'm definitely selling them. Picture books are generally skewing young, and have been for some time, so focus on strong read-alouds and truly kid-friendly styles. I'm having a lot of luck with projects that have the feel of being created by an author-illustrator even if the author is not an artist, in that they're fairly simple, have all kinds of room for fun and interpretation in the illustrations, and have a lot of personality.
    A year or two ago, I had an early inkling that meatier, more story-based picture books might be coming back around, but then the economy crashed and that went out the window. It will happen eventually, and I will be glad, because I love those stories, too, but they're darned hard to sell right now.
    I see a lot of picture book manuscripts that depend too heavily on dialogue, which tends to give them the feel of a chapter book or middle-grade novel. The style isn't a picture book style.

GLA: Kids writing is one of those worlds where plenty of people still go straight to editors and sell things. Do you find that agented writers can secure better deals and advances?

EM: Well, I'd hope so, or we agents aren't doing our jobs! But having an agent is definitely not required to be successful in children's books, and advances aren't the only (or even the best) way to measure success. It's a very personal decision.

GLA: Do you also take submissions for juvenile nonfiction?

EM: I do represent nonfiction projects; Chris Barton is a primary example from my client list. One of the sales I'm currently negotiating for another client is for a middle-grade nonfiction piece. I don't ever picture a time when a huge percentage of my clients are focused in this area, though, and I already work with a few writers of nonfiction, so the odds are lower there for new writers subbing to me.

GLA: You have an associate agent: Ammi-Joan Paquette. Does she have different tastes readers need to know about? Same submission procedure?

EM: Same submission policy. Our tastes overlap quite a bit, so the agency identity didn't drastically change when Joan came on board, but of course we do have some differences. I'd say the main similarity is that we both love heart-driven stories. Joan is really talented with rhymed and metered picture book texts; I know a good one when I see it, but Joan is terrific with these and getting them into really strong shape. She is more drawn to paranormal YA, dystopian, and the like than I am; I am more open to historical (so long as it's not purely historical-for-the-sake-of-the-setting).

GLA: You've been in business for many years as an agent and editor. How do you see the industry and kids books changing? What do serious writers need to know?

EM: I think the thing I'm most focused on now is that the industry requires you to hone your craft. For many years, SCBWI was all about learning the market, and that's definitely important—but it seems to be harder and harder to find writers who have really let themselves sink into their craft, into developing as writers, and give the process the time that it takes.

GLA: Will you be at any upcoming conferences where people can meet/pitch you?

EM: I am not scheduled for any conferences in 2010, I'm afraid—and I hope to keep it that way so I can conquer this reading pile at last! The next conference I'm scheduled for is SCBWI Florida in Miami in January 2011. Joan will be at Missouri SCBWI on March 20, 2010, and NESCBWI on May 14-15, 2010.

GLA: Will you accept queries from those who don't meet you at conferences?  Or is it best to meet you first or have a connection? Either way, what do you want to see and how do you want to see it?

EM: I have a pretty closed submission policy, which allows me to spend most of my time focused on my current clients. I don't accept unsolicited queries or submissions. If you go to a conference where I speak, or if you have a referral from someone I know, I will be happy to take a look. I prefer queries via e-mail.
        By the way, I don't put an expiration date on the offer for conference attendees. I'd much rather that a writer wait until a submission is truly ready than rush and get something undercooked to me in a certain window. I've received queries and submissions from people I met at conferences years ago, and I really respect the confidence it takes to reach out after all that time. I also find that those people have had long enough to get to know the business and develop their craft that they are generally more ready for representation.

GLA: What's something writers would be surprised to learn about you personally?

EM: Hmm! That's a hard one! Well, I just mentioned to a group at the Southern Ohio SCBWI Conference that I have a famous relative, so this won't be surprising to those folks, but perhaps it will for others: Allison DuBois, the Phoenix psychic who inspires the Patricia Arquette character on the TV show "Medium," is my second cousin through my maternal grandmother. At the beginning of her book Don't Kiss Them Goodbye, she talks about the great-grandfather who appeared to her after he died when she was a child, and was her first experience with the afterlife; that was my great-grandfather, too (and I had my own weird experience at his wife's, my great-grandmother's, funeral a few years later!). If she and I have met, though, it was when I was too young to remember; we haven't crossed paths as adults. I like to claim relational psychic ability when it's handy, though!
        Oh! And I can't wear a watch, because I make it stop, and it can't be started again; my maternal grandmother is the same way, so there's definitely something unusual going on in the DNA on that side of the family.

GLA: Best piece(s) of advice we haven't covered?

EM: Claim your spot in this world of children's publishing with confidence. Read what is coming out now; take advantages of the industry resources and insights the Internet provides; network how you can; stay in touch with the things that interest kids, and with kids themselves. But write for you, above all else. If you don't appeal to your own inner child, how will you ever be happy writing for kids?

Erin Murphy


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 Friday, October 30, 2009
Agent Advice: Erin Murphy of the Erin Murphy Literary Agency, Inc. (Part I)
Posted by Chuck

This interview with Erin is
Part I. Here is Part II.

"Agent Advice" is a series of quick interviews with literary and script agents who talk with Guide to Literary Agents about their thoughts on writing, publishing, and just about anything else.

This installment features kids agent Erin Murphy of the Erin Murphy Literary Agency, Inc. Erin specializes in kids book and has agented for 10 years.  She's based in Arizona.

She is seeking: Erin has a unique submission policy and only likes queries from writers she has met at one time or another, or writers who come through an impressive referral.  She seeks kids booksyoung adult, middle grade and picture books.


GLA: How did you become an agent?

EM: I was editor-in-chief at Northland Publishing and its children's imprint, Rising Moon, here in Flagstaff, Ariz., before going out on my own as a freelance editor. When lots of children
's writers reached out to me and asked me to critique their manuscripts, distill/interpret comments they'd received from editors, and the like, it was a short hop to helping them sell the manuscripts to publishers. I didn't set out to become an agent, but it turned out to be a good fit for me. I love my job.

GLA: What are some sales you're excited about?

EM: I keep my recent sales list updated at Publishers Marketplace. I am so excited about the releases my clients have coming out early in 2010—it's going to be a banner year!
       Really lively, fun picture books: Jean Reidy's Too Purpley!, Chris Barton's Shark vs. Train, Audrey Vernick's Is Your Buffalo Ready for Kindergarten?
    Great chapter books and middle grade: new Theodosia and Nathaniel Fludd books by R.L. LaFevers; the latest Effie Malone book by Mary Hershey; stunning debuts from Olugbemisola Rhuday-Perkovich (Eighth-Grade Superzero) and Sarah DeFord Williams (Palace Beautiful); Laura Resau's first middle-grade story, Star in the Forest (Laura's YA, The Indigo Notebook just released last week!)
        Keep-you-riveted YA novels: The second half of the Oathbreaker duo, Prince Among Killers, by S.R. Vaught an
d J.B. Redmond; debut YA author C.J. Omololu's Dirty Little Secrets, about the daughter of a hoarder; the latest gorgeous read from Heather Tomlinson, Toads and Diamonds.

GLA: Why do you love kids books?  What draws you to them?

EM: I love the clear connection between story and reader. There are so rarely filters the reader has to work through, layers of pretense or literary ambiguity that makes reading a scholarly exercise—but re-reading brings new meaning and new understanding, so it doesn't have a lack of richness. Emotion is so clear, whether it is pain or delight. Reading children's literature feels like tapping into something primal. I constantly have in mind the new readers out there, coming to new books; it is so satisfying to help writers to reach them!

GLA: Concerning YA and MG, what do you find yourself drawn to? 

EM: Unforgettable characters; stories with heart; emotional transformation; strong relationships; laughter; tight plots that surprise me; worlds I don't want to leave. I like to connect with the protagonist, so disaffected characters have to let the reader behind the mask to catch my heart. I don't tend to get on the bandwagon—I'd rather turn the conventional story or the hot new thing on its head—so I'm rarely intrigued by a pitch along the lines of "Twilight meets X" or "the next A-List." I've been seeing a lot of stories for middle-graders that feel as though they would have fit in perfectly with new releases ten or twenty years ago; they are missing a freshness and a smartness that today's successful middle-grade stories need to have. For YA, I see a lot of stories that are supposedly about teens, but the characters feel 11 or 12 to me.
        I'd love to see solid, well-constructed mysteries with strong characters for either age; more romance (sweet young love for middle-grade, intense sparking for teens); and characters who reflect the splendid diversity of today's children (multicultural, biracial, hom
osexual, struggling with gender issues; with single parents, gay parents, grandparents doing the parenting; with half-siblings, siblings much older or younger than themselves; in nontraditional situations like house-sharing or single parents filling in for each other to cover gaps; religious, spiritually seeking, or forging their own spiritual paths) in a way that is fully integrated into character and story, not tacked on, not preachy, and not treated as a problem.
        I tend to like fiction that others might find "too quiet," but encourage writers to find a way to give them hooks—which doesn't mean throw in a werewolf or change the setting to somewhere more hip, it means give the story something to hang a description on, something that makes for an eye-catching cover and title. Can you still describe it in one sentence even if it's character-driven and quiet? With the right "something," yes.

GLA: What are some problematic chapter 1 clichés that you see often in a YA/MG partial?

EM: The biggest thing is starting in the wrong place—either having lots of backstory at the opening, which keeps readers from engaging, or conversely, starting so much in the moment of the story that, again, it's hard to connect with the main character. It can be hard to give enough context and get the story moving at the same time. The other thing I see a lot is "talking heads"—all dialogue, no narrative.

GLA: If someone was chatting you with over dinner and said they have a story but don't understand the line between MG and YA, how would you explain the difference?

EM: Is there a line? It seems to me there is scale more than a line. An editor said to me recently that if the main character is 14, it automatically gets shelved in YA in the chain stores. There's a line. But I work with authors whose light and wholesome novels, with teen MCs, are read mostly by tweens; and others whose novels are populated by middle graders going through such intense experiences that the readership skews to the high end of MG/low end of YA.
        In my mind, the best people to decide who the readers are for any particular book are the kids themselves, and the teachers and librarians who know the kids they work with, and who stay abreast of what is happening in today's juvenile literature. I try to focus on helping my clients making their stories the best stories they can be, rather than
fitting them into boxes. The line sometimes feels like a moving target, and the writer has little control over it; better to focus on what you can control, which is how good it is.
        That said, characters should feel as though they are truly the age they are supposed to be—and that age *today*. Kids are more savvy than they used to be even five or ten years ago. They are exposed to more and more at a younger age. Writers should respect their readership accordingly.



My Fair Godmother


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 Monday, October 26, 2009
Agent Elaine Spencer Talks Queries
Posted by Chuck

Agent Elaine Spencer of The Knight Agency talked queries at the South Carolina Writers Workshop. Here is what she had to say:

ABOUT HER INDIVIDUAL TASTES:

  • She likes you to explain the resolution of the story in the query - meaning you say how the story ends. (This is not typical, but important if you are contacting her.)
  • In queries, skip jargon that will confuse. For example, when writing a fantasy or sci-fi story, lay off species and world-building.
  • Avoid cast lists in queries.
  • Specificially, with the "historical romance" she seeks, she is looking for more good work - particularly Victorian era stuff, Edwardian era stuff and Regency.

ON QUERIES:

  • Give the title, genre and word count upfront.
  • If you have a reason you chose her (e.g., you met her at a conference or read an interview with her), say so.
  • When you pitch, get to your protagonist as quickly as possible, and tell us what makes them special or different.
  • After introducing the protagonist, introduce the conflict or complication or trouble (the "hook").
  • In the last paragraph, feel free to mention awards or organizations or blogs. This info will not hurt you; it may or may help you.

MORE

  • Her agency receives 50,000 queries a year and 80 percent are not appropriate submissions for their agency.
  • Make sure you are querying an agent who reps what you write. 
  • Read cover copy of similar books in the bookstore to help shape your pitch.
  • Don't write to her after a rejection and tell her she's an idiot and will be sorry when you're a famous writer.
  • Network at conferences!

      Elaine Spencer joined The Knight Agency in September, 2005. Elaine belongs to the Association of Authors' Representatives (AAR) and Romance Writers of America (RWA). She is actively building her client list, and is currently accepting submissions of the following types of books: commercial literary fiction, women’s fiction, contemporary romance, historical romance, romantic suspense, high-concept paranormal fiction, young adult and middle grade fiction, and select pop-cultural nonfiction.


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 Friday, October 23, 2009
Agent Advice: Amy Tipton of Signature Literary
Posted by Chuck

"Agent Advice" is a series of quick interviews with literary and script agents who talk with Guide to Literary Agents about their thoughts on writing, publishing, and just about anything else.

This installment features Amy Tipton of Signature Literary. Formerly, Amy was with FinePrint Literary Management.

She is seeking: Amy is looking for both fiction and nonfiction–edgy or quirky, commercial or literary–in particular, she is interested in YA, middle grade, and women’s fiction.  In nonfiction she is looking for women’s studies/academia, fashion/beauty, and pop culture.

GLA: How did you become an agent?

AT: Peter Rubie. He encouraged me to take on clients when I was just an assistant. I was terrified! I had no idea I would love it so much.

GLA: What's the most recent thing you've sold?

AT: Janet Reid sold The Near Witch by Victoria Schwab to Hyperion/Disney on my behalf at FinePrint Literary Management. I’ve sold YAs to Saint Martin’s Press and Simon Pulse.

GLA: I read online that you're looking for gritty urban fiction.  This still true?  If so, can you give readers a few examples of books you love so they can get a feel for what to send you?

AT: Yes, but I don't want authors to think I'm talking about crime novels or hard boiled mysteries, neither of which I represent - so I don’t say I’m looking for “gritty urban fiction” anymore. All I meant by “gritty” was real, dirty, heartbreaking. I love authors like Michelle Tea and Eileen Myles because they expose themselves.

GLA: What nonfiction subjects do you take on?

AT: I do very little nonfiction. I like academia/feminist work. I also like beauty/fashion projects. I’m doing a retro-fashion/beauty guide right now.

GLA: What are you looking for and not getting?  What do you pray for when tackling the slush pile?

AT: Something I can’t live without! Be it a YA, MG, adult fiction or nonfiction. I have eclectic taste so it’s not something easily pinpointed.

GLA: Let's talk children's for a moment.  I believe you handle both YA and MG.  What can you tell us about your love for these categories?  For example, are you looking for boy books?  Paranormal but sick of the vampire craze?

AT: Yes, I handle both YA and MG—and I love them! I really believe that Flux statement, “YA is a point of view, not a reading level.” I think the line between YA and adult has become transparent. I think MG is a little easier to distinguish. The language is simpler but you have to be careful with MG—you wonder if it’s just dumb (because you’re not used to reading at that level) or if it’s MG. Everyone wants a good boy-book! I would like a good boy MG, though I’m very girl-centric when it comes to YA. But in both categories, I’m big on reality-based stuff. No vampires here! Please ….

GLA: If I asked you for your top 3 tips on writing for kids, you would say ______ ?

AT: Don’t treat them like they're stupid, Use their language, Make it believable (like, if you’re writing fantasy, go all out—suck those kids in).

GLA: Will you be at any upcoming writers' conferences where people can meet/pitch you?

AT: No. I don’t have any upcoming conferences. But my colleagues do!

GLA: How do you like to be contacted by writers seeking representation?

AT: I prefer e-mail queries: amy@signaturelit.com.

GLA: What's something writers would be surprised to learn about you personally?

AT: I just had a stroke (this year) and I’m still working … I think that says something about my love of books, my authors, and the dedication I have to this industry!

GLA: Best piece(s) of advice we haven't covered?

AT: Do your homework! Research agents before submitting to them.


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 Wednesday, October 21, 2009
Agent Advice: Dorian Karchmar of WME (William Morris Endeavor) Entertainment
Posted by Chuck

Agent Interview by
contributor Ricki Schultz.

"Agent Advice" is a series of quick interviews with literary and script agents who talk with Guide to Literary Agents about their thoughts on writing, publishing, and just about anything else.

This installment features Agent Advice: Dorian Karchmar of WME (William Morris Endeavor) Entertainment. Dorian has been a literary agent for over a decade.

She is looking for: "She represents bestselling and award winning literary and quality mainstream fiction and narrative nonfiction (memoir, biography, history), cookbooks and general upmarket nonfiction."

GLA: How did you become an agent?

DK: I started agenting in 1999 when I came back to New York after completing my MFA in nonfiction at the University of Iowa.

GLA: What's the most recent thing you've sold? 

DK: Russian Winter, a debut historical novel by Daphne Kalotay, to HarperCollins; subsequently, we have sold it in 14 countries.

GLA: What are you looking for right now and not getting?  What do you pray 
for when tackling the slush pile
?

DK: More phenomenal historical fiction—I get a lot in, but not a lot that’s as good as it needs to be—that, and a beautifully-written, very scary ghost story for grown-ups.

GLA: Can you tell us a little bit more about the kinds of short story projects you seek?

DK: I am not actively seeking short stories, as collections are nearly impossible to sell. The culture has moved away from stories to the point where they are nearly an endangered species from a financial perspective. That said, I do still take occasional leaps with collections, in which case I tend to be drawn to linked collections and collections that illuminate a place or culture that is unexpected or in some way deeply unfamiliar. (I would love to find something set in North Korea, written by an “insider.”)

GLA: I read online that you seek "offbeat/quirky" fiction. Can you give us 2-3 examples of books you've repped that fall into this category so that writers can get a better sense of what you mean here?

DK: That definition of what I’m looking for has probably caused me more trouble than almost anything else I’ve put out there, so I’m happy to have the opportunity to clarify. I love to be transported when I read, and what I’m seeking are stories and voices that I don’t feel I’ve read before. I’m not looking for the deliberately experimental, nor am I looking for much in the way of overtly comic novels (though I do love to laugh, I like the laughter to be only one part of what a book makes me feel—I’m not a big fan of satire, per se). 
        I represented an extraordinary memoir last year called The House at Sugar Beach by New York Times reporter Helene Cooper, which was a New York Times bestseller. It’s the story of her growing up in Liberia and of her return there as an adult to try to find the foster sister she left behind when Helene’s family—a political royalty—was forced to flee the country in the way of the
coup in 1980 when Helene was 13. That’s a story unlike any I had read before—something only this author could have written—and it completely transported me both emotionally and intellectually, to places I had never imagined. To me, that is very exciting. 
        Last year, HarperCollins published a debut novel I represented called The Seamstress by Frances De Pontes Peebles, a young Brazilian-American writer.  It is an epic set in Brazil in the 1930s, telling the story of two poor sisters who are separated as teenagers: one is kidnapped by a group of roving bandits and goes on to become their eventual leader; the other sister marries into a political dynasty in the capital of Recife. It’s a sprawling, deeply colorful story, and it felt both beautifully old-fashioned and refreshingly original to me in its settings and the intertwining of the political, the natural world, and the emotional pull between these sisters who are separated for over a decade.  This wasn’t a book you would look at and necessarily think of as “quirky,” but, again, it could not have been written by anyone other than Frances, and I think it was an absolute triumph of historical fiction that used impeccable research without ever falling prey to it.

GLA: Do you notice any trends in what you tend to represent?  Subgenres or elements that particularly grab you?

DK: I seek out assured and elegant voices—I’m a stickler for clean writing, which doesn’t mean it has to be spare, but I want writers who have made the tough decisions about what to include and what to exclude on a word level, line level, and plot level.
        I have lately been drawn to historical fiction and to fiction that has some sort of fabulous element to it—again, I’m dying for a ghost story: I’d like to be spooked out! I’m always interested in books that bring together unlikely people or pairings: something told from a unique point of view that we don’t often get to inhabit (an animal; someone with an strange and interesting job)—that’s back to the “offbeat” thing for me.  I’d like to read about a Chinese washerwoman on a British naval vessel during WWI; an old gardener in the 18th century who takes it upon himself to redesign all the Queen’s gardens at some far-flung castle in France that the Queen never visits, etc.

GLA: You also rep some nonfiction areas. If you met a writer and suggested that he build his platform, only for him to ask "How do I do that?" -  what would you say?

DK: Social networking via the Internet; lectures and other public appearances; building alliances with other professionals working in whatever his/her field of expertise may be. 
        The reality is that certain kinds of nonfiction—especially practical, advice, business, etc.—are only going to sell meaningfully if the author is already very established in his/her field and has a media presence—TV show, radio show, etc.—or a huge presence on the lecture/personal appearances circuit.

GLA: How do you prefer to be contacted by writers seeking representation?  Do you want a synopsis and sample chapters right away?

DK: E-mail queries are fine.  A simple, straight forward query letter laying out meaningful writing/biographical background and what the book is.

GLA: What is the number one mistake you see in queries?

DK: People querying too early—before their writing and their book has matured to the point it needs to be. Finding an agent should be the last step, not the first. If the book is truly wonderful and fully-baked, the author will be able to find an effective advocate for it. Most people querying are doing so well before their work can stand up to honest scrutiny.

GLA: Best piece(s) of advice we haven't talked about yet?

DK: Don’t give in to internal and external pressures to try to find an agent before you’ve matured as a writer.  The book business is very difficult and not getting any easier; most books that are published don’t sell well, and many careers end practically before they start. 
        Write a book that only you could write, and rewrite, rewrite, rewrite. 
        Be more patient and more honest with yourself than you ever thought you could be. 
        Find a couple of writers who you thi
nk are better than you are, ingratiate yourself with them, and start reading and workshopping each other.  And ask them—beg them—to be merciless.  Be humble and quiet while they give you feedback. 
        Be prepared to cut, delete, throw away, put in a drawer. 
        Only when you’ve got your best possible work—something that can stand up there with the best of whatever genre you’re working in—should you start looking for the right agent to represent you.  If you’ve got a terrific book, you should end up with plenty of good agents from which to choose, so don’t jump at the first person who says “yes.” 
        Put the good of the work before the good of your ego as much as you can.


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 Friday, October 16, 2009
Agent Advice: Byrd Leavell of Waxman Literary Agency
Posted by Chuck

"Agent Advice" is a series of quick interviews with literary and script agents who talk with Guide to Literary Agents about their thoughts on writing, publishing, and just about anything else.

This installment features Byrd Leavell of Waxman Literary Agency.
Byrd began his career at Carlisle & Company and then served as an agent at InkWell Management and Venture Literary. Byrd says: "As a literary agent I believe in representing works that carve out new territory and authors who are committed to creating books that succeed in the marketplace. I specialize in working with authors who have established a following on the Internet, athletes, celebrities, journalists, and first-time writers who are bound for glory. I love narrative nonfiction that pushes the envelope and finds new audiences, talented fiction that is a blast to read, and anything written by a motivated, confident, unapologetic author with a story to tell."

He is looking for
: General fiction, Mystery, Reference, Biography, Business/investing/finance, History, Health, Travel, Sports, Horror, Humor, Memoir, Pop-culture.


 
GLA: How did you become an agent?

BL: I graduated from UVA, attended The Radcliffe Publishing course in Boston, caught a ride to New York, and then landed a job as Michael Carlisle’s assistant. I worked at Carlisle & Company for the next four years and made the jump to handling my own clients during that period.

GLA: What’s the most recent thing you’ve sold?

BL: I just sold a hilarious book by Justin Halpern, the writer behind Shit My Dad Says (on Twitter), to Kate Hamill at IT books. Mark my words, it is going to be on bestseller lists next Father’s day.

GLA: From what I can gather, you are pretty open as to what you accept concerning nonfiction, and there are even some novels in your repertoire.  Can you help readers  better understand what you are looking for in fiction vs. categories you don’t represent?

BL: With fiction, I don’t want to rule anything out; if it’s good, it’s good, but I tend to gravitate toward the end of the spectrum where smart and commercial overlap. I only sign a couple novels a year, and it’s always because something leapt out of my inbox to the point that I couldn’t stop reading it.

GLA: You look for authors who have used the Internet to creative a unique and wide platform.  Can you give us some examples of how clients have done this prior to you signing them. This may help writers understand how to cultivate a fan base before approaching an agent.

BL: I do indeed. Tucker Max (I Hope They Serve Beer in Hell) was one of the first clients I signed, and as I pitched his book to publishers, he had X amount of visitors each month - a huge fan base, etc. I realized I had hit on a formula that I completely identified with and believed in.
        Since I’ve been in the industry, publishing has gone through a couple different stages as it has tried to figure out what can make the jump from the web to the bookshelves. For a while, if you ha
d a great blog, you could land a deal. Traffic was maybe mentioned in the third paragraph of the Author Bio section. And then none of those worked. Then for a while, if you had some insane amount of traffic and a big web presence, you could land a deal. But none of those really worked either (Fark, Perez, others). Now, editors seemed to be focused on Twitter, and after that, it will be the next thing. How many people hang out with your 3-D image at their house, etc.  
        The key is this: You have to have lots of fans who will actually want to buy your book, and then you have to write a book that can succeed on its own in the marketplace, without any support from those fans whatsoever. Look at Clay Travis. He has a great web presence, but the guy writes terrific books about SEC football that sell to a very receptive audience. Other authors in his position usually make the mistake of trying to do sports humor books that they think their online readership will buy, and none of them sell more than 8,000 copies.

GLA: Speaking of Tucker Max, that book is approaching one million sales and the movie is coming out – congrats.  You represent memoirs.  A lot of people like to write memoirs or vignettes about their own life, but most don’t get sold let alone sell a million copies. What can people learn from Tucker’s writing and his success?

BL: That Tucker is a force of nature, knew that his book was going to be huge when I first spoke to him while he was sleeping on a friend’s couch, and the level of success of IHTSBIH is a reflection of this more than anything else. 
      Tucker’s book also worked because it was the first to appeal to an audience that publishing had decided would never buy books and because he is a great storyteller. No one ever gives him any credit for this, but it is the main reason his book has stayed on the list for the last two years and will hit the #1 spot for the first time next week. If you want to write a memoir, you need to create something that appeals to an audience and not just your own need to write about yourself. (For the record, if you are reading this, don’t start your query with “I am the next Tucker Max.” I will j
ust delete it.)

GLA: I see several sports books on your list – one from a journalist, two others by sports celebrities.  Are you looking for more sports submissions by journalists?  Something specific perhaps?

BL: We represent some of the best sports writers in the business and are always looking for submissions from journalists.

GLA: Most common problems you see in a query letter?

BL: A general lack of professionalism. That and writing three paragraphs about the plot.

GLA: What are you praying for when you tackle the slush pile?  Specifically, what are you looking for that no one seems to send?

BL: Good question. Most of my clients are actually people I have tracked down on my own. The one thing I never see, that I would love to find, is an author that has sold a large number of their self-published book, (think above 30,000) completely on their own. (I represent Once a Runner, and by the time I reached out to the author he had single-handedly sold more than 100,000 copies.)

GLA: When you get a narrative nonfiction submission, do you want to see a proposal? The whole ms?

BL: I usually just want the first couple pages pasted below the query.

GLA: Will you be at any upcoming conferences where writers can meet/pitch you?

BL: I’ll be on a panel at the Digital Book World Conference called “The New Farm System: Scouting Blogs and Self-Publishers for Commercial Books.” The event is Jan. 26-27, 2010, in NYC.

GLA: What’s something writers would be surprised to learn about you personally?

BL: Pass.

GLA: Best piece(s) of advice we haven’t discussed?

BL: Read more books. And the novel you are s
ending out isn’t ready yet.




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 Tuesday, October 13, 2009
Agent Advice: Michelle Humphrey of Sterling Lord Literistic
Posted by Chuck

"Agent Advice" is a series of quick interviews with literary and script agents who talk with Guide to Literary Agents about their thoughts on writing, publishing, and just about anything else.

This installment features Michelle Humphrey of Sterling Lord Literistic
. Michelle has been with Sterling Lord since 2007. As an assistant for the Renee Zuckerbrot Agency and then Anderson Literary, she's worked with such authors as Kelly Link, Amy Ryan, Barry Lyga, and Helen Benedict. Prior to agencies, her gigs have included English Teacher, Proofreader, and Freelance Book Reviewer; her reviews have been published in Bitch, Bust, and The Women's Review of Books.

She is looking for
: "She
is interested in representing writers of young adult fiction (historical, contemporary, literary), middle grade, memoir, women's fiction, and narrative nonfiction (history, psychology, women's studies).

GLA: How did you become an agent?

MH: After working numerous non-fulfilling jobs (I think my low-point was when I was a proofreader for the yellow pages), I took an internship at the Renee Zuckerbrot Literary Agency, and have been working at agencies ever since - for three years.

GLA: What's the most recent thing you've sold? 

MH: This month, I've sold a YA novel called Steinbeck, the Scoot and the Pull of Gravity, by Gae Polisner, to Frances Foster at Farrar Straus and Giroux Books for Young Readers.

GLA: You seek awesome YA.  What can you tell us about your love for this category?

MH: I'm drawn to teen heroines. It seems like all the great battles happen for them: girl versus family, girl versus boy, girl versus best friend from childhood, girl versus popular crowd, girl versus Evil Creature of the Night. Who can resist?

GLA: You seek not only contemporary and literary YA, but also "historical."  Can you give us some examples of historical YA you loved so writers can get a feel for your tastes. 

MH: One of my favorite books is The Green Glass Sea by Ellen Klages, which is about the Manhattan project. I love those characters, and I especially love World War II history and 20th-century history in general. If characters are likeable and dimensional, I could get into any kind of historical context, but 20th-century history is probably my favorite.

GLA: Do you also accept middle grade, as well?

MH: Yes I do! I'm open to anything, especially stories that are character-driven.

GLA: Some agents love synopses and some don't.  Where do you stand?

MH: I am pro-synopsis - no more than three pages, though. Not a fan of synopses in the query. Query letters should have a teaser for the story (like a blurb on the back of a book), whereas a synopsis should be separate from the query letter.

GLA: When you get a narrative nonfiction submission, do you want a full proposal or the entire book, or a combination thereof?

MH: Full proposal and sample chapter, please.

GLA: Do you find yourself getting proposals for narrative nonfiction that really aren't narrative NF at all, but rather mis-classified?

MH: I don't get many proposals, unfortunately, but I'm always on the lookout for great narrative nonfiction. I do get memoirs in proposal format, and I'm generally not a fan.  For memoir, I'd prefer to see the writing - first three chapters, for instance.

GLA: What are the most common and recurring problems you see in chapter 1 of a garden variety fiction partial?

MH: This is an excellent question. The most common problem is that the writing feels a little clichéd (i.e., it's something I've heard before, and it's not particularly vivid). Or, I just don't get a sense of a story happening. Even character-driven stories, I think, need a clue of the drama right from the beginning.

GLA: What's something writers would be surprised to learn about you?

MH: I am obsessed with Red Hot Chili Peppers - band and food.

GLA: Will you be at any upcoming conferences where people can meet and pitch you?

MH: Nothing planned right now, but I'm always open to e-mail queries, and am generally happy to answer (brief) questions about publishing from new authors: I can be reached at michelle@sll.com.

GLA: Best piece(s) of advice we haven't covered?

MH: Embrace rejection! Wink at it, laugh, maybe bake a rejection pie. You'll get there -- why not have fun along the way?

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 Thursday, October 08, 2009
Agent Advice: Nathan Bransford of Curtis Brown, Ltd.
Posted by Chuck

Agent Interview by
contributor Ricki Schultz.

"Agent Advice" is a series of quick interviews with literary and script agents who talk with Guide to Literary Agents about their thoughts on writing, publishing, and just about anything else.

This installment features Nathan Bransford of
Curtis Brown Ltd. Nathan was born and raised in Colusa, California, where he learned a thing or two about rice farming, and graduated from Stanford University with a degree in English. Besides the usual agenting duties, Nathan is well known for his popular blog on agenting and publishing, widely regarded as one of the best (if not the best) blogs by literary agents on the Internet.  In addition, he is a new writer of middle grade works, with his first book due out in 2011.

He is looking for
:
a wide range of genres and is particularly interested in literary fiction, narrative nonfiction, young adult fiction, historical fiction, mystery, science fiction, business, sports, politics and popular culture. He does not represent poetry or screenplays. He welcomes submissions via e-mail. Please send a brief description of your project (no attachments, please) to nb@cbltd.com.




GLA: How did you become an agent?

NB: I really love books and wanted to work with authors. When I graduated from college, I decided to go into publishing and found my way to Curtis Brown Ltd., where I started as an assistant. I've been with Curtis Brown ever since.

GLA: What's the most recent thing you've sold? 

NB: The most recent deal I announced was a debut suspense novel, Rock Paper Tiger by Lisa Brackmann, which will be published by Soho Press in 2010. When the author queried me, it was one of the best I'd ever received, and the manuscript didn't disappoint.

GLA: What are you looking for right now and not getting? What do you pray for when tackling the slush pile?

NB: I'd like to see a bit more nonfiction, but I'm really just looking for new, talented writers of all types.

GLA: How long have you had your blog?

NB: I've been blogging in earnest since early 2007.

GLA: Has the volume of submissions you get increased significantly since you started the blog?

NB: Definitely. I now receive somewhere between 15,000 and 20,000 queries a year, and I think the blog is the main reason behind the high volume.  When the legendary anonymous agent blogger Miss Snark linked to me for the first time, I received several hundred queries almost instantaneously, and it's been a steady stream ever since. But I'm very thankful for the queries I receive, even if it's an ongoing challenge to keep up.

GLA: On your blog, you have an extensive list of tips, rules, and good/bad examples you refer to as "The Essentials," which you request writers read before querying. Where are new writers are going wrong in the queries you see?

NB: I always recommend that authors carefully target their agent search and personalize their queries, and I wish more authors took the time to do this. Personalization shows that an author has chosen to query an agent specifically and isn't simply blasting an e-mail out to every agent they can find on the Internet. It also means they've taken the time to research the business. All of these qualities bode well for the author's professionalism and the quality of the manuscript.
    Queries also tend to be either way too long or way too short—it's surprising how few queries provide just enough information without being overly long. It shouldn't take much more than 250-350 words, but then, it shouldn't take only 50 either.

GLA: With regard to "The Essentials," do the queries you receive show evidence that the senders have done the homework?

NB: I'd say about 25% of the queries I receive really take the advice to heart. No matter how much advice is out there, not everyone is going to follow it.

GLA: You represent young adult fiction but tend to stay away from middle grade projects. Has this changed since writing and selling (congrats on your book deal, by the way!) a middle grade sci-fi novel?  As well, do you find you lean more toward sci-fi when it comes to juvenile literature?

NB: Thank you! As an agent, I'm actually drawn more to the types of books I read than what I write. I may write sci-fi, but I read all types of books and don't really prefer sci-fi over other genres. I'm drawn to the author's talent and the particular stories they tell more than the genre they're writing in.
    When it comes to children's books, the projects I have taken on have been all over the map, from dark literary fiction to fun commercial genre fiction. I tend to lean more toward the young adult side of the children's book world as a reader and agent, but I'm open to the r
ight middle grade project as well.

GLA: Two nonfiction categories you accept are "history" and "business."  With so many books already written in these subjects, what must book proposals in these areas have in order to get you interested?

NB: For history and business, the author needs to have impeccable credentials, the writing talent to engage the reader, and must be addressing the topic in a unique fashion and/or charting new territory.  It's a tricky and somewhat rare combination, which is why there's such a premium on the authors who possess all of these qualities.

GLA: In addition, you represent sports-related books. What topics are you tired of seeing in this area?

NB: I'm definitely open to sports nonfiction, but fiction in the sports world can be somewhat tricky. In real life, sports already provides such a compelling ongoing narrative, and sports novels that try only for verisimilitude can sometimes have a difficult time competing with what's actually happening in the real word. I mean, Cincinnati Bengals wide receiver Chad Johnson legally changed his name to Chad Ochocinco because his jersey number is "85." How can a novel compete with that?
        In order for a sports novel to work it usually has to be what I call "sports plus." Literary sports novels have work
ed, historical sports novels have worked, children's sports novels have worked, suspense novels in the sports novels have worked, etc. But just a "sports novel" is difficult.

GLA: You are a self-proclaimed "e-book aficionado." Having embraced what many believe will take over the publishing world, do you have any advice on how writers can maximize their success in this changing industry? What are your thoughts on the future of publishing?

NB: Things are going to be changing very rapidly in the business in the coming few years as e-book adoption continues to rise. The business is going to have to adapt, and it may necessitate new business models.
        But I don't think everything is going to change. People will still want to read books, there will still be a demand for great books, and authors will still be needed to write them. The delivery of those books to readers may change, but books aren't simply going to disappear.
        The most important thing an author can do as the world of books changes is to keep doing what they've always been doing: write as well as they possibly can. After that, it's a matter of letting the chips fall as they may. Even if they're digital chips.

GLA: Best piece(s) of advice we haven't talked about yet?

NB: I like to encourage authors to engage in "productive procrastination."  Everyone needs to take breaks while writing from time to time, but instead of fiddling with fonts and the cover page, instead: read industry blogs and newsletters and try and find out as much about the industry as possible. I'm always looking for authors who demonstrate a high level of professionalism and take the time to learn the ins and outs of the business. There's a whole lot of great information out there, and authors who take the time to learn about the business before querying agents and read industry blogs (like your GLA blog) will have a big leg up.

 

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 Thursday, September 24, 2009
Agent Advice: Matt Bialer of Sanford J. Greenburger Associates
Posted by Chuck

Agent Interview by
contributor Ricki Schultz.

"Agent Advice" is a series of quick interviews with literary and script agents who talk with Guide to Literary Agents about their thoughts on writing, publishing, and just about anything else.

This installment features Matt Bialer of Sanford J. Greenburger Associates.
Matt has been in the publishing community since 1985, including 14 years in the book division of the William Morris Agency.

He is looking for
: fantasy, science fiction, thrillers, and mysteries as well as a select group of literary writers. He represents many veteran authors, but also enjoys finding unique new voices. He also loves smart narrative nonfiction including books about current events, popular culture, biography, history, music, race, and sports. See full submission guidelines here.





GLA: How did you become an agent?  

MB: I had been an English major at Vassar College. I thought I might pursue being an academic, but then I realized I wanted to be out in the "real world," so to speak. It was 1985. I sent my resume to publishers. But then a dear friend of mine (an assistant to an editor at Crown) told me that a literary agency was looking for an assistant. I didn't even know what a literary agency was! So Jane von Mehren (she is a VP and head of trade paperbacks at Random House—the assistant grew up) helped me get my first job, and it was at Curtis Brown, Ltd. in New York. I was Perry Knowlton's assistant. And then, I went on to William Morris for many years, and I eventually became a book agent there. But to answer your question, I kind of fell in to being an agent and being on that side of the fence. I realized that I enjoyed it and that we offer a kind of stability for authors, and I can take on whatever projects I please. I enjoy the freedom. I enjoy handling all different kinds of books. And I get paid for it, too.

GLA: What's the most recent thing you've sold?   

MB: I just sold a big, new prehistory project by my clients W. Michael and Kathleen O'Neal Gear to Tor/Forge. Mike and Kathy are masters of the prehistory genre, and they have sold many copies of their books over the years. I also sold an exciting new series by Tad Williams to DAW Books titled Sleeping Late on Judgement Day. It is a fantastical noir about a dead man caught in a war between heaven and hell. I sold a first novel titled High Before Homework by Maya Sloan. It's a riot. It's about a boy named Doug in a small town in Oklahoma. He is pretty bored and cynical and wise beyond his years.  He works at a shopping mall and has crush on a girl named Laurilee who works at the mall, too. She likes all of the stupid big guys. So what does Doug do?  He becomes a crystal meth addict so he can get put in rehab, impress Laurilee, and live happily ever after.

GLA: What are you looking for right now and not getting? What do you pray for when tackling the slush pile?  

MB: I am looking for something supernatural that fits into this whole paranormal craze going on. But I want something fresh and with a world pretty mapped out. I found something in the slush titled Mark of the Demon by Diana Rowland. Well, my assistant Lindsay Ribar, found it. We sold it to Bantam. But I like what is really good and new. I always like a great fantasy or a great thriller that has a new twist on something. In thrillers, I like either the Harlan Coban kind of domestic suspense (ordinary people in trouble), or I am looking for thrillers that have some crossover into the fantastic or supernatural. I like literary fiction, too, but that is a tricky area. I think novels that take place in more exotic places are what sell in that area.

GLA: One area of interest for you is women's fiction. What draws you to this category?  

MB: It is a healthy area of publishing, and a career can be nourished and grow. It also deals with "real issues" that women face in their everyday lives often crossed with an element that make the story more surprising.

GLA: You also seek multicultural pieces in both fiction and nonfiction.  What subjects are you tired of seeing in this category? Are there any subjects you feel are untapped and would, therefore, be a refreshing change from the typical multicultural manuscript or proposal?   

MB: In more upscale fiction, I like stories set in more exotic locales. I think it is no surprise that some of the better selling literary fiction is written outside of this country or set outside of here. In nonfiction, I am struggling with that question myself. I think reader taste here has grown more inward due to what has been going on. I am not sure if there is the same interest in reading about other cultures, unless it is a form of escape.

GLA: What are three things that make you stop reading every time they crop up in a manuscript?

MB: The story is not grabbing me. The writing is flat. I feel like I have read this too many times before.

GLA: In a query or book proposal?   

MB: A lack of knowledge about the publishing world. Many people just put on their blinders and shotgun their queries out there. It shows. I think it is good for a writer to come across like they follow trends, they know what sells, who they would compare their work to, why they chose to write to me in particular. Presentation makes a big difference. Only a small percentage of queries have a savvy.

GLA: Specifically within science fiction, what themes that particularly hook you—such as time travel, post-apocalyptic, or first contact? 

MB: I think post-apocalyptic stories can have possibility if the story is set in a world that is not too far a stretch from the world we live in now.  I always believe in science fiction stories that can cross over into mainstream. They're rare, but they do happen. Look at Michael Crichton or The Traveler.  A time travel book can always sell if it is really good and fresh. I would love to sell a great time travel book. I still love Time and Again. Editors would love to see a story like that.

GLA: Will you be at any upcoming writers' conferences where writers can meet and pitch you?

MB: I hope to be at the World Fantasy Convention in October. And I like to go to the Thrillerfest in New York.

GLA: Best piece(s) of advice we haven't talked about yet?   

MB: Just keep writing. And pay attention to the business. If something becomes a bestseller, check it out and ask yourself why. But the most important thing to do is to keep writing.  It migh
t not happen with your first or even second or third novel. You have to develop. I think one of the biggest changes in the business over the years is that there isn't really a "farm system" for writers anymore. It's like you make it to the Majors or you don't. That means the writer has to develop a good game and let yourself mature as a writer. It takes time to develop the skills.




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 Thursday, September 17, 2009
Agent Advice: Lucienne Diver of The Knight Agency
Posted by Chuck

Agent Interview by
contributor Ricki Schultz.

"Agent Advice" is a series of quick interviews with literary and script agents who talk with Guide to Literary Agents about their thoughts on writing, publishing, and just about anything else.

This installment features Lucienne Diver of The Knight Agency.
Lucienne joined The Knight Agency in 2008, after spending fifteen years at Spectrum Literary Agency.  She has sold more than 600 titles to every major publisher and has built a client list of more than 40 authors spanning the commercial fiction genres.  Her authors have been honored with the RITA, National Readers' Choice Award, the Golden Heart, and the Romantic Times Reader’s Choice and have appeared on the New York Times and USA Today bestseller lists.  She is also a writer, having recently published a YA book, Vamped. See her personal website here: www.luciennediver.com.

She is looking for
: fantasy, science fiction, romance, mystery, suspense, erotica, and young adult lit.  She does not accept nonfiction. See full submission guidelines here.





Lucienne Diver


GLA
: How did you become an agent?

LD: I always knew I wanted to go into publishing, though I was also drawn to forensic anthropology and applied to graduate schools in the field as I was applying for entry level positions in the book world.  Originally, I thought I wanted to be an editor.  Until I was called in for interviews, I’d never even realized that book agents existed; I’d never really thought about it.  However, when I landed my literary assistant job at Spectrum Literary Agency over sixteen years ago, I fell in love.  As an agent, I have the freedom to “acquire” anything I fall in love with.  I don’t have to worry about the needs of a line, though I do approach my list with the idea of diversity.  (I’m an omnivore anyway, and I like to make sure that my authors complement rather than compete with each other.)

GLA: What’s the most recent thing you’ve sold? 

LD: Just today I did a deal for Japanese language rights to an erotic romance by Jasmine Haynes.  I’m also finishing up a UK deal for a young adult series by Chloe Neill that’s already sold in the US.  Shortly before that, I did deals for German, Hungarian and Polish language rights to various books in Rachel Caine’s bestselling Morganville Vampires series and sold a new urban fantasy series for her and for Faith Hunter.

GLA: What are you looking for right now and not getting?  What do you pray for when tackling the slush pile?

LD: I represent more than 40 authors, so I’m possibly not looking as actively as I used to be.  That said, though, I took on a new author just last week whose urban fantasy novel blew me away. I don’t set out looking for a particular genre or theme, really. As mentioned, I’m a voracious and omnivorous reader. I want something, anything, that will impress me and keep me reading late into the night. I love a strong voice and a really unique, well-paced plot.

GLA: You write some young adult lit (Vamped) and have represented it in the past. Do you still accept submissions in this area? 

LD: I represent all kinds of fiction—adult and young adult—though I don’t do early children’s and haven’t done middle-grade (not that I’d close that door if the right project came along).

GLA: In science fiction and fantasy, what are a few topics you feel are overdone?

LD: You know, there are some things out there in abundance, but I love them still. Characters who kick-butt and take names, vampires and shape-shifters and demons, oh my! There are few things so done that you can’t find a new angle and a fresh take on them, though it does become harder the more crowded the field.

GLA: Tell us a little bit more about your interest in romance.  Do you accept both category and single titles?  As well, are there specific subgenres you prefer over others (i.e., contemporary vs. historical romance)?

LD: I love romance. I’m not looking for a lot of category romance, but I have a couple of authors who do it very wonderfully and successfully. Mostly, I’m interested in single title.  I love suspense, paranormal and anything quirky. Books don’t need to have all three of those to catch my interest, but if none of the three are present, chances are I’m not the right agent for the work. 

GLA: Staying with romance, is there a difference between the subgenre “erotic romance” and straight-up “erotica”? If so, how does a writer know which she’s written?

LD: The difference to me is that erotic romance is primarily between a couple (or sometimes a threesome) that will have a happily ever after. At its heart, it’s the story of people finding their soulmates and exploring the connection via sex. Erotica doesn’t have to end in a committed coupling. The focus (to me, and I’m sure others’ mileage will vary) is more on the voyage of self-discovery … a character or characters learning what it is that makes him or her happy and comfortable and finding the courage to accept whatever might be revealed. It’s almost that erotica is to romantica as chick-lit is to romance.  Does that make sense?

GLA: It does.  You also seek mystery and suspense novels. How can a new writer break into this category without producing a run-of-the-mill detective story? What are some untapped subjects you feel would make for fresh and intriguing queries in these areas?

LD: Producing a “run-of-the-mill” story is the surest way not to break in. Again, what distinguishes work that sells for that which doesn’t is frequently voice, the way the tale is told. Of course, you do have to develop a strong story with red herrings, a sufficiently diabolical villain (though very definitely not in the cartoonish way) and a sense of urgency driving the plot. Aside from that, though, there are no real “musts.” Untapped subjects? Hmm….I’d love to see more psychological storylines. I’m as big a fan of psychology as I am forensics. Unless you’ve got a really new angle, I’d leave stalkers, serial killers, organized crime and terrorists behind. Whatever that leaves, there’s still room for it!

GLA: Where are new writers most commonly going wrong in the query letters you see?

LD: Ever since I started taking electronic submissions, I’ve found that many people don’t put the care into query letters that they would have in a hardcopy submission.  It’s as if they see an electronic query letter more as an e-mail than a professional introduction to their work. So I’m seeing the disturbing, “Hey, Bob, I’ve got this manuscript I think is right up your alley. Can I send it?” sort of letters. Writers should think of the query as they would a cover letter that goes along with a resume. You wouldn’t dash that off carelessly (or CC it to everyone in the field, another common mistake), so don’t do it with query letters.  Also, I see a ton of queries for material I don’t represent, like nonfiction. It’s important for writers to do their homework on agents so they don’t waste their own or the agent’s time.

GLA: How much does a writer’s platform impact whether or not you agree to represent his or her manuscript?

LD: I think platform counts a lot more in nonfiction than in fiction.  It’s wonderful, of course, to find that an author has a great starting point for promotion, but what really sells a work to me is the writing itself.

GLA: Will you be at any upcoming writers’ conferences where writers can meet and pitch you?

LD: October 17th I’ll be doing a three-hour workshop for the Gulf Coast Writers in Ft. Meyers, FL.  October 23rd through the 25th I’ll be at the Kiss of Death Writers Retreat in Albuquerque, NM and I’ll be in San Jose for the World Fantasy Convention the week after.  Then, I think, I’ll collapse from exhaustion!

GLA: Best piece(s) of advice we haven’t talked about yet?

LD: The best piece of advice I can give is: Don’t ever rush things out the door.  You know the saying, “Act in haste, repent at leisure.”  This definitely goes for rushing query letters, synopses and/or manuscripts out the door before you’ve revised and polished them to the best of your ability.  To borrow on yet another cliché, you may not get a second chance to make a first impression.


 

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 Monday, September 14, 2009
Agent Advice: Natanya Wheeler of Nancy Yost Literary
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"Agent Advice" is a series of quick interviews with literary and script agents who talk with Guide to Literary Agents about their thoughts on writing, publishing, and just about anything else.

This installment features Natanya Wheeler of the Nancy Yost Literary Agency.  Previously, Natanya was an agent at Lowenstein-Yost Associates.


She seeks: literary fiction that touches on current events or multicultural issues; family sagas; dark and edgy thrillers with a great new hook, moody mysteries and cozy mysteries.  She loves to find new writers and does not shy away from debut talent.
For nonfiction, Natanya would love to find authors with strong platforms who write in the areas of nature, especially birds, women’s issues, alternative lifestyles, green living and food.

Natanya Wheeler


GLA
: When did you first fall in love with boo
ks?

NW: Oh!  Can't remember.  Always?

GLA: How did you become an agent?

NW: I just really wanted to work with books and it seemed like a creative and fun job.  And it is!

GLA: Tell us about this move to Nancy Yost Literary

NW: We share office space with Liza Dawson Associates and the Laura Dail Literary Agency - it's a wonderfully cooperative and sunny atmosphere.

GLA: What’s the most recent thing you’ve sold? 

NW: The working title is Bingo's Run (Spiegel & Grau) by James A. Levine.  The story follows the extraordinary life of a young drug runner in a Kibera slum.

GLA: You seek genre categories – thrillers and mysteries.  The standard advice is not to query for more than one book (e.g., a trilogy, or series).  Do you agree with this personally?

NW: When an author sends me a query with a whole bunch of books listed, it feels very unfocused.  If the book is the first in a proposed series, of course I would like to know that.  But yeah, just one book at a time.

GLA: What draws you to a good thriller or mystery?  Strong protagonists?  Dark themes?  A killer hook?  All of the above? 

NW: I like some psychology with my mysteries and thrillers.  If the author gets me inside of the head of the protagonist or the antagonist, I'm definitely going to keep reading.  A killer hook is great and all, but I find myself more drawn to a conflicted protagonist trying to right some wrong. 
      I don't have many pet peeves really - it's kind of a joy reading the slush and discovering the wealth of creativity in the world.  I actually love it.  I'll admit though if a query is about a bunch of beautiful models, beautiful blondes or beautiful brunettes getting serial-killed, I'm going to stop reading.  This is one I see a lot.  Unless it's central to the plot, I kind of feel like this is a book, not a TV show, not a movie - so why not make it a little deeper?  I really do get this one a lot.  Let's not kill all the beauty in the world.

GLA: With literary fiction, do you put much stock in the query or synopsis?  Is it all about the writing in that category?

NW: It's definitely all about the writing, which is why I really prefer to get a sample of the writing.  Actually, I prefer a sample of the writing for all fiction queries.

GLA: Besides just general “good writing,” what’s something specific you’re always looking for but never getting.  What do you pray for when tackling the slush pile?

NW: I just look to be lost in the voice of the writer, no doubts, no hesitations, just completely drawn into the author's world.  I think I am finding what I'm looking for, on the whole.  I'm really looking for unique and standout voices in fiction - and by definition, that's not going to be an everyday occurrence in the slush.  Would I love to find more?  Yes!  That's why I keep reading.

GLA: When we crossed paths at a conference last year, you told everyone that you enjoyed birdwatching.  Are you on the lookout for books in this subject area?

NW: I would love to find a book about vultures a la John McPhee.  To me, it seems like a fascinating subject.  Vultures have a lot of historical and cultural significance from ancient society to the present.  Some cultures view the bird as a charm, while others revile it.  Does it all go back to how that culture deals with death?  Plus they have some fascinating, albeit kind of gross, science.  Vultures!

GLA: There have been a lot of “green living” books in the past few years – and there’s always a decent number of food books.  How does a submission catch your eye in these areas?  Is it as simple as a good platform and the ability to sell books?  Or maybe a fresh take on an old subject?  Something you’ve never seen before?

NW: With food books, I'd say something I've never seen before and absolutely top notch writing.  For green living, it's definitely about the platform and ability to sell books.  I think you're right - there have been tons of green living books and we might be reaching market saturation in that area.

GLA: If you were teaching a class on nonfiction writing & submitting, what is the first thing you wish every author would be educated about? 

NW: Learn how to write  a nonfiction proposal. It makes my job so much easier!

GLA: How do you like to be contacted by writers seeking representation?

NW: Please visit our websitewhere you can find submission guidelines.  My e-mail is on there, so feel free to query me through e-mail.  However, I have found that I tend to respond better to paper submissions.  Just a personal preference.

GLA: Will you be at any upcoming writers’ conferences where writers can meet/pitch you?

NW: I'll be at the SoCal Writer's Conference San Diego in February.

GLA: What’s something surprising writers would be interested to hear about you, apart from your ornithology interests?

NW: I once rode my bicycle across the U.S., not perfectly dipping a toe in each ocean, but close.  I also rode my bike from Paris to Barcelona, in a zigzag like fashion.  Fun!  Even with all that, riding a bicycle in Manhattan scares me - a lot.

GLA: Best piece(s) of advice we haven’t discussed?

NW: Oh, this is going to sound flaky, but listen to your inner voice.  Don't write for the market or what trends may say the market is.  Write a book that challenges and satisfies you.
      
Also, don't quit your day job.  Not just yet.  Establishing a writing career is a process, not a one-shot deal.  There's a fine line between realistic expectations and cynicism.  So let's all quit the cynicism because what is cynicism but intellectual laziness?  Publishing is not dead!  It's just having a few growing pains.
      
Which is to say - you have time!  I love books.  You love books.  Lots of people love books.  It's all going to be okay.  Oh, and the last piece of advice is that you should always do what your agent tells you to do.

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 Monday, September 07, 2009
Agent Advice: Emily Forland of The Wendy Weil Agency
Posted by Chuck

Agent Interview by
contributor Ricki Schultz.

"Agent Advice" is a series of quick interviews with literary and script agents who talk with Guide to Literary Agents about their thoughts on writing, publishing, and just about anything else.

This installment features Emily Forland of The Wendy Weil Agency, Inc. Emily is in her twelfth year at The Wendy Weil Agency, Inc. In addition to representing her own list of authors, she also handles the agency's foreign rights. Originally from Texas, she has a B.A. in English from the University of Chicago, an MFA in Poetry from Sarah Lawrence College, and an MFA in Graphic Design from the School of Visual Arts in New York.

She seeks: The Wendy Weil Agency, Inc. represents fiction and nonfiction for the trade market. We work with literary and commercial fiction, mystery/thriller, memoir, narrative nonfiction, journalism, history, current affairs, books on health, science, popular culture, lifestyle, and art history. We do not handle screenplays or textbooks. See full submission guidelines here.



Emily Forland


GLA
: How did you become an agent?

EF: By accident.  I needed a summer job after my first MFA year at Sarah Lawrence College. I met Wendy Weil and became an intern, which means I spent a summer reading manuscripts at the agency, answering the phone, and dragging packages to the mail truck. This was just after Wendy had been profiled in Poets & Writers sounding like herself, an approachable agent who champions writers. This resulted in a huge flood of submissions and it was my job to go through those manuscripts. Out of that unwieldy stack, I hit upon one that stood out, and that became an Oprah Pick, Mother of Pearl by Melinda Haynes.  It was tremendously exciting to watch that happen. I got hooked. It was supposed to be a summer job, but it is 12 years later, and I am still here. 
      I like writers, and I like working with writers. I think having a bit of a writing background makes me empathize with the vulnerability of writers and what they go through in putting their work out into the world.
      Also, lunch is a nice thing.

GLA: What’s the most recent thing you’ve sold? 

EF: In fiction, a transfixing debut called Stiltsville by Iowa MFA grad Susanna Daniel. A love song to Miami, this episodic novel follows the life of a marriage, starting in the 1960s and ending in the 90s. It will be published by Jennifer Barth at HarperCollins next summer.
      Nonfiction: Playwrights at Work, by Rosemarie Tichler and Barry Jay Kaplan, a lively collection of interviews with great American playwrights of the day, to Northwestern University Press.

GLA: What are you looking for right now and not getting?  What do you pray for when tackling the slush pile?

EF: I’m looking for a distinctive voice. That can mean a lot of things, but I look at every submission wanting to be gobsmacked on the first page (and those that follow!) by original, compelling, well-crafted sentences.  I like character-driven stories. Humor helps, though it isn’t a requirement.

GLA: Within commercial fiction, can you tell us about two or three manuscripts you recently agreed to represent and what grabbed you about each to the point where you knew you had to represent them?

EF: I guess I tend to be most interested in commercial fiction with literary qualities.
      I took on a novel that made me laugh out loud on pretty much every page, at the same time that every sentence is so polished as to almost be some kind of perfect haiku. The structure is idiosyncratic, and the subject is an extremely timely take on the spiritual estrangement of contemporary culture. I was wowed by the writer’s originality and craft.
      One novel is set on a hardscrabble subsistence farm in the Australian outback during World War II, beautifully and slyly told in the salty first person narration of the main character, a farmwife named Gin Toad.  It is extremely accomplished.
      Another novel follows an immigrant Russian family with three daughters of marriageable age.  The writer’s approach is playful and original.  She pokes fun at her characters, but she handles them with real affection. The dialogue is fizzy and hilarious. That dialogue got me. It jumps off the page. 

GLA: Specifically within the thriller genre, do you prefer any particular subgenres, such as legal, psychological, or supernatural thrillers, etc.? 

EF: I like a psychological novel. I have a knee-jerk reaction against the fantastical and supernatural (my own limitation) that I can get past when the story is grounded in strong writing. 

GLA: Where do you notice most nonfiction book proposals fall short?

EF: Voice again.  I want a proposal to be thorough, meticulously researched, well-organized, etc., but it also needs to be a compelling argument for the subsidized existence of this particular book. And the most convincing way for an author to demonstrate that is by being good company on the page.  Also, there is that whole thing about platform (groan).

GLA: One area of nonfiction you seek is journalism.  With the Internet pushing us toward an increasingly paperless society, many see the world of journalism as changing.  Do you think printed newspapers and magazines will be obsolete one day?  What should a journalism proposal look like in order to stay current with the times as well as catch your attention?

EF: I like paper and the tactile nature of books and magazines and newsprint.  That said, I do read most of my news online. It is hard to deny that the magazine and newspaper business is heading that way.  Ultimately, though, I suppose the story is what’s important and the medium of delivery is secondary.
      Because of the way a publishing timeline usually works, a journalism book proposal should anticipate where the news is going and what we’ll be interested in a couple of years.  The writer needs a solid platform, an area of expertise, to have done the research, and to convey it in a lively manner that convinces me I’m interested in a subject I didn’t necessarily previously know I wanted to read about. I once heard a nonfiction editor say that a journalistic book should either be the first book on a subject, or the last (definitive) book on a subject.

GLA: Is there a particular angle to explore or avenue to attempt for writers without celebrity status who wish to break into memoir?

EF: It depends on what you mean by ordinary people. If you mean a non-celebrity, yes definitely. But if you mean a common experience written in unextraordinary prose, probably not. What makes a successful memoir is a distinctive story, or else a distinctive take on a common life experience, combined with highly readable prose.  And I’ve found that you really need both. Both the story and the voice. It doesn’t work when you have just half.
      An example of a memoir that really worked is Jennifer Traig’s Devil in the Details (Little Brown). It tells about the author’s girlhood as an obsessive-compulsive religious fanatic.  Books had been written about OCD, but at that time nobody had written about the disorder called scrupulosity. And Jenny’s writing is sympathetic, smart, and FUNNY. She has the distance on this period in her life to render it an insightful and very enjoyable reading experience.  
      Another was Margaret Sartor’s Miss American Pie (Bloomsbury), which, through compelling, moving, and sometimes unintentionally humorous diary excerpts, traces the author’s evolving girlhood, which was rife with romantic, identity, and spiritual crises in 1970s Louisiana. The authenticity of her voice crackles on the page.

GLA: Would you say your MFA in Graphic Design influences your acceptance of art pieces?  For example, are you more interested in graphic design books?  As well, what topics are you drawn to most in this category?  Least?

EF: I am a visual person with an affinity for visual texts (art and design books, picture books, graphic novels, etc.) but have represented very few. Art books can be expensive to produce and challenging to get published, but I am always open to being wowed by a project.

GLA: Best piece(s) of advice we haven’t talked about yet?

EF: In terms of submitting material, we always talk about the importance of writers putting their best foot (feet?) forward.  Because we’re all (editors and agents) inundated with reading, we don’t usually have time to see potential in work and nurture it until it becomes a polished finished piece (which isn’t to say that there isn’t some editing, and there are always exceptions). It is always a good idea for writers to ask another trusted reader to take a look before sending out their materials. It is to authors’ advantage to make sure their work is far along when it is goes out into the world for consideration.
      
In terms of writing, I once heard Tony Hillerman give a talk at the Taos Writers Conference and he spoke about how each person is the world’s expert on their own life experience (whether it be following the crime beat as a news reporter in the Southwest, or something else). He talked about the breakthrough in his own writing when he decided to mine the territory in which he was the world’s smartest.  I guess that’s not new advice, but I thought it was a good way of thinking about it.



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 Wednesday, September 02, 2009
Agent Advice: Joe Monti of Barry Goldblatt Literary (Part II)
Posted by Chuck

Agent Interview by
contributor Ricki Schultz.

"Agent Advice" is a series of quick interviews with literary and script agents who talk with Guide to Literary Agents about their thoughts on writing, publishing, and just about anything else.

This installment is part II of II, and features Joe Monti of Barry Goldblatt Literary. Joe has been in the business for more than twenty years. He started as a bookseller, became the children's fiction buyer at Barnes & Noble, worked at Houghton Mifflin, and recently at Little, Brown Books for Young Readers as their editorial director of Paperbacks. 

He seeks: children's and young adult and takes a special interest in multicultural and boy-centric books. As well, he represents graphic novels, picture books, and some adult genre fiction, with particular regard to fantasy and science fiction.

Joe Monti

GLA: Do you notice any trends in what you tend to represent?  Subgenres or elements that particularly sucker you into accepting them?

JM: There’s a lot of paranormal or urban fantasy out there—too much that’s not innovative or challenging to the reader to either transport or help to lift the veil of possibility in the mundane world we live in. I’ve been a reader and fan of this sort of fiction for decades now, and you really need to stand out to impress me. Fortunately, I’ve found some. I am a sucker for that well-done magical realist and urban fantasy novel because it just opens up the world of possibility.
      And then there’s the middle grade novel aimed at a male reader. As I mentioned above, I’m desperately looking for books that would attract that kind of reader, but the male coming of age experience is one I hope to help bring to light more often. (In fact, give me a searching for a father figure themed novel, and I’m yours.)

GLA: Tell us a little bit more about your interest in graphic novels and picture books.

JM: Picture books can be difficult. Right now I’m only looking to represent writer/artists. It’s not any easy market to break into, and then succeed within, and I feel that being able to represent a whole package to an editor makes for a stronger proposal and opportunity for acquisition. That said, I think the picture book market is secretly more vibrant than it seems at first glance, and that makes the possibility of a new artist succeeding more possible than not. But here, it’s the smart picture book, like Jon J. Muth’s, that I think tends to rise to the top most often, from obscurity.
      The same actually goes for graphic novels, or more accurately, sequential artists and cartoonists. Although I am far more open to representing a writer who does not illustrate his graphic novels, I’m particularly interested in writer/artists. One client, Mike Cavallaro, who was nominated for an Eisner for his Parade (With Fireworks) has done illustrations only in addition to his own work. (His forthcoming YA urban fantasy graphic novel, Foiled, written by incomparable Jane Yolen is an example.) Then there’s Charles Vess, who has done all of the above and more.
      And I am very excited about the changes in the graphic novel world, the expansion of it to a general readership through the bookstores, and then particularly in children’s literature. While YA graphic novels are still in their infancy, largely because some of the range of topics that are explored, and explored so well in fiction, when illustrated raises the target audience to an adult section placement. I think several publishers, like First Second and Henry Holt, are publishing smart works for the YA category. Paul Pope’s forthcoming THB is dream come true! 
      And then for the younger reader there have been some tremendous successes, the best of course being Jeff Smith’s Bone series. But I’m very interested in finding writer/artists who can create for a six- to 10-year-old readership as I think the demand is there; but the supply is scant, so it’s hard to see it.

GLA: You represent some adult genre fiction as well.  Can you be a bit more specific about what you’re looking for (or not looking for) here?

JM: Right now I’m mostly looking for genre writers of fantasy and science fiction. Specifically, in the genre world, I’m looking for challenging works that do not tread on the same ground the genre has gone through the past few decades. In many ways, I think the adult fantasy and science fiction world has lost some of its vibrancy and innovative hubris. There’s been a lot of self-reverential works out the last decade or so, but the opportunity and demand for fresh works is rewarded when they arise.  I’m tempted to give a list of some favorite writers here from Bradbury, de Lint, Beagle, Sturgeon, Le Guin, Herbert, and Zelazny to Buckell, Bacigalupi, Stephenson, Blaylock and Gibson, but then I’d only scratch the surface.

GLA: Name three things that make you stop reading every time they crop up in a manuscript.

JM: Not following our submission guidelines.
      Reading a cliché within the first paragraph. (They usually crop up within three sentences.)
      Poor dialogue.

GLA: What is the number one mistake you see in queries?

JM: "I see you represent Author X, my book is just like/similar to Author X’s, so I know you’ll love it."

GLA: Will you be at any upcoming writers’ conferences where writers can meet and pitch you?

JM: I will be attending the Rutger’s One-On-One Plus Conference in October 2009; others are slated for later in 2010.

GLA: Best piece(s) of advice we haven’t talked about yet?

JM: Don’t hold back from your passion. Too many folks get caught up in what the marketplace is supposedly looking for, and they lose sight of what they’re trying to write. That and read your drafts (Note the plural usage!) aloud for imperfections of language and cadence. It’s an old horse, but not done enough because it may take you days to finish—but the results are astounding.

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 Sunday, August 30, 2009
Agent Advice: Joe Monti of Barry Goldblatt Literary (Part I)
Posted by Chuck

Agent Interview by
contributor Ricki Schultz.

"Agent Advice" is a series of quick interviews with literary and script agents who talk with Guide to Literary Agents about their thoughts on writing, publishing, and just about anything else.

This installment is part I of II, and features Joe Monti of Barry Goldblatt Literary. Joe has been in the business for more than twenty years. He started as a bookseller, became the children's fiction buyer at Barnes & Noble, worked at Houghton Mifflin, and recently at Little, Brown Books for Young Readers as their editorial director of Paperbacks. 

He seeks: children's and young adult and takes a special interest in multicultural and boy-centric books. As well, he represents graphic novels, picture books, and some adult genre fiction, with particular regard to fantasy and science fiction.

Joe Monti

GLA: How did you become an agent?

JM: I wanted to marry the unique retail experiences I acquired as a children’s fiction buyer at Barnes and Noble along with my publishing experiences in sales and editorial in a creative way that would also let me utilize my skills in advocacy for my clients.

GLA: What’s the most recent thing you’ve sold? 

JM: Eisner and World Fantasy award winner Charles Vess’s next picture book, written by Neil Gaiman, titled Instructions, coming late Spring 2010 from HarperCollins Children’s Books. Bits on the creation of the book can be seen here.

GLA: What are you looking for right now and not getting?  What do you pray for when tackling the slush pile?

JM: Non-genre middle grade fiction, because as much as I love genre fiction, with a fierce passion, there is nothing finer to me than reading a middle grade novel that can accomplish so much, so elegantly, and with minimal word choice. I like to cite Jerry Spinelli’s Loser as my example of this. At the end of the novel, there’s a snowstorm, and the not-as-whimsical-as-he-was protagonist dives outside into it to help a friend. His parents follow suit. On one level, it reads like a desperate search through a blizzard; on another, deeper level, that perhaps only a sophisticated or adult reader can appreciate, Spinelli is plotting out a discourse on the meaning of loss. What is lost? What does it mean to be lost? And how do you know you truly are? And what then signifies you as a loser? Brilliant. 
      Another deep interest is YA science fiction aimed at a male readership. I’m a big believer that the going wisdom that boys of a certain age do not read is utterly wrong. I do believe that we lose a lot of boy readers after a certain age because there isn’t a lot for them to read, nor to easily designate as potential reads, after the ages of 11-13. When I was at B&N, I was fortunate enough to be in the position as a children’s fiction buyer when everything was changing, and thus be a part of it. In YA, while I think Burgess’s Smack, followed by Anderson’s Speak were the two biggest initial, critical successes, Von Ziegesar's Gossip Girl series deserves equal time as a herald, as it proved to publishers that there was a large female readership here and that they should publish towards it. 
      In other words, GG was the gateway fiction the YA category needed to jumpstart it. I feel that smart, high-action science fiction (and action thrillers) will help to do the same for male readers. YA had Paolini, while the books became a phenomenon; oddly not many have tried to write more action-driven fantasy for boys. Give me some smart military science fiction for teen boys and you’ll see that readership start to pick up writers like John Green and Barry Lyga. Then, the category will get even more interesting. So I’m also talking to adult science fiction writers who have shown an interest or a particular appropriate voice in their works to write a YA novel.  Whether I represent them or not, I think it’ll be good for the industry as a whole. Doctorow’s Little Brother, which I loved with an intense passion, is a great example.
      Then, there’s another old flame: Steampunk. So, a lot of what I’ve seen is pseudo-steampunk: Quasi Victorian or Edwardian era fiction with some absurdist machinery. What Steampunk really was, and can be, is a rebellion against the mores of society, largely through the utilization of science and education. The rebellion, hence the punk aesthetic, is largely lost in the brass bolt tech or Victorian-ish era setting. I’m looking to put the punk back in steampunk and I hope I get such a manuscript across my desk because the era is such a wonderful mirror to our modern times in many ways. Except for the equality of race. But a good modern steampunk novel should address that as well as have some kick-butt action and tech. A lot is riding on Scott Westerfeld’s forthcoming Leviathan series to help break this subgenre out. But Scott’s got the talent to make it happen, so we may see more of it.

GLA: Why did you choose juvenile literature as your primary area of interest?  What is it that draws you to this category?

JM: Honestly, I was lucky. Like many in our field, I fell into it, and within three months of reading it intensely, I was in love and never looked back. In large part, I believe it’s because I can relate to the literature at a deep level. Take my love of middle grade: I had a traumatic experience at the age of nine when I had open-heart surgery. Back then, it was a life or death thing, and they waited to perform the surgery until I was just old enough to survive it.  I quickly became the introspective, chubby nine-year-old that enjoyed talking to adults cliché and had a sense of mortality and a level of empathy beyond my years. So when I read books like Because of Winn-Dixie, I not only know that girl, Opal, I also wish I had her story to help me understand what I was going through at that age. Thus, getting behind a book like that is not just a personal advocacy, but also a need to share it in a social sense to pay it forward. Children’s and YA fiction has the ability to transform a reader, and a bookseller, far more than any other category.

GLA: Cultural diversity also interests you.  What subjects are you tired of seeing in this area?  As well, are there any subjects you feel are untapped and would, therefore, be a refreshing change from the typical multicultural story?

JM: As our president famously said, I’m a mutt. My parents both immigrated here, my mother from Argentina (and her mother a full-blooded Quichua), and my dad from Italy. My wife, also a child of immigrants, is Chinese-American, and our son is all these things and more. So there’s our family history that colors so much of how I perceive the world, as a lens, not a filter. 
      When I was a buyer, I was tired of certain subject matters only because those subjects have been explored so well, so often, that you really needed to bring something special to the page to make anyone take notice. The Book Thief is a recent example of a Holocaust story done so well that it transcends and sits alongside some of the other great WWII works. Send me a story about some modern immigrant stories, some multi-generational stuff, like the forthcoming (in the US) YA novels of Carlos Ruiz Zafon. There are deeply rich stories about being an outsider, and yet how assimilation means a compromise and loss. I’d also love to see more issues of race discussed in modern terms, where there is the melting pot happening across the US, yet the tensions are still there, like the fear of the other. I think these stories, when done well, are universal stories, as we all feel that way at some point. Look at Junot Diaz's The Brief Wondrous Life of Oscar Wao as exhibit A.

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 Friday, August 28, 2009
Agent Advice: Amberly Finarelli of Andrea Hurst Literary Management
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"Agent Advice" is a series of quick interviews with literary and script agents who talk with Guide to Literary Agents about their thoughts on writing, publishing, and just about anything else.

This installment features Amberly Finarelli of Andrea Hurst Literary Management.

She is seeking: Her nonfiction areas of interest: Humor/gift books, Crafts, How-to (financial, house and home, health and beauty, weddings), Relationships/advice, Self-help, psychology, Travel writing, Narrative Nonfiction. Her fiction areas of interest: Commercial women's fiction, Comic and cozy mysteries, Literary fiction with a focus on the arts, culture, and/or history.  She is NOT looking for: True crime, Thrillers, Science fiction, Children's, Fantasy, or Young Adult.

GLA: How did you become an agent?

AF: After finishing my degree in English with a concentration in professional writing, I worked for a small press in Sacramento, CA, where I came in contact with Andrea Hurst and worked my way from assistant agent to agent.

GLA: What's the most recent thing youve sold?

AF: One of my favorites is Imagine Life with a Well-Behaved Dog (St. Martin's Press, by Julie A. Bjelland).
      W
e've also been packaging for the Complete Idiot's Guide series.

GLA: You seek mysteries but not thrillers. What draws you to the mystery genre?

AF: Perhaps it's just the fact that I grew up in a small town, but I love the intimate, slow-paced lifestyle that is found in both small town life and cozy mysteries. Something in the idea that these protagonists could be my next door neighbor just sucks me in.

GLA: You're also seeking comic mysteries. Could you help define this category? Are there some examples people should read?

AF: Loosely, a comic mystery is simply a mystery with humorous elements. Janet Evanovich's Stephanie Plum series and our own Presley Parker Party-Planning mysteries by Penny Warner are good examples.

GLA: What are you looking for right now and not getting? What do you pray for when tackling the slush pile?

AF: I am looking for fiction in any of the areas I represent, really whose voice just utterly blows me away. Maybe it's the sheer amount of submissions I read per week, but it can be difficult to find that powerful voice combined with a unique storyline that makes me shove the other manuscripts aside and succumb to the power of the narrative. Developing voice is a lifelong process, and a very slippery one at that, but as long as writers are aware of what voice is and can identify what makes their own writing voice unique, it can' t help but be evident in their writing.

GLA: I know that AHLA now has five agents. If a writer sends you a promising query outside your specific areas of interest, will you pass it along to another agent?

AF: I generally will, because I like to connect great authors with great agents, but I would caution writers against depending on this too much. Make sure you do your research, check out our site to see what areas we each represent, what books we like, and then pitch us. We will appreciate the leg work you've done, and you'll appreciate the faster response!

GLA: We met at the Reno Writers Conference. You likely took a lot of pitches that day. When writers sit down to pitch you in person, what are they doing wrong?

AF: For me, it mostly comes down to preparedness. In my experience, writers can be overprepared, where they have a pitch that they've obviously memorized, and they become very nervous if they stray from it. In most cases, these pitches end up sounding monotonous, like a customer service recording rather than a human being talking about their human story. Writers pitching me can also be underprepared, talking too long about the overall storyline of their book instead of focusing on key points and characters, and saying too little about their writing experience and commitment to writing. Remember that it's like an interviewcome prepared, but don't forget the human element.

GLA: Speaking of conferences, will you be at any upcoming writers' conferences where people can meet and pitch you?

AF: With our new agent additions to our team, we're currently working out our conference schedule for next year, but be sure to check out our web site for conference schedule updates.

GLA: Lets talk about women's fiction, for a moment. Lets say the query is intriguing and you request a partial. When you start to read women's fiction partials, where do you see writers going wrong?

AF: Because the genre is so inundated, if I feel like it's like something I've read before, I stop reading. In light women's fiction, this often happens when a book starts out like a real workday: the protagonist is late, rushing to the office (usually in some writing/publishing related field), chewing an apple and putting her heels on at the same time. Then we meet her best friend/co-worker then there's the demanding boss and finally the dreamy co-worker love interest. And don't even get her started on dieting and her parents coming into town. 
      
In serious women's fiction, because it usually deals with more serious aspects of life, if I feel like the writing is melodramatic or heavy-handed, I'll stop.

GLA: You also rep some nonfiction areas. If you met a writer and suggested that they build their platform, only for them to ask "How do I do that?" - what would you say?

AF: That's a common question! Thankfully, there is a lot of information on the subject, but some basics: Have a web site. Internet presence is imperative in todays market. Start a blog, Twitter account, or e-newsletter - something that builds your Internet base. Also, continue to nurture and grow your client base in your professional field, as these will be the most obvious people to purchase your book. Generally, were hoping that this platform is built up before authors approach us.

GLA: What is something about yourself writers would be surprised to know?

AF: I'm a sucker for a really good caf mocha.

GLA: When writers first contact you, what do you want them to send and how?

AF: Unless weve spoken or written previously and I've requested something more specific, an airtight, professional e-mailed query is the best way to get my attention.

GLA: Best piece(s) of advice we havent discussed?

AF: I think my colleagues at AHA could attest to the fact that weve seen an increase in unconventional query letters. Unconventionality in itself isn't a bad thing, and can sometimes work at getting my attention, but please be aware that the conventions in query writing help both the agent and you. Dont begin queries with "I know this isn't a real query, but I wouldnt be surprised if you just deleted this on sight." Wow us first with your professionalism and unique story, and then with your unique creative prowess in your book.


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 Monday, August 24, 2009
Agent Advice: Diane Freed of FinePrint Literary Management
Posted by Chuck

Agent Interview by
Contributor Ricki Schultz

"Agent Advice" is a series of quick interviews with literary and script agents who talk with Guide to Literary Agents about their thoughts on writing, publishing, and just about anything else.

This installment features Diane Freed of FinePrint Literary Management in Manhattan. Diane has been in the book publishing field her entire career, and with FinePrint since 2006. She owned and managed an independent publishing services company, edited reference books for U.S. News & World Report, and has coordinated book promotional campaigns for Time-Life Books.

She is seeking: Diane is looking for nonfiction projects in the categories of advice/relationships, spirituality, inspiration, health/fitness, memoir, narrative nonfiction, popular culture, lifestyle, women’s issues, the environment, and humor.  Her fiction interests generally are commercial and literary fiction, including women’s commercial fiction. Diane accepts e-mail submissions only. See full fiction submission guidelines here and full nonfiction submission guidelines here

Diane Freed


GLA
: How did you become an agent? 

DF: I’ve always loved how reading a book can transport you, so this sparked my fascination with books as a kid. Each submission, fiction or nonfiction, is in some way a new idea, and it’s satisfying to be part of getting new ideas into the marketplace. Day to day, I like the process of working with an author to help develop and organize a manuscript and/or proposal. In turn, I value the relationships that develop with my authors. For 15 years, I worked in publishing houses (Time-Life Books, U.S. News & World Report Books, Prentice-Hall, Addison-Wesley) in editorial and production positions. Then I owned and managed my own full-service book packaging company for 10+ years. In each capacity, and now as an agent, I’ve enjoyed bringing books to fruition.

GLA: What’s the most recent thing you’ve sold?

DF: My most recent sale isn’t typical of what’s on my list, but I’m really excited about it. It’s Sammy in the Sky, a children’s picture book, to be published in late 2010 by Candlewick Press. It’s a touching and uplifting story about the death of a family’s pet dog. On a whim, author Barbara Walsh called Jamie Wyeth—knowing the Wyeths are a family of dog lovers—and asked Jamie if he’d read her story and consider illustrating it. He loved it and, to her amazement, agreed! He’s working on the sketches now.

GLA: What are you looking for right now and not getting?  What do you pray for when tackling the slush pile?

DF: I’m looking for a fiction submission that knocks my socks off—I start reading and then put everything aside because I’m so excited about the writing! I’m open to all kinds of commercial fiction and commercial women’s fiction, but am especially taken by character-driven stories that explore relationships between people and ultimately give the reader insight into his or her life in some way.

GLA: One of your areas of interest is memoir. Given your experience, is there a particular angle to explore or avenue to attempt for an ordinary person to break into memoir?

DF: Memoir is a tough sell because readers apparently love celebrity stories, either written by the celebrity or by someone who knows a celebrity well. Otherwise, editors want memoirs by people who have lived in the extreme in some way (as in waaay out there). I do get these, but they have to be jaw droppers and well-written, and all too often submissions don’t meet both criteria.  For a regular guy to break into memoir, it would help if the story fits nicely into the current cultural or political climate. As one example, we’ve been hearing lately about hidden alcoholism among mothers of young children, and I have a submission from a mom who tells just this story about herself and her play group friends. I perk up when someone’s story matches the zeitgeist.

GLA: You also seek “baby boomer trends.”  To give writers a better sense of where to start, can you be more specific about what qualifies as a baby boomer trend?  Also, are books in this category best left to writers who are baby boomers themselves?

DF: I suppose the word “interest” is a better word to use than “trend.” Boomer interests would include their concerns about how they’ll leave their “legacy” in some way now that they’re in their 50s and 60s; being caregivers to their parents while still raising their own children; unique ways that they are dealing with retirement (or lack of it) in this economy; women, and men too, coming into their own after years of raising children. Just about all of the baby boomer stories I consider are written by boomers themselves. Stories written by boomers and for boomers have particular appeal—they’ve all been there, or are heading there, in some way.

GLA: At the next month's Writer's Digest Conference, you will be on a panel discussing self-publishing and mainstream publishing. Other than impressive book sales, what are a few things in the query of a previously self-published book that might gain your interest in representing it?

DF: Such things as: The book won a contest. The first book I sold that was originally published as a POD book, Bufflehead Sisters by Patricia DeLois, was notable because the story won a contest through a writers’ website. The author’s “prize” was the site sponsor publishing it as a POD book. She was also out giving readings in the New England area, so I was impressed that she was out promoting it.
      The author must have lots of energy and passion for the book. I recently sold two book journals, originally self-published, to Sourcebooks: Read, Remember, Recommend (adult version, teen version) by Rachelle Rogers Knight. The author researched, designed, typeset, and had them printed (in China); they were striking in content and design. I almost passed on them, but the author was persistent and sent me the books so I could see for myself. She won me over.
      The book must appeal to a wide audience. Many people self-publish a book because they want their family story in print, which is just fine, but for a commercial publisher to consider it, the book has to speak to an audience beyond immediate family and friends. The same goes for self-published books with only regional appeal; some are only of interest to readers who live in or are familiar with the geographic setting of the story.

GLA: What is the number one problem you see with queries that come across your desk on a daily basis?

DF: For fiction, some writers don’t check our agency website to see that we want a synopsis and the first couple of chapters in the body of the e-mail. For nonfiction—and I’m seeing more and more of this—some writers don’t prepare a proposal to accompany their sample chapters or manuscript. A proposal is part of a nonfiction package; it shows that the writer has done his or her research on the project and is a tool for the agent in making her decision. And with memoir, the story should be complete and have a proposal before querying.

GLA: Concerning another area of interest for you, adult nonfiction, what are three topics you would classify as overdone in this subject?

DF: Depressing misery lit; memoirs comparing themselves to Eat, Pray, Love; and diets to end all other diets.

GLA: Will you be at any upcoming writers’ conferences where writers can meet and pitch you?

DF: Other than next month’s Writer’s Digest “Business of Publishing” conference, and I’ll be at the Maine Writers & Publishers Alliance pitch session this winter. These sessions are fun and worthwhile; it’s great to meet new writers one-on-one. But e-mail submissions do the job, too; after all, it’s a writer’s story that begins the relationship between author and agent.

GLA: Best piece(s) of advice we haven’t talked about yet?

DF: Know how to write a winning query letter. Face it—this is your ticket in the door. Too many writers don’t realize the importance of presenting themselves as professionals. In the query, you’re presenting not only your writing, but yourself as a potential client as well. The agent wants to get the impression that you’d be a reasonable, mature person to work with. Also, in your query, be sure to explain who your audience is and why you’re the best person to write this book.



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 Wednesday, August 19, 2009
Agent Advice: Ward Calhoun of FinePrint Literary Management
Posted by Chuck

Agent Interview by
Contributor Ricki Schultz


"Agent Advice"
is a series of quick interviews with literary and script agents who talk with Guide to Literary Agents about their thoughts on writing, publishing, and just about anything else.

This installment features Ward Calhoun of FinePrint Literary Management in Manhattan. Ward has helped develop several best-selling humor titles, has both written and edited several books for Sports Illustrated, and has overseen the production of titles ranging from science to entertainment. Most recently, at Hylas Publishing, his projects included books on music, fitness, and history.  During his time there, he also managed to write a book or two, including The Llama Sutra (2006) and Must-See Movies (2008). 

He is seeking: He’s currently looking for nonfiction titles in the areas of: sports, humor, and pop culture. See full submission guidelines here.

Ward Calhoun


GLA
: How did you become an agent?

WC: After hitting most of the stops along the editing line—assistant editor, associate editor, project editor, managing editor, senior editor—I think I was done with editing, and it was done with me.  My first job in publishing was at John Boswell Associates, which was a literary agency/book packager.  I really enjoyed that development side of the business.  The idea of dealing directly with writers and helping build something from the ground up is one that has always appealed to me.  So, in a way, this move brings my publishing career full circle.  Also (FinePrint President) Stephany Evans threatened to have my legs broken if I said “no.”  She can be very persuasive that way.

GLA: What are you looking for right now and not getting?  What do you pray for when tackling the slush pile?

WC: I’d love to see some more humor.  Just about every week, I receive three or four web-based bits of goofiness from friends.  Not all of these sites translate into books, but some of them surely do.  Another area I’d like to explore is simple gift books that go after particular niches, such as first-time dads or surfing dogs or alcoholic golfers.  The only thing I pray for when tackling the slush pile is more time.  There are just too many snap decisions to make.

GLA: Can you tell us something that will make you stop reading every time it crops up in a book proposal?

WC: I’m not a fan of the rambling mad scientist types who can write a 10-page sentence on how they’ve devised a formula to turn sea water into gasoline.

GLA: To you, what is essential to a promising book proposal?

WC: In some way, it really has to be entertaining.  I mean, no one wants a proposal that reads like a textbook, even if the book you’re trying to sell is a textbook.  If you’re pitching a humor project, make sure your proposal is in some way funny.  If you’ve got a book on a disgraced college football coach, don’t dwell on his first job in Pop Warner football.  Get right to the moment he started unraveling.  In the end, people want to be entertained when they read, and proposals are no different than the books themselves.

GLA: How much does a writer’s platform impact whether or not you agree to represent his or her manuscript?

WC: Let’s just say, it doesn’t hurt.  Look, if a particular book concept catches my interest, I am not going to turn my back on it because the person doesn’t have his or her own blog.  However, if I am on the fence and the author does appear to have an impressive background, it may be the thing that sways me to take a shot.

GLA: You represent pop culture projects.  In your mind, what defines this subject?

WC: Uh oh.  Someone once asked me this question during a job interview, and I proceeded to ramble on for around a half hour on everything from Quisp cereal to why Taxi was one of the five greatest television sitcoms of all time.  Needless to say, I didn’t get the job.  If I were to take another crack at defining pop culture, I would say it is the non-biodegradable stuff (both experiences and tangible artifacts) that sticks in our collective consciousness both as Americans and, in many instances, as a global community.  Sure, we’re all very different.  But go and recite a line from Caddyshack in a bar or make a bold statement about who makes the best hot dogs, and watch complete strangers line up to put in their two cents.

GLA: Staying with pop culture, can you give some examples of books you’ve repped in this area so writers can get a sense of your tastes in pop culture work?

WC: At my first job, we created an instant book during the O.J. Simpson trial called O.J.’s Legal Pad, which I thought was a brilliant idea.  Henry Beard, John Boswell, and Ron Barrett took this circus trial phenomenon and banged out a very funny book in record time.  But, not all pop culture projects have to be done on the spot.  I love reference guides like Alex McNeil’s Total Television as well as books that dissect aspects of popular culture itself.

GLA: We have not discussed humor projects much in previous agent interviews.  Can you tell us a little bit about what grabs you in this category?

WC: My guess is the reason it hasn’t been discussed very much is that what most people, including myself, are looking for is originality.  For instance, I thought Don Novello’s The Lazlo Letters (1977) was hilarious and inspired.  So when Jerry Seinfeld’s incredibly similar Letters from a Nut came out in 2001, I was considerably less impressed.  Not that I wouldn’t have jumped at the chance to rep Jerry Seinfeld.  I’m not that crazy.  But, I just feel if you’re going to use an existing idea as inspiration, do something different with it.  The Worst-Case Scenario Survival Handbook was both clever and funny, and when Max Brooks came out with The Zombie Survival Guide, it was very funny, too, but in its own right.

GLA: You also seek sports-related books.  Can this be anything?  Coaching?  Memoir?  Weird statistics?  Anything?

WC: Just about anything.  There are subjects that don’t interest me as much, such as fishing, auto racing, and figure skating, but you never know.  Oh, wait, I got one. This is probably a mistake on my part, but I’m really not interested in seeing any books on ultimate fighting or mixed martial arts.  I don’t mean to offend anyone; this is just a personal preference.

GLA: What are three topics you would classify as overdone in sports-related books?

WC: The first thing that comes to mind are the proposals you get after a major sports team wins a championship.  It’s one thing if a coach or player wants to write an account of that magical season, but you also get all sorts of people pitching books who are peripherally connected to the team.  I’m just not sure that anyone wants to read the story of the 2008 Pittsburgh Steelers as told by a guy who plays golf with the equipment manager’s brother.  Another overdone category in sports is leadership books by coaches.  Finally, I’d say anything on synchronized swimming. If there’s even one book on this sport, it’s one too many.

GLA: Best piece(s) of advice we haven’t talked about yet?

WC: Don’t get too despondent when an agent passes on your submission.  Sometimes the concept just isn’t right.  I usually like to keep a list of writers whose proposals I may have passed on, but who are otherwise talented, so that I can contact them should other projects arise that would be a good fit.  Finally, always wear clean underwear when you’re going to meet with a publisher.



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 Sunday, August 16, 2009
Agent Advice: Jessica Sinsheimer of Sarah Jane Freymann Literary
Posted by Chuck

"Agent Advice" is a series of quick interviews with literary and script agents who talk with Guide to Literary Agents about their thoughts on writing, publishing, and just about anything else.

This installment features Jessica Sinsheimer of the Sarah Jane Freymann Literary Agency

She is seeking: She handles literary fiction, young adult, women’s fiction, food memoirs, travel memoirs, parenting, psychology, and cookbooks. See full submission guidelines here.

Jessica Sinsheimer


GLA: How did you become an agent?

JS: I was lucky. My college roommate had an internship at a large agency in New York and, when she finished, got me an interview. At the time, I was fresh from small-town California—there were literally sheep across from my high school—and had no idea what an agent was. But I arrived, loved it (who wouldn’t love reading and talking to writers and editors all day?), and kept on. The same friend got me another internship at a small publishing house, and when I graduated, I was hired with my current company.

GLA: Tell us a little about yourself – what are your interests?  Your hobbies?

JS: In addition to the usual publishing-type interests (bookbinding, quill pens, wax seals, old books), I enjoy hiking, kayaking, traveling, browsing for heirloom produce at the farmer’s market, making homemade pasta, throwing dinner parties, undertaking unusual arts and crafts projects, keeping up handwritten correspondence, digital photography and exploring the city. In the next year, I’d like to study a new language, find a karate studio, and get involved with an environmental organization.

GLA: What draws you to literary fiction?  Why the love for that category?

JS: I’ve loved literary fiction since a very young age, and I love when manuscripts come across my desk that make me sit up after a brilliant sentence and pause to savor the image—to think, Yes, this is why I love books. 
      
I’ve just finished Robert Goolrick’s A Reliable Wife, which is an excellent example—because the writing is so beautiful, the book transcends the subject matter. If you can write a book that’s officially about one thing but really, actually, about so much more, I will bother everyone in the office until they read it (“How about a cup of tea and this manuscript? How about right now?”) and then, as they read and laugh if it’s funny and make appreciative sounds, and we get that incredible We’ve found something really special glow, I can’t imagine doing anything else. I always love my job, but especially in those moments.

GLA: Concerning the “edgy young adult” fiction you seek, can this be any genre?  Can you help writers understand more about what you do and don’t want to see in YA submissions?

JS: Yes, of course—there’s a freedom to this work because it’s for readers who haven’t yet settled into the rational, routine, this-is-possible-and-this-isn’t adult mindset. With that in mind, I’m happy to see YA works of any subgenre. Young Adult can be more tender -more emotionally raw, and messy, and thus truer to life than works for adults.
      T
hat said, my personal preference is for YA that would be of interest to young women. We’re primarily looking for YA crossover—works that are multilayered so that they are interesting to adult readers as well. My favorite manuscripts include but also deal with larger concepts than shopping/romance/school issues: they examine the emotional nuances of this life stage, with writing that is beautiful but accessible to young adults.

GLA: When reading a YA partial, what are the 1-3 most common reasons you stop?  Where are people going wrong?

JS: Once we’ve determined that the writing is strong enough, it’s usually a question of plot (we receive many works that are derivative or otherwise unoriginal) or voice. As we know from the young adults in our lives, anything that sounds even vaguely parental will not be well-received. And there’s nothing worse than narration that reads like a text message from a grandmother. 
      
In the past month, I’ve received twenty-nine YA partials. Looking back on my notes, I see that I rejected eight for writing, seven for voice, six for derivative or unoriginal plots, four because they were inappropriate for the age group, and two that simply weren’t a good fit for the agency but may find a home elsewhere. Then there were two I liked and passed them on to others in my office. 
      
Also, I think a lot of writers, seeing the success of Twilight, have tried to force their manuscripts into this genre. I know you’ve heard it before, but it’s so true: write what you are meant to write—don’t write what you think will sell.

GLA: According to your BEA bio, literary and edgy YA is the only fiction you are looking for.  Is that still so?

JS: Not at all! I’d especially love to see women’s fiction, literary fiction, food memoirs, travel memoirs, Parenting, Psychology, and cookbooks. Naturally, many works are some combination of the above. I also have a lot of respect for writing of the Aimee Bender/Amy Hempel variety, but know this is hard to find in full-length form. If the writing was extraordinary, I’d consider anything—though violent works about alien wars would, admittedly, have an uphill battle.

GLA: You seek a few nonfiction subjects.  When you start reading a query letter for a nonfiction book, what do you immediately look for in the letter?

JS: I always look for a strong narrative element. Nonfiction isn’t just about facts; it’s about the narrator—usually the writer—discovering the subject matter, how it relates to others, and what it means for the reader. Platform is, of course, necessary for some nonfiction, but it isn’t the first thing I notice. I’d say first writing, then narration, then professional background.

GLA: Will you be at any upcoming writers’ conferences where people can meet and pitch you?

JS: Absolutely. In the past six months, I’ve taught workshops, presented on panels, and done author-agent speed-dating, which I love. I’ll be at the Writer’s Digest conference in September and expect to travel more throughout fall and winter. See my blog for updates: http://agencygatekeeper.blogspot.com/

GLA: What’s the best way to submit to you?  Just a query?  Something else?

JS: A query is best—preferably via e-mail—to Submissions@SarahJaneFreymann.com. I won’t object to a few sample pages (attach them as a Word document, please): I know that writing queries is a skill separate from writing manuscripts.

GLA: I know this may be a tough question, but what are your thoughts on the future of publishing?  What can you tell writers?

JS: We need to remember that many of the major publishing houses predate the Great Depression. Yes, there have been scary moments, and the industry is changing. But I don’t think it will be technology that brings on this change. I’m with Nicholson Baker (in this week’s New Yorker): though ridiculously convenient, the Kindle can turn otherwise extraordinary content, like the New York Times, into something the resembles a blog. A reliable blog, but a blog. I think great writing deserves more than that.

GLA: Best piece(s) of advice we haven’t discovered?

JS: Keep in mind that we are not looking for, and representing, every work that is devoid of flaws—we’re looking for the work we fall in love with.
      
Ensure that the first line of your pitch proves that you’ve done your research: I spent six months gathering data on why I reject authors (there’s a pie chart on my blog), and the number one reason is a lack of research into agents. It’s not necessarily genre, here, but fit: a certain feel that makes a work compatible with that agent’s sensibilities. I immediately have more respect for authors who have done their homework. Use the books available and your intuition.
      
Your pitch letter may change your writing life forever. Do not simply cut and paste, and certainly do not BCC. Tailor each one. Say something like, “I see that you represented [name of book]; I liked X, Y and Z about it” or “I loved what you said at [conference name]” or “I see you like [name of TV show]—my work is similar.” Vary your sentence structure, use strong verbs and advanced punctuation—and do so correctly. Prove with your writing that you love the language. 
      
Be cordial: we’re considering a long-term working relationship. The best writers are often the kindest. Don’t be impatient, but follow up graciously if you’re not sure we received your work. 
      
I wish I could take authors into the office—a sort of field trip, with free coffee and souvenir letter openers—so that you could see the kind of consideration we give everyone’s work. We read every query carefully, we discuss many of them, we consider a million factors that have nothing to do with whether or not you have what it takes to be a writer. Sometimes we have something too similar to your work; sometimes we just don’t feel we’re the very best agency, of the many, many agents out there, to champion this project.  Have faith that we do this out of love of writing, and take our responsibility toward the future of books very seriously. We’re here not just to sell your work, but to make it—and you, as an author—all that you can be.


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 Thursday, August 13, 2009
Agent Advice: Elisabeth Weed of Weed Literary
Posted by Chuck

"Agent Advice" is a series of quick interviews with literary and script agents who talk with Guide to Literary Agents about their thoughts on writing, publishing, and just about anything else.

This installment features Elisabeth Weed of Weed Literary. She previously worked at Curtis Brown and Trident before starting her own agency. 

She is seeking: She handles "upmarket women’s fiction as well as an eclectic mix of non-fiction, with an emphasis on narrative, investigative and women’s issues from the humor driven to the thought provoking."

Elisabeth Weed


GLA: How did you become an agent?

EW: Much to my dismay, I learned in my college fiction writing class that I was a much better editor than a writer. I wanted to work with books in some capacity and loved the idea of agenting.  The (eventual) autonomy you have to pick and chose what you want to work on was really appealing.  I sent resumes out to every agency in the Jeff Herman Guide (this was pre Chuck Sambuchino!) and Curtis Brown called me back. 

GLA: What is the most recent thing you’ve sold?

EW: I just sold a fabulous hybrid memoir/how-to by Sister Madonna Buder, an 80-year-old nun and Iron Man competitor to Marysue Rucci at Simon & Schuster.  The title is still up in the air, but Running on Faith, God Speed, Iron Nun are all in the "running." 

GLA: We know you’re seeking upmarket women’s fiction, but not most genre fiction.  That said, what about other categories?  Literary fiction?  Romance?  Any children’s?

EW: I would love to do more literary fiction.  I've just signed up a two new novels that I think fall into that grey (but very appealing!) area between literary and commercial.  I guess you could say, I am looking for terrific writing that isn't quiet.  A great high concept always helps.   (How original of an answer is that?)

GLA: You’ve sold plenty of upmarket women’s fiction.  What draws you to this specific category?

EW: In part I can relate to it, but also, it sells!  Specifically, I am drawn to fiction that with a touch of magic.  Allison Winn Scotch's Time of My Life is about a woman who gets a chance to go back in time and live her life over again and Therese Walsh's upcoming debut, The Last Will of Moira Leahy involves an ancient dagger with supernatural powers that takes the protagonist on an incredible journey of sorts.  I guess one of the things I love about my job is that I am continuously and pleasantly surprised by what I find.  I wouldn't have thought I'd fall in love with a book about a magical dagger but I requested it when my son was three weeks old and read it in two days. It was so good!  All to say, these categories can shift a lot.

GLA: Besides “good writing,” what are you looking for right now and not finding? 

EW: I would love to find a great new voice in women's self help.  For example, I sold a book to Crown last year on Impostor Syndrome which is something smart and ambitious women seem to suffer from.  In a nut shell, they think they aren't smart or qualified enough, despite their amazing resumes and in turn suffer by over-preparing to an unhealthy degree. Sound familiar, anyone?  The author has been studying the phenomenon for years and speaking at companies and business schools across the country about it and on how to get a handle on it - aka the author really knew her subject and had also built up a potential audience for when her book is published. I'd love to work with someone doing something similar.

GLA: When I attend writers’ conferences, I run into a lot of women writers who are writing similar stories – about a middle-aged woman who is stifled in her home life and leaves to get in some kind of adventure.  As someone who seems to specialize in women’s fiction/nonfiction, do you see a lot of these submissions?  If so, what separates the good from the bad?

EW: I do.  And it's tough because a lot of the stories are good.  Some are really good.  But at the end of the day, that's not always enough, especially in today's climate.  So, rather than separating good from bad,  I find myself separating the fresh from the familiar.   Even if it's been done before it needs a new setting or twist. I imagine that's a vague and annoying answer but it's also a tough question. The truth is, I know it when I see it. 

GLA:
Book proposals: Besides lack of platform, where are writers going wrong?

EW: A lot of memoir comes across my desk and it's really hard to tell an author that their personal narrative just isn't that interesting.  What they need to do is ask themselves who is going to play $25 to read my story?  Same is true for all nonfiction, which is why the platform is essential.  If you are an expert in a field then people will come to you.  It also helps a publisher see where they will find an audience should they decide to buy that book.

GLA:
Do you put a lot of weight into a synopsis?  Some agents do and some do not.

EW: I don't read synopses.  For fiction, a great cover letter that gets to the essence of what the book is about (think jacket copy) is really helpful.

GLA:
Will you be at any upcoming writers’ conferences where people can meet/pitch you?

EW: I will continue to go to Grub Street in Boston as long as they will have me.  It's the best conference I've been to.

GLA: What’s something about you writers would be surprised to know?

EW: That I don't usually do these sort of interviews because I hate talking about myself.  I hope it's a quality that makes me a good agent because I love talking about my authors. 

GLA: Best piece(s) of advice we haven’t discussed?

EW: Read! It makes such a difference to me when a query letter cites a comparison book (and it actually lives up to it) as it shows me that the author knows her audience and has done her homework.  And buy books.  Our industry isn't in a great place at the moment and needs all the help it can get.  And, if you want to be published and have others buy your book you really should be doing the same. 

      Please note that Elisabeth does NOT handle the following: Picture books, mysteries, thrillers, romance, military.


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 Sunday, August 09, 2009
Agent Advice: Susanna Einstein of LJK Literary Management
Posted by Chuck

Agent Interview by
Contributor Ricki Schultz:

"Agent Advice"
is a series of quick interviews with literary and script agents who talk with Guide to Literary Agents about their thoughts on writing, publishing, and just about anything else.

This installment features Susanna Einstein of LJK Literary Management. Susanna has worked in publishing since 1995 and is one of the founding agents at LJK, where, since 2005, she has been building a client list and selling projects ranging from children’s picture books to adult literary fiction. 

She is seeking: She is interested in: crime fiction, historical fiction, literary fiction, and women’s fiction, as well as the occasional narrative or practical nonfiction book. She is particularly interested in finding great middle-grade or young adult books. Her primary requirement for any project she handles is having a distinct voice.   





GLA: How did you become an agent?


SE: I had worked as an editor and as a scout, and while I loved both of those jobs, I wanted to work on the books that interested me, as opposed to the ones I needed to acquire for a particular list or ones I needed to read for a particular client.  As an agent, I don’t have to work within a niche—I can work on crime novels, young adult novels, practical nonfiction, memoir, literary fiction—whatever I think I can sell!

GLA: What’s the most recent thing you’ve sold?

SE: I just sold a second novel by a super-talented young-adult author, Lara Zielin, to Putnam Books for Young Readers.  Her first book, Donut Days, comes out on August 6, and is getting terrific reviews and word of mouth.  The new novel is called Promgate and is based on a true story about a high school scandal in which a pregnant teen was elected Prom Queen.

GLA: What is it that draws you to the middle-grade and young-adult age group?

SE: I love middle-grade and YA books for many reasons.  For one thing, the books I read as a child and young adult are the ones that made me love reading, that transported me and made me into the bookworm that I am today.  So the opportunity to be involved in that process, where kids and teens discover their own favorite books, is one that I couldn’t pass up.  And there’s a joy and creativity in the children’s/YA market that is less present, or at least less visible, in the adult market.  I also think, perhaps naïvely, that there’s a sense of purpose, of good work being done, in finding and selling books that young people will want to read, and that’s important to me.  Last but not least, the children’s/YA market is flourishing and expanding in terms of subject matter, kinds of books, and sales.  What’s not to like?

GLA: You also seek crime fiction, historical fiction, literary fiction, women’s fiction, and sometimes nonfiction.  This leaves a lot of wiggle room for authors wishing to query you.  Do you have particular "likes" or "dislikes" as far as subgenres for any of these categories?

SE: If a book tells a good story, I am all for it.  To me, that means a book I can’t put down because I have to know what happens next, or one in which I’m so seduced by the world the author creates that I just want to stay there.  I’m reluctant to say “never” vis-à-vis subgenres, but that said, I am probably not the ideal person for books of military history or military fiction—if battle details and hardware play a huge role, I tend to zone out.  I’m also not particularly drawn to what I think of as the MFA novel—a book which has exquisitely chosen words but a plot I’ve read a gazillion times before.

GLA: What are you looking for right now and not getting?  What do you pray for when tackling the slush pile?

SE: I pray for excellence. I see lots of books that are perfectly adequate.  They tell a good story, they observe the conventions of their genre, etc., but they don’t stand out.  In this market, it’s not enough for a book to be just fine.  It has to be superlative.

GLA: Within all your areas of interest, you say you are looking for anything so good you “can’t put it down.”  Have a you noticed any trends in what you tend to represent—things you are particularly a sucker for—that prevent you from putting down a manuscript?

SE: Honestly, not really.  I have eclectic taste.  All of my clients are wonderful storytellers, though, who create tangible, believable worlds.  If a book makes me cry, then that’s a good sign, but that’s not to say I’m only looking for tearjerkers.  I do find that I like reading about characters whom I’d like to be, if only for a day.  I want characters who are charismatic—which does not mean likeable, necessarily—and I want there to be an arc to their story, some real emotion, something at stake.  What do they want and how do they get it?

GLA: On the other side of that, what are some things that make you stop reading a manuscript every time you see them?

SE: Bad dialogue stops me immediately.  I’m shocked by how many writers don’t seem to read their dialogue aloud, since if they did, they could surely tell it was stopping the reader cold.  I subscribe to Elmore Leonard’s  rules of dialogue (“Never use a verb other than said to carry dialogue. Never use an adverb to modify the verb said.”).  A good writer will be able to give their characters distinct voices and will be able to convey emotion without spelling it out.  Anything too derivative of another writer makes me stop reading, as does anything that’s written to a trend—since, in the amount of time it takes to publish the book, the trend will have ended.  And, of course, bad grammar, bad spelling, single-spaced manuscripts—all the usual suspects.

GLA: Will you be at any upcoming writers' conferences where writers can meet and pitch you?

SE: I just finished a summer full  of conferences, so am taking a break for a while.  But I’m sure I’ll be at some in the future—I like getting out of New York City and meeting writers.

GLA: Best piece(s) of advice we haven’t talked about yet?

SE: 1. The best writers I know are the ones who treat writing like a job, whether or not they have another one.  They work every day, they revise, they network, they educate themselves.  They don’t think of themselves as artists, but as workers, and they take rejection in stride.
        2.  Your first book may not be publishable.  Really consider that when you’re beginning to look for
representation.  Is this the best possible book to go out with, or do you just want it to be published because you worked hard on it?  There are those books that teach writers how to write—and there’s a lot of worth in that, even if they never reach a wider audience. 
        3.  Join a critique group—one that does not include your family or friends.
        4.  Just because I don’t like something, doesn’t mean another agent won’t.





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 Tuesday, August 04, 2009
Interview with Kids Agent Jill Corcoran Online
Posted by Chuck

Over on the Hunger Mountain website, there is a good interview with agent Jill Corcoran of Herman Agency, who is relatively new but decently known because of her blog. 

Jill reps young adult and middle grade works.  See the entire interview here or read below to see a small portion of the exchange. (Find the Herman Agency homepage here.)


 
HM: What types of work are you looking to represent?

JC: I represent Chapter Book, Middle Grade and Young Adult authors. I am a huge fan of humor. If you can make me laugh or crack a smile, you are my kind of writer. Even in a serious literary book, there is room for humor.
        Some of my favorite books are Frindle, Stargirl,
Speak, Stuck in Neutral, How I Live Now, Millicent Min, Good Enough, Seeing Emily, Things Left Unsaid, Flipped and Because of Winn Dixie. I would also love to find funny books that are mixed prose and graphic novel a la Wimpy Kid and Bruce Hale’s Prince of Underwhere.
        For published Chapter Book, Middle Grade and Young Adult authors and SCBWI members, please email a query plus the first 10 pages of your manuscript to: Jill@HermanAgencyInc.com. No attachments, please.

HM: What’s the biggest challenge in selecting clients?

JC: I have to love a book to take it on, to commit to that book and that author for the long-haul.
        Sometimes, I have a manuscript crush. I’m enamored by its beautiful language, blinded by its witty and fun, or steamy and dark characters, swept up in its sexy plot. But with time away from its intoxicating pull, I begin to question the book’s integrity. R
ecognize flaws. Be irked by the little things. Sometimes an author can make the changes to turn a crush into true love. But if not, I must be honest with myself and with the author.
        The books I represent also represent me. Editors judge my taste by what I submit to them. I owe it not only to myself but to all the authors I represent to be highly selective and utterly in love with each and every book I represent.


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 Thursday, July 23, 2009
Agent Advice: Sheree Bykofsky of Sheree Bykofsky Associates, Inc.
Posted by Chuck

"Agent Advice" is a series of quick interviews with literary and script agents who talk with Guide to Literary Agents about their thoughts on writing, publishing, and just about anything else.

This installment features Sheree Bykofsky of Sheree Bykofsky Associates, Inc.         

She is seeking: prescriptive nonfiction with a fresh idea and a twist on standard advice. She also seeks narrative nonfiction with a sharp voice, a point of view, and a reason for readers to discover it: weird, intelligent, funny pop culture, and music. Also, popular reference with an edge to it. She does very little fiction, but would love to find a wonderful new voice. No sci-fi, horror, romance, or juvenile.  "At this time, we request only e-mail submissions sent to submitbee@aol.com with no attachments."





GLA
: How did you become an agent?

SB: I used to be the executive editor of The Stonesong Press, a book packaging company.  We were most famous for the New York Public Library Desk Reference, for which I served as co-editor.  When authors would approach us to represent them, we would send them to agents. My boss at the time said, "Why don't you become an agent so you don't have to turn away good writers?" I think I surprised him when I took him up on his suggestion.

GLA: What’s the most recent thing you’ve sold? 

SB: Just out, Mike Matusow's Check-Raising the DevilHere are some other books out now: Don't Swallow Your Gum: Myths, Half-Truths, and Outright Lies About Your Body and Health by Dr. Aaron E. Carroll and Dr. Rachel C. Vreeman (Griffin/St Martins); and Am I the Only Sane One Working Here: 101 Solutions for Surviving Office Insanity by Albert J. Bernstein, Ph.D. (McGraw-Hill).

GLA: You say you’re open to finding a fresh new fiction voice, but it seems like you don’t want genre/commercial or kids submissions. Does this mean you’re seeking literary and mainstream voices, perhaps?

SB: That's correct. We like mainstream fiction with a literary quality. I also like the mystery genre.

GLA: You specialize in nonfiction. Let’s talk about a book proposal – specifically, the Overview section that agents see right away.  When you look over a proposal, what do you want to get out of Overview or you’ll stop reading? 

SB: I want to know what the book is about right away. I would like to see a thoughtful title, even though it will change. I like to believe from what I'm reading that not only is this a great new idea but that this author is the bes author to write this particular book.

GLA: You wrote an edition of The Idiot’s Guide to Getting Published.  When you were writing that book, what are some good, general points of advice you wrote down that you think everyone should know?

SB: It is a best-selling book, now in its fourth edition.  The five reasons authors need an agent: 1) contacts; 2) contracts; 3) money; 4) guidance; 5) subrights.  Truly, I believe every author should read that book before approaching agents.

GLA: On that note, I see another “Idiot’s Guide” on your sales list.  Are you looking for more queries that are for the Idiot’s series? 

SB: We represent many Idiots authors. None of them is an idiot!  (That doesn't sound right, but it is correct grammar.)  The publisher usually likes to suggest titles for the series, and then we find the author. But sometimes we do submit authors and ideas to them, and so the answer to your question is yes.

GLA: You seek prescriptive nonfiction.  The first thing that comes to mind with me is something like “How to Stay Healthy,” but certainly prescriptive nonfiction expands past the category of health/wellness.  Can you give me/us some examples of prescriptive nonfiction not in that category? 

SB: Other perennial topics are business, parenting, relationships, personal finance, how to play poker, etc.

GLA: You’ve repped poker books and even written a few.  Two questions: How did your love for poker come about, and would you be willing to rep even more poker books?

SB: Yes, I would be willing to look at more poker books.  I used to play tournament Scrabble (R).  My Scrabble friends (the national champion and other top players) formed a poker game over 25 years ago. We played very seriously. By the time the lipstick camera was invented and poker became a big spectator sport, I was already an expert at it.

GLA: Will you be at any upcoming writers’ conferences where writers can meet and pitch you?

SB: I will be teaching doctors how to get their novels published at the SEAK conference in Hyannis in October.

GLA: Best piece(s) of advice we haven’t discussed?

SB: Do it right the first time.


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 Tuesday, June 16, 2009
Agent Advice: Laura Bradford of the Bradford Literary Agency
Posted by Chuck

This is a "Blast From the
Past" post.  To celebrate the
GLA Blog's 2nd birthday, I am
re-posting some of the best
"older" content that writers
likely missed.
 
"Agent Advice" is a series of quick interviews with literary and script agents who talk with Guide to Literary Agents about their thoughts on writing, publishing, and just about anything else.

This installment features literary agent Laura Bradford of the Bradford Literary Agency, who specializes in romance. She has 13 years of professional experience as a literary agent, editor, writer and bookseller. Laura began her career as a literary agent at Manus and Associates Literary Agency and is a member of the Romance Writers of America. As an editorial-focused agent Laura works closely with her clients developing proposals and manuscripts for the most appropriate markets.

Seeking: "The agency specializes in all types of romance (including category), romantica/erotica, women’s fiction, mystery, thrillers and young adult. We also represent nonfiction and other fiction genres. All queries sent to us will be considered with the exception of poetry, children’s books, screenplays and short stories."

GLA: What’s a recent thing you’ve sold?
 
LB: I recently sold the first three books in a new urban fantasy series by Ann Aguirre to Ace. They feature a woman cursed with the gift of psychometry who, after struggling to sever all ties with her past, is reluctantly drawn into the search for a missing woman along with her former lover (who would rather not be "former" any longer) and an empathic cop with similar romantic designs on her. The series has tons of danger and action, a little romance and bad guys who are are just as likely to hire a warlock as a hitman to even the score. And zombies.
      Plus, I just received an offer on an erotic romance novel today, so by the time this interview posts, Out of the Ashes by Beth Kery will be my most recent sale. This one has heat and heart in equal measures, I'd say. Scorching. With a hero who is so Alpha, it hurts.
 
GLA: You specialize in romance. Aside from writing, what should beginning romance novelists be doing to help their careers?
 
LB: I think that the most important thing a beginning writer of any genre needs to do is educate him or herself about the market and how they should go about selling their work. This can be done lots of different ways, but romance writers are lucky that there is such a large and extensive group, RWA, where they can easily tap into the collective knowledge base. There is a wealth of information to be shared within that group.  There are other online writing groups and loops that can be mined for information as well.
 
GLA: How exactly do you define “romantica”?
 
LB: It tends to get defined one of two ways depending on the person doing the defining. 1) It is a romance, with all the characteristics of being a romance, like the "happily ever after" ending and relationship-focused center of the plot, but with extra, extra spicy sexual content.  More extensive sex scenes, more frequency, more kink, harder language (no sexual euphemisms here!), etc. If the sex was taken out, you would still be left with a complete, whole romance story. Or some people define romantica or erotic romance as being 2) a sex-centered romance with all the extra spicy elements I mentioned before: frequency, kink, language, etc. In this definition, the sex and the sexiness are fundamental to the plot and if the sex was removed, it would be clear that core of the book was missing. Some publishers consider the first definition to cover what they call simply a very hot (but not erotic) romance.
 
GLA: Romance can also be tied in with other genres—a romantic mystery, paranormal romance, etc. Is there a line where the writing ceases to be “romance” any longer and has shifted into another genre? 

LB: A romance is a pretty specific type of book. At it's core, a romance is story about people falling in love and it always ends on an optimistic, emotionally satisfying note. A book can absolutely be romantic though, and not be a romance, per se.  I think that there is room for romantic elements in almost every genre of commerial fiction and as someone who loves a good romance, I find those elements add an additional layer of depth to a novel.  I think a novel ceases to be a romance whenever the focus of the book shifts away from the romantic relationship and starts to be more about the other plot elements (finding the serial killer, stopping the alien invation, making peace with the death of the character's father). If a book strays too far from traditional romance rules, it just isn't a romance anymore and that is fine. I think that genre-straddling books are fun and fresh and I love to read them.  mixing genres, whether that mix involves romance or not, keeps publishing dynamic and continually evolving.
 
GLA: Romance has several sub-genres, such as historical romance. Is the genre continuing to fragment?  or is it fairly set?
 
LB: I don't really think of romance as a genre that is fragmenting with all of its myriad sub-genres. The labeling of the sub-genres is really just a way to help romance readers find the books they most want to read by preference for setting and style.  As long as the book has that romantic relationship core and heat, romance is romance whether it takes place in medieval times, present day, the Scottish Highlands, a church or the surface of Neptune. I think the fact that both the markets for erotic romance and inspirational romance are blooming is fabulous. I think that there are a few romance sub-genre classics that will be around forever, like historical, romantic suspense, paranormal, but I love the idea that there will always be room in romance for a new and fresh angle on a type of book that is so beloved.
 
GLA: If a man were to query you with a romance novel, will he likely be published under a pseudonym?  If so, should he query you under that pseudonym?  How does this work?
 
LB: Male romance authors traditionally sell more books when they are published under female pseudonyms ... or so we seem to think. Yes, the standard seems to be to publish male authors under the female pseudonym, but since I have no personal experience in that particular area, I'm not certain if it was the author's choice or the publisher's.  An author can query me using their real name or a pseudonym, it makes no difference to me. I review the manuscript and make my decision based on the writing.

 

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 Sunday, June 14, 2009
Agent Terry Burns Interviewed on Novelists, Inc.
Posted by Chuck

I've met agent Terry Burns of Hartline Literary at a conference down in Texas.  Good guy - and he's a writer, too, as well as an editor. 

Novelists Inc. just posted a nice interview with Terry.  I've pasted some of the Q&A below.  To read the rest, see the full post over on Novelists, Inc.


NI
: What makes a writer a good choice for you? What makes you a good choice for a writer?

TB: I need a writer that is flexible and committed, that understands the need to develop a good platform, promote and generate visibility. That understands the task of getting published is a team effort. The writer has the right to expect that each client will be treated the same and that the full resources of the whole team will be focused on making it happen for them.

NI: How much input do you expect to have on a client’s work?

TB: I don’t try to write for my clients, but I often will point out areas of concern that I believe need to be addressed to make a project more publishable. How it is addressed is up to the client, but I would hope that they take the need serious.


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 Monday, June 01, 2009
Agent Advice: Jennifer Weltz of Jean V. Naggar Literary Agency
Posted by Chuck

"Agent Advice" is a series of quick interviews with literary and script agents who talk with Guide to Literary Agents about their thoughts on writing, publishing, and just about anything else.

This installment features Jennifer Weltz of the Jean V. Naggar Literary Agency

Seeking and submissions
: To contact her, send an e-query with no attachments to jweltz@jvnla.com. Your query should include a short description of the work and yourself. She specializes in compelling historicals and thrillers that stand out from the crowd as well as women's fiction with a taste of the unusual and an emotional tug. She also works with middle grade and picture books where she looks for a voice that you can't resist to get to know.



Jennifer Weltz

GLA: How did you become an agent?

JW: It seemed like a good idea at the time and I do love to read a good book!

GLA: What's the most recent thing you've sold?

JW: Today the answer is By Accident by Susan Kelley - a beautifully written novel about the dramatic shifts that ran
dom accidents can render on a family; tomorrow my answer will be a middle grade historical novel about two sisters ... but I can't tell you anything more until we officially accept.

GLA: Talk to us about historical fiction.  Do you seek any category?  Historical romance?  Historical thriller?

JW: I love romance, thriller and just a wonderful story about a great figure in history that we didn't know or know well enough.  I love to learn something new and to plunge into a world and live there for a few days.  If it's a thriller, it had better be tight on the facts and the resolution, because I'm pretty good at figuring it out and I am a sucker for a wonderful romance but never downplay the importance of anticipation.  Check out The Last Queen by CW Gortner to see the kind of historical writing I tend to love.  Also Pope Joan by Donna Cross.

GLA: You say you seek "women's fiction with a taste of the unusual and an emotional tug."  To give us more perspective on this, can you give us an example (or two) of a women's fiction book you repped an
d what about it grabbed your attention?

JW: A wonderful example is The Tale of Halcyon Crane by Wendy Webb.  This is a present day ghost story with a bit of a mystery and a great love story.  One thing I have realized is that I love stories that verge on the fairy tale in their tone but give us a twist we didn't expect.  I love to be surprised and also have a bit of a dark sense of humor.  I am also a great fan of our books The Last Bridge by Terri Coyne, La Cucina by Lily Prior and Affinity by Sarah Waters.

GLA: You rep mid-grade works and picture books, but not young adult?

JW: Jessica Regel in our office has a great eye for YA's and so I leave it up to her.  I do go for YA's if they are more the fun or fantastical.  Angst is not my forte.

GLA: A lot of people write picture books but most of them never get published?  Where are writers going wrong?

JW: Picture books are actually the hardest market to break into right now.  I find myself turning down many books that have
nothing wrong with them because I know there is no way I can sell them in this market. 
        1. Unless you are an artist, do not send illustrations with your book.
        2. Most picture books that are selling these days have a character you can't resist with a great twist.
        3. Quiet pretty stories are not selling right now. 
        4. It's all in the voice
        5. see 4

GLA: Specifically with picture books, are you looking for text-heavy work?  Minimal text?

JW: Minimal.  A picture book is like a poem.  Every word must justify it's existence.  No rhymes though please!

GLA: What, in your mind, differentiates a thriller from mystery or suspense?

JW: Great question and one I asked myself when I started agenting 14 years ago.  Commonly, in the thriller, our main protagonist is directly involved in the danger and is directly affected by the outcome (they might go to jail or die if they don't resolve) whereas in a mystery the main character is solving a crime that was done to someone else.  They might be in peril but the crime originates with another character.


GLA: In general, what are you looking for right now and not getting?  What do you pray for when tackling the slush pile?

JW: I pray a lot when tackling the slush pile.  I'm looking for something I have never seen with writing that grabs me from the first page and a character that comes to life from the moment I meet him/her.  The voice, the originality of the story and a story that takes me out of the world and life I am living (i.e., don't send me a thriller around swine flu!).

GLA: In your opinion, how is the economic climate affecting writers' chances of getting published?  Are you seeing smaller advances?  Fewer buys?

JW: Yes, yes, yes.  A writer needs to be prepared to be in it for the long haul and to give it everything they have got to succeed.  And they need an agent who is passionate about their career and their writing.  You don't want me unless I am excited!

GLA: Will you be at any upcoming conferences where writers can meet and pitch you?


JW: Thriller Fest in June.

GLA: Best piece(s) of advice we haven't discussed?

JW: Make sure to tell me what your book is about front and center when sending me a query, especially if it is fiction.  I'll read about the other stuff later but only if the story grabs me.  One last thing - I read every query with great hope and desire to find something wonderful that I can love because first and foremost I am a reader!


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 Monday, May 18, 2009
Agent Advice: Greg Daniel of Daniel Literary Group
Posted by Chuck

"Agent Advice" is a series of quick interviews with literary and script agents who talk with Guide to Literary Agents about their thoughts on writing, publishing, and just about anything else.

This installment features Greg Daniel of Daniel Literary Group. Greg specializes in religious and inspirational works of both fiction and nonfiction. He also accepts nonfiction that has no religious angle. Send submissions to submissions@danielliterarygroup.com.




GLA: How did you become an agent?

GD: I’ve spent about 12 years in publishing, eight of which were at Thomas Nelson Publishers, where most recently I was VP and Associate Publisher. I’ve always known that one day I would open my own literary agency. I loved the notion of being with authors throughout their publishing careers, helping them navigate the publishing waters, and guiding them in such matters as branding and editorial direction. So in April 2007, I made the leap to agenting. I’ve never looked back. It’s been a real joy.

GLA: What’s the most recent thing you’ve sold?

GD: Last week I sold inspirational fiction author Denise Hildreth’s next two novels to Tyndale. Denise is a wonderfully fun southern author who has had some nice success.

GLA: You say you’re open to any type of nonfiction submission, and a lot of fiction, but almost all of your recent sales have some angle of religion or inspirational to them.  That said, are you still interested in queries that have no religious angle?

GD: Currently about 85% of the books I’ve sold have had some element of religion or inspiration, but I’ve also sold such nonfiction books as narrative history, pop culture, and business. I am open to nonfiction of almost any sort, that being my true specialty. I’d love to see more non-religious nonfiction. I’m extremely selective about the fiction I represent, and currently it consists primarily of inspirational fiction.

GLA: You seem to be right in the thick of inspirational and Christian publishing in what you do.  Can you tell us how the Christian publishing world is changing?

GD: As Christian bookstores, especially the independents, struggle a bit and as general market stores keep increasing the size of their religion departments, it is opening up opportunities for a broader spectrum of Christian books to be published, not just the strictly evangelical books that Christian publishing used to be primarily confined to. There is a more ecumenical approach and spirit in Christian publishing these days.

GLA: Talk to me about a good platform for writing religious nonfiction.  Besides being a preacher, what are other elements you’d like to see in proposals?

GD: Actually, being a preacher or pastor is not at all a prerequisite for writing religious nonfiction. I think I have only a couple authors who are pastors of some sort. Platform in religious nonfiction can be everything from pastoring a megachurch to having a wildly successful blog to being a notable scholar or thought leader. But it is important to have a platform and for that platform to be ever expanding.

GLA: What are the most common ways you see writers going wrong when they submit a query to you?

GD: Many nonfiction authors have almost no platform whatsoever. It is near impossible to publish nonfiction without a platform or recognized expertise in an area. Fiction authors err in sending manuscripts and queries that seem as if they’re first drafts - lacking the multiple drafts of rewriting that are necessary to truly hone and perfect their work.

GLA: Let’s say you sit down to read a Christian/inspirational fiction partial.  What are some cliché openings that you see right there on page 1 or in chapter 1?  What do you see way too much? 

GD: I don’t think I see a whole lot of difference between the cliché openings of inspirational fiction and the cliché openings of every other kind of fiction. I must see 5-10 queries a day that begin their first chapter with a description of the sky or weather. Doesn’t matter what kind of fiction it is.

GLA: Will you be at any upcoming writers’ conferences where people can meet and pitch you?

GD: The next conference I’ll be speaking at is the Southern Christian Writers’ Conference.

GLA: Best piece(s) of advice we haven’t discussed?

GD: Read deeply and widely in the area you want to be a writer. It seems that so often I receive queries where not only are the authors not at a point where they should be approaching agents yet, but they also appear to not even be astute readers of the categories they’re writing in. In addition to writing, writing, and rewriting in order to be a better writer, I’m a firm believer that the more intelligently you read, the better writer you’ll become.



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 Friday, May 01, 2009
Agent Advice: Jim McCarthy of Dystel & Goderich
Posted by Chuck

"Agent Advice" is a series of quick interviews with literary and script agents who talk with Guide to Literary Agents about their thoughts on writing, publishing, and just about anything else.

This installment features Jim McCarthy of Dystel & Goderich. Jim
interned for DGLM while studying urban design at New York University.

Seeking: "literary and commercial works. He is particularly interested in literary women’s fiction, underrepresented voices, mysteries, romance, paranormal fiction, and anything unusual or unexpected. In addition to fiction he is also interested in narrative nonfiction, humor, memoir, paranormal nonfiction, and anything related to architecture, planning, or real estate." His e-mail address is jmccarthy@dystel.com. To contact him, enclose a cover letter, outline or brief synopsis of the work (with word count if possible), a sample chapter, and SASE for our response. Please type all of your correspondence and double space everything other than the cover letter. E-mail queries are fine (no attachments). Please be sure to query only one agent at this agency.




Jim McCarthy

GLA: How did you become an agent?

JM: I really stumbled into the industry. I was studying Urban Design at NYU and needed a part-time job. Stacey Glick, my now colleague, was the first person to call me back from the forty resumes I sent out. I didn't even know what a literary agent was at the time. Ten years later, I know it was a hell of a lucky break.

GLA: What's the most recent thing you've sold?

JM: One of my most exciting recent sales was for a literary novel called Yield by a young writer, Lee Houck. I originally signed it on in 2006. It sold last month to Kensington. It was a long, long process, but it's a book I've always adored, and I'm thrilled that it will be seen in print. I also just sold seven new young adult titles by the outstanding (and New York Times bestselling) Richelle Mead to Razorbill.

GLA: I'm very curious.  What constitutes these "underrepresented voices" you
seek?

JM: This is very open for interpretation. What I really mean is that I want to see stories that aren't being told. I think there are a lot of groups that don't necessarily see themselves represented in the literary market as much as they should: whether that means underrepresented ethnic, religious, or even geographic narratives or simply people who feel like they fall out of the mainstream, I'd love to have a look.

GLA: When you're looking at a submission for a literary novel, how much stock do you put into queries and synopses?

JM: I always want to see samples when I'm looking at literary queries. There are tons of books that I probably wouldn't be especially interested in just based on a synopsis that I ultimately end up loving. Coetzee's Disgrace is a great example. The plot didn't appeal to me, but the book was dazzling. Once I see that something is literary, I tend to skip to the sample to see if the voice grabs me.

GLA: When I think of paranormal romance, I think of vampires and more
vampires. What other things do you see would classify the fiction writing to be in this category?

JM: Well, I certainly do love my vampire romances. And zombies, succubi, werewolves, and all of those other glorious fantastical creatures. But what I'm seeing a lot of (and am really encouraged by) is that the boundaries of the subgenre are being stretched. I love fiction that is fantastical--alternate worlds, alternative realities, that sort of thing. It isn't so much about the entities you're writing about as it is the ability to create a world that feels wholly realized and entirely believable in its own right.

GLA: We met recently at the Las Vegas Writers Conference.  You took a lot of pitches.  What were the most common mistakes you saw writers doing concerning in-person pitches?

JM: Fear. Writers get so caught up in making sure they capture everything about their book in as short a time as possible that they get really worked up and flustered. I'm not looking for a synopsis of everything that happens in a book when I'm getting pitched. I just want to hear someone talk about why they wrote their book and what excites them about it. It should be a much more natural process than a lot of people are ready for it to be.

GLA: Concerning the mystery and romance genres, do you seek anything specific here?  Do you have particular "likes" (subgenres, etc)?

JM: I'm really open to anything, but I particularly love serial killer thrillers, ghost stories, and anything hardboiled in mystery. I'd love to find my very own Chelsea Cain or Charlie Huston. On the flipside, I adore a good cozy mystery series, particularly if there is an element of humor. In terms of romance, I skew more contemporary than historical, still love a good sense of humor, and am always on the lookout for writers who pull off sexy really well (it's tougher than it sounds!).

GLA: On the same subject, what do you pray for when tackling the slush pile?
What do you keep looking for and not getting?

JM: I always used to answer this question by saying that if someone would write a novel about Elvis, vampires, and road trips, I would definitely sign it on. Happily, someone finally took me up on it! So now I'm dying to find some great big Gothic thriller or romance. A 21st Century The Ghost and Mrs. Muir is my current dream project.

GLA: I've been talking a lot about memoir on the blog recently.  Is there anything you can add when talking to writers about writing and submitting memoirs, since so many people are doing so?

JM: Two bullet points I'd throw out there: first, make sure you're ready to share your story on a major scale. I've seen people write their memoirs and then pull them from consideration and, once, even from publication, when they realized that they weren't prepared to deal with the emotional effects of sharing something so intimate. It's something you really need to be sure you explore personally before you take that step. And when you do decide to write it, my second piece of advice is to find your framing mechanism. It isn't usually enough to just present a snapshot of your life. You need to find a narrative in there--something with a beginning, middle, and end. It doesn't have to be chronological, but you need to give the reader structure. I always find myself recommending three memoirs that I think do this especially well: The Glass Castle by Jeannette Walls, Strip City by Lily Burana, and the amazingly funny (and truly moving) I Am Not Myself These Days by Josh Kilmer-Purcell.

GLA: Will you be at any upcoming writers' conferences where writers can meet
and pitch you?


JM: I'll be at PNWA in Seattle from July 30-August 2, and at the South Carolina Writers Workshop conference October 23-25.

GLA: Best piece(s) of advice we haven't covered?

JM
: If you think you can give up writing, then give it up. If you can't ... if you know that no matter how much stress or rejection or frustration you face, that you can never stop writing? In that case, never give up. Publishing is too hard to face if you aren't in it for the right reasons. But it's not too hard to break into if it's what you need to do.


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 Tuesday, April 28, 2009
Agent Advice: Kate McKean of Howard Morhaim Literary Agency, Inc.
Posted by Chuck

"Agent Advice" is a series of quick interviews with literary and script agents who talk with Guide to Literary Agents about their thoughts on writing, publishing, and just about anything else.

This installment features Kate McKean of Howard Morhaim Literary Agency, Inc. A native Southerner, Kate earned her Master's degree in Fiction Writing from the University of Southern Mississippi before starting her career as a literary agent.

She is seeking: Her interests lie in literary fiction, contemporary women's fiction, paranormal romance, urban fantasy, mystery, young adult and middle grade fiction, narrative nonfiction, sports related books, food writing, pop culture, and craft. She prefers email queries and can be reached at kmckean@morhaimliterary.com. She is not accepting any epic fantasy, science fiction, or children's picture books.



Kate McKean

GLA: Briefly, how did you become an agent?

KM: I've always loved writing and books, but I'm also a very outgoing person. As an agent, I get the best of both worlds--the creative aspect of helping my clients craft great novels and proposals, and the social aspect of networking with potential clients and editors. There are editors, teachers, writers, and salesmen in my family. Being an agent is like all of those professions put together.

GLA: What's the most recent thing you've sold? 

KM: Most recently, I've sold audio rights for some agency clients, which is always fun, but the last book I sold was the sequel to the New York Times bestselling I Can Has Cheezburger called How to Take Over Teh Wurld.

GLA: To me, at least, it seems like a lot of fiction stories that writers are pitching at conferences are about middle-aged women who break out of their unsatisfying life to live a life of adventure and/or excitement.  As someone who looks for contemporary women's fiction, do you see a lot of these queries? And if so, what advice can you give writers on standing out from the crowd?

KM: I see a TON of novels like these, and haven't signed up any of them. The advice I would give to writers working on this subject would be to focus less on the WHY the characters are changing their lives and more on WHAT they're doing to change their lives. The emotional reasons behind these stories are familiar to readers, but what they do with it can be new, different, and interesting. Bottom line, though, writing trumps all. A well-written novel with this subject matter would catch my eye.

GLA: What are you looking for right now and not getting?  In other words, what do you pray for when tackling the slush pile?

KM: I'm looking for a novel to fall in love with. I'm looking for excellent writing, with a plot that keeps me turning pages. I'm looking for the diamond in the rough. I know that that's not a helpful answer to writers looking to query me, but I find that if there's a certain topic I'm looking for, I know how to go out and find it. I'm now just looking for that serendipitous connection of a great story and impeccable writing---just like every other
agent and editor on the planet.

GLA: It says you seek paranormal romance, but nothing about any other type of romance.  What attracts you to this specific subgenre?

KM: I'm a finicky genre reader, especially in fantasy. I don't want to learn a new language when I read a book, or have to create a completely new universe in my imagination, but I do want to escape my mundane existence. I particularly like that paranormal romance is equal parts a new and interesting, but takes place in a setting that I'm usually familiar with (you know, with the same laws of gravity and such). In the end, I'm a sucker for a romantic story, so paranormal romance satisfies both those cravings for me as a reader.

GLA: No agent has ever really talked about urban fantasy before.  If someone asked you for your "Three Tips if Writing and Submitting an Urban Fantasy," what would you tell them?

KM: Frankly, those tips would be just about the same for a writer writing in any genre.
        1. Give me characters I can care about.
        2. Give those characters something to DO.
        3. Be aware of the genre, so you know if you're treading the same path as other authors.

GLA: People say fantasy books tend to be longer than most books and don't abide by normal word counts.  Is this true with urban fantasy?
 
KM: Any story that requires the author to create a new world different from our own is going to need some extra pages to flesh that out. As long as this is done in a way that keeps the plot going and keeps the reader turning pages, the final word count doesn't really matter to me. But yes, fantasy does tend to be a little longer.

GLA:
You seek young adult works.  You don’t want picture books.  Do you accept middle grade?

KM: Yes, I will consider MG. 

GLA: You seek sports-related books.  Can this be anything?  Coaching?  Memoir?  Weird statistics?  Anything?

KM: I'm a huge college football fan and I'm making it my mission to prove to the publishing world that football fans will buy books. (Whether or not I'm tilting at windmills here is another matter.) But I am interested in all sports, and all topics.  I have one client writing a memoir as told through baseball cards, and another working on ideas about the NFL in it's early years.  Practical nonfiction on sports topics is harder, because the writer needs a major platform to sell books.

GLA: Will you be at any upcoming writers' conferences where writers can meet and pitch you?

KM: I'll be in Denver at the Romancing the Rockies conference May 1-2, 2009.

GLA: Best piece(s) of advice we haven't discussed?

KM: I believe that all writers who hope to be published should remind themselves daily that they're writing for their readers, not for themselves. Writing is definitely a personally gratifying experience and can have wonderful therapeutic and self-esteem building results--but if your reader isn't compelled to turn the page because of something the writer is *trying* to do with the narration or theme, then what good does it do? One of my writing professors used to say: "Mean less." To me, that means don't set out for your book to be *about* something, especially an abstraction (love, trauma, homesickness). Just find some characters in your imagination. Make them do something. Make the reader care about what they do.




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 Monday, April 27, 2009
Literary Agents Tell All at Boston Conference
Posted by Chuck

I just returned from Muse & the Marketplace, which is a writers' conference held in downtown Boston. The event seemed to be a big success and I gave two presentations - one on query letters to agents, and another on nonfiction book proposals.

ALSO - I sat in on an agent panel and listened to four agents share all kinds of good tips and secrets.  The four reps were:

    
  1. Mollie Glick of Foundry Literary + Media
      2. Rob McQuilkin of Lippencott Massie McQuilkin
      3. Elisabeth Weed of Weed Literary
      4. Lane Zachary of Zachary Shuster Harmsworth


Here is what they shared.  Everything
below is paraphrased. 

ON SUBMISSIONS & QUERIES:

MG: When you contact an agent with a query, if you can mention other books that the agent has repped (for example, because you repped X, I think you will like my Y), that still really works. 

LZ: Mentioning that you have an MFA is impressive and can help, but doesn’t make too much of a difference in the long run, because it’s all a matter of whether the writer can write. 

MG: When looking at a query, agents are looking for something that helps them pull your letter out of the pile and say “This person has some legitimacy.” 

LZ: The query letter is “a couple of sparkling paragraphs about what you’re writing.”  She often sees query letters with superfluous detail in them—namely about the author’s life (“I ski … I hunt.”)  If she sees superfluous detail in the letter, she assumes that the manuscript will have too much fat on it, as well. 

RM: Simultaneous submissions are normal and assumed.  In other words, it is safe and healthy to submit your work to several agents at once. 

MG: Submitting to agents and editors at the same time is counter productive because if you were to get an agent, she won’t know who you’ve submitted to and received rejections from.  This makes her job harder.

LZ: If she passes on an idea but thinks another agent at the agency will find it interesting, she will always pass it on.


ON SHORT STORIES:

RM: One of the best and most common ways to sell a collection of short stories is to repurpose them into a novel, or sell the collection as one part of a two-part deal, with the second book being an actual novel. 

LZ: Short story collections do sell, but they do so very rarely. 

Editor's Note: The thing that I noticed about short story collection success tales were that they all came around in strange ways.  For example, the first success story an agent related was how a woman traveled all the way from India to attend an American writers’ conference and met an agent personally.  The other success story told of an intern that worked at an agency where the intern said “Hey, I’ve got some short stories.”  What to notice here is that neither one of these two examples came about through a cold query submission.  
      I found it odd to hear two success stories like that when almost no agents accept queries for short story collections.  So it was not surprising to hear that neither were through queries.  They were both somewhat special circumstances.  


ON CHOOSING AN AGENT:

RM: There are distinct benefits to working with a young & hungry agent.  Namely, they will be able to spend more time helping you polish your work before it gets sent out.  A younger agent may have more time to help you. 

EW: It makes no difference whether you go with a big or small agency.  She’s worked at both, and finds very little difference.  It's all about the agent's ability, not the size of the agency.


ON OTHER TOPICS:

MG: The state of the publishing industry has meant that the market is surprising.  By that, she means that she will have an expectation regarding what a publisher will pay for a book, but the publisher is usually not offering the expected number.  They’re either offering higher or lowering than first expected.  In other words, the down economy is throwi
ng things into a shift, but it's not always bad. 

LZ: Agents are always on the hunt for new great writers and they read lots of publications.  They read literary journals to find amazing talent.  But they also ready magazines.  She recently took on an author after reading a piece by the writer in Backpacker Magazine.  The lesson here is that building credits is a good idea. 

MG: She handles more clients than people may think.  It’s because fiction takes so long to write and polish that it’s often 2-3 years between projects.  It’s her job to keep track of what’s in progress, what needs a little more work before making the editor rounds, and what is good to go out right now. 

MG: Finding an agent is like looking for a job.  Writers should be professional.  Both sides should ask questions of one another before contracts are signed. 

Editor's Note: The agents were asked if they read Scribd, a site where people can post their writing.  (Questions about these sites can up now and again at conferences.)  All four agents said no, and then seemed to have somewhat negative opinions of posting stuff online.  Rob said he doesn’t want to find secondhand material.  Mollie said she is wary of anyone who has posted too much of the work online. 

Me (Chuck Sambuchino) teaching at the conference. I gave
two presentations - one on queries to
agents, and another on nonfiction
book proposals.


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 Friday, April 03, 2009
Agent Advice: Christine Witthohn of Book Cents Literary
Posted by Chuck

"Agent Advice" is a series of quick interviews with literary and script agents who talk with Guide to Literary Agents about their thoughts on writing, publishing, and just about anything else.

This installment features Christine Witthohn of Book Cents Literary Agency, LLC. 

She is seeking: Fiction areas of interest: Single Title Romance (Contemporary, Romantic Comedy, Paranormal, Mystery/Suspense), Women's Lit (must have a strong hook), Young Adult, Mainstream Mystery/Suspense, Medical or Legal Fiction (something that hasn't been done before), Literary Fiction. Nonfiction areas of interest: We are looking for very specific NF.  Women's Issues/Experiences, Fun/Quirky Topics (particularly those of interest to women), Cookbooks (fun, ethnic, etc.), Health, Gardening (herbs, plants, flowers, etc.), Books with a "Save The Planet" theme, Entertaining, Reference, How-To Books. Not interested in: Category Romance, Erotica, Inspirational, Historical,  Sci-Fi/Fantasy, Horror/Dark Thrillers, Memoirs, Short stories/Novellas, Poetry, Screenplays.Christine is looking for romance and other genre, as well as kids works. 



Christine Witthohn

GLA: How did you become an agent?

CW: I decided I wanted to do something I enjoyed, yet something challenging.  I had always been a book worm and loved to read, and had experience as a fierce negotiator (coming from a family of eight kids) so becoming a literary agent was a natural fit for me.  I started by offering myself up as slave labor (all expenses on my own dime) to many literary agencies, only to get the doors slammed in my face!  This only made me more determined. 
        Four years later, after monthly trips of traveling back and forth to NY to meet with publishing pros, developing and nurturing important industry contacts, taking classes and attending legal/contract workshops on both coasts, and attending a numerous conferences … I finally opened my agency’s doors in 2006. 
 

GLA: What's the most recent thing you've sold?

CW: Kathryne Kennedy’s Talismans of Elfhame, her new historical paranormal romance series, to Deb Werksman at Sourcebooks, at auction, in a three-book deal.
 
GLA: Concerning children's writing, you seek "tween."  Do you mean middle grade or true tween?
 
CW: Middle grade.  I am finding that interest in middle grade is really starting to pick up.  Many of the editors I talk to are looking for wholesome, character-driven tween stories (for example: a boy and his dog/a girl and her horse).  Don’t get me wrong, editors are still looking for great YA (young adult), but don’t overlook middle grade.
        As for marketing middle grade and tween, that can be a little tricky.  It can also depend on the subject matter and bookstore.  Sometimes I see tween in the teen section of book stores and sometimes it will be displayed in the children’s section. 


GLA: In YA and teen, what are some page 1 cliches you come across? What do you see too much of at the beginning of a juvenile ms?

CW: The most common problem I see is a story that’s been told a million times before, without any new twists to
make it unique enough to stand out.  Same plot, same situations, same set up = the same ole story.  For example: abusive parents/kid’s a rebel; family member(s) killed tragically/kid’s a loner; divorced parents/kid acts out. 
        Another problem I often see is when the protagonist/main characters don’t have an age- appropriate voice.  For example: if your main character is 14, let him talk like a 14-year-old. 
        And lastly, being unable to “connect” with the main character(s).  For example: characters are too whiny or bratty.  Character shows no emotion/angst.
 
GLA: Speaking of which, what do you come across too much of in romance concerning the hook or on page 1?
 
CW: 1) Too much backstory in the set up.  2) The hook/heroine’s situation isn’t unique enough to stand out.  3) The story doesn’t grab you from the beginning to make me (or any reader, for that matter) want to keep reading.  4) The writer has a really good plot idea, but the execution falls short. 

GLA: You seek romance, but are you looking for single-title or series or ... ?

CW: I rep single title romance (unless a current client writes category, too). 
I look for contemporary (esp. with humor), paranormal (no werewolves or shapeshifters, please), and love mystery/suspense.  
 
GLA: What are you looking for right now and not getting? What do you pray for when tackling the slush pile?

CW: Something so entertaining and well written, I can’t put the story down! 
If you are a writer and have a story like that… please drop everything and send it to me, along with a synopsis! (cw@bookcentsliteraryagency.com)
        What do I pray for?  For Judith Ann (a junior agent) to come and tell me she’s already read through the whole pile! 
No, seriously… to find a jewel of a story. 
 
GLA: Let's say someone came up to you and said, "I have this story about a woman but I don't if it's women's fiction or literary fiction." What would you say to them to help them decide?

CW: Great question!  I won’t take the easy wa
y out and say, “I know it when I see it.” The difference is often subjective, but women’s fiction really focuses more on the voice/narrative and the plot, whereas, literary fiction has more emotional depth and focuses more on style.
        I would ask the person to tell me a little bit more about their story (I need more info than “this story about a woman”).  If the story sounded interesting, I’d tell them to send me a synopsis and the first chapter.

GLA: Let's stay on the topic of women's fiction because no agent has ever really delved into it. From reading good books and seeing bad submissions, what can you tell us about the dos and don't of this category? In other words, fill in this sentence, "If you're writing a women's fiction book, three things are of the highest importance ... "

CW: 1) You must have a unique plot with a great hook. 2) The story needs to be single title length (do your homework!). 3) READ - know the market you are targeting.

  
GLA: Will you be at any upcoming conferences where writers can meet and pitch you?

CW: Yes, and I go out of my way to be approachable and make myself available to writers.  I try to participate in many festivities at most of the writers' conferences I attend and I never leave early. I encourage people to introduce themselves to me at conferences and I always make time for them when they do.
       Upcoming conferences: RT Convention (April 23-26), MWA Edgar Symposium (April 29-30), The Writer's Digest Books Conference Pitch Slam (May 28), BookExpo America (May 29-30).  I will be at many more.  Check my website.
 
GLA: Speaking of conferences, tell us a little about this conference you co-sponsor in Italy...
 
CW: In 2007, I was invit
ed to the Women’s Fiction Festival (WFF) in Matera, Italy.  I attended, and loved it!  So much so, I became a sponsor.  By far, it was the best conference I had ever been to.  Believe it or not, it’s not just the shopping, food, or wine that makes this conference stand out.  It’s the people!  The festival is an international writers' conference.  Writers have access to agents and editors from the American, British, German and Italian markets (soon to include French and Spanish).  I have never been to a conference where writers have so much one-on-one access to industry professionals.  This is particularly valuable to someone who is already published and wants to promote themselves in a foreign market.
        As if that isn’t enough, the municipality of Matera (a UNESCO world heritage site and popular film locale) holds its own town festival around the writers' conference so attendees can taste local foods.  Booths are set up with free samples of: breads, wines, cheeses, olives, produce, and pastries.  They also provide entertainment with live bands on Friday and Saturday nights.  What’s not to love?  

 
GLA: Best piece(s) of advice we haven't discussed?

CW: Writing is a process - Writing IS re-writing.  Hone your skills (take classes/study the craft).  Believe in yo
urself and your work.  Maintain a sense of humor.  Never give up.  And most important ... Keep writing!
        The very best of luck to everyone



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 Tuesday, March 31, 2009
Agent Advice: Meredith Kaffel of Charlotte Sheedy Literary Agency
Posted by Chuck

"Agent Advice" is a series of quick interviews with literary and script agents who talk with Guide to Literary Agents about their thoughts on writing, publishing, and just about anything else.

This installment features Meredith Kaffel of Charlotte Sheedy Literary Agency.

She is seeking: "or children's books, my first love is YA. And my YA tastes run the gamut from the highly literary (especially fish out of water tales, outsider stories told teetering from the edge, high concept novels taking on themes with gravity, up-market historical fantasy and stories involving the arts in some way), to the highly commercial (teen paranormal with a twist, high school dramas and friendship sagas, anything with sass and attitude, etc). I also enjoy smart middle-grade fiction, and I will take on the occasional quirky picture book manuscript. I'm actively looking for new illustrators as well -- for both the picture book and graphic novel/comic markets. As for adult manuscripts, I'm primarily looking for narrative nonfiction (specifically books dealing with food, science, international themes, feminism, cultural trends, art and literary history, music, and general "juicy" history and biography), and the rare literary novel that steals my heart. I tend to be drawn more toward darkly wry and edgy fiction than novels brimming with sugar-and-sunshine, but my rule about taking on a project is that there are no set rules. I just have to love it." I accept both email and snail mail queries. For email, please send to meredith@sll.com, and for snail mail, to: Meredith Kaffel Charlotte Sheedy Literary Agency, 65 Bleecker St., Ste. 12, New York, NY 10012. For initial queries, I prefer a query letter along with 1-3 sample chapters for fiction, or a proposal for nonfiction."

GLA: How did you become an agent?

MK: I interned for agent Sarah Burnes one summer, when I was an undergrad at Yale.  I watched the rhythm of her day, the intimate author and editor contact, the invigorating daily flurry, and thought "that's what I want to do." After that, I kept interning in publishing until I graduated, and then, after a brief stint as a writer's assistant, I joined the Charlotte Sheedy Literary Agency.

GLA: You have a Sterling e-mail, but you're not technically with Sterling, is that right?

MK: Good question. Charlotte Sheedy Literary Agency (CSLA) is an affiliate of Sterling Lord Literistic (SLL). Charlotte owns her own agency, but we're a sister company of SLL – a boutique agency within the larger agency. It’s really a best of both worlds situation: the intimacy of a small agency, complete with the wonderful SLL extended family.

GLA: What's the most recent thing you've sold?

MK: A hilarious, quirky middle grade novel called Flirt Club by Cathleen Daly. It went to Neal Porter at Roaring Brook exclusively, because I wanted Neal's gorgeous aesthetic on this book. Thankfully, he loved it as much as I did.

GLA: You look for a lot of children's stuff.  Specifically, with "fish out of water" stories - do you gravitate toward multicultural tales?  Or can it simply be "poor kid gets sent to a rich boarding school" story?

MK: Charlotte and I both are very interested in multicultural tales, yes. But I'm also interested in any character who feels like an outsider, a misfit, anyone struggling to figure out who he or she is or how to exist outside his or her comfort zone.

GLA: Does "tween" exist as a category?  If you got a query for a tween book that clearly straddled the YA-MG line, would you take it on?  Or is it too hard to market because it's neither one nor the other?

MK: Tween does exist, and various publishers even have specific tween imprints in place. As for queries, the same standard holds true for me in terms of tween as it does with YA or MG: if the voice is authentic, then I'm probably interested. However, I do look more at plot with tween novels: right now, it's not enough just to have a great tween voice -- the storyline also needs to be unique enough to stand out in the marketplace.

GLA: What's more common?  Seeing a juvenile ms that talks down the audience, or one that's a little too purple-prose and over their heads?

MK: Well, typically I'd say the former. But since CSLA is the agency of Lemony Snicket, we also see a lot of queries attempting to mimic Snicket's highly idiosyncratic voice – which sometimes unfortunately results in the latter!

GLA: What are you looking for right now and not getting?  What do you pray for when tackling the slush pile?

MK: Things I cross my fingers for: 
      1) High-concept YA novels - especially something as brave as Jay Asher's Thirteen Reasons Why
      2) YA and adult novels that make me laugh out loud (either light comedy or something really dark and twisted, something that's 'I can't believe I'm allowing myself to laugh at this, I should be arrested' funny)
      3) Science for the trade market, pop sociology, books regarding cultural trends, counterculture histories, books which weave food and/or travel in as a theme, books about escape, about things lost and found, music histories for the trade market, compelling biographies of undersung women in history
      4) Books about the renaissance (fiction or non, and especially YA novels set in the renaissance)
      5) T
een paranormals that subvert and reinvent the genre and aren’t just vampire knockoffs
 

GLA: Following up on that last question, you seek plenty of narrative nonfiction in a whole host of subjects?  Which of these categories, in your opinion, is really under-mined, so to speak?  Which category is wide open and hasn't been fully explored yet?

MK: CSLA has long represented works of African-American history, but I think this category remains under-mined. Less crucially, I'd also love to see a book on the internet's effect on radio from a cultural standpoint, having become a recent NPR pod-cast fanatic…!

GLA: Since you seek narrative nonfiction, do you want a book proposal, a full completed manuscript, or both when pitching you?

MK: A really bang-up proposal with a sample chapter or two is often enough for me when it comes to narrative nonfiction -- at least in terms of taking someone on. Though if you’re not submitting many chapters, your proposal should be in the same voice as your book would be – it should leap off the page in the same way and should not be dull just because it’s a proposal!

GLA: Will you be at any upcoming conferences where writers can meet and pitch
you?

MK: Indeed, I'll be attending the Wyoming Writers, Inc. conference this year in June, 2009, and also the Surrey International Writers’ Conference in October 2009.

GLA: Best piece(s) of advice we haven't covered?

MK: Try to educate yourself in terms of the current state of the publishing industry, and be ready and excited to help market and promote your own book as much as possible. To this point, having an already-established Web presence helps immensely – in finding an agent and ultimately a publisher.


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 Tuesday, March 24, 2009
Check Out Interviews With Two Agents: ICM's Tina Wexler, and Curtis Brown's Ginger Clark
Posted by Chuck

I came across Gretchen McNeil's Seanchai blog recently, and saw it had posted two recent interviews with top-notch agents.

Click here to read an interview with Tina Wexler of ICM
.

Click here to read an interview with Ginger Clark of Curtis Brown.
 
         

                      Ginger Clark                                   Tina Wexler

A little more info:

GINGER CLARK represents science fiction, fantasy, paranormal romance, paranormal chick lit, literary horror, and young adult and middle grade fiction.

TINA WEXLER specializes in middle grade and YA fiction, with particular interest in adventure stories with boy appeal, contemporary coming of age stories, tall tales, and mysteries. On the adult side, she is looking for narrative nonfiction (religion, memoir, pop culture) and up-market women's fiction. 

(By the way, both Tina and Ginger will be at Writer's Digest's own conference in New York on May 27, 2009, if you're thinking about pitching either of them.)


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 Saturday, March 21, 2009
Agent Advice: Joanna Stampfel-Volpe of Nancy Coffey Literary & Media Representation
Posted by Chuck

"Agent Advice" is a series of quick interviews with literary and script agents who talk with Guide to Literary Agents about their thoughts on writing, publishing, and just about anything else.

This installment features Joanna Stampfel-Volpe of Nancy Coffey Literary & Media Representation

She is seeking: Joanna is looking for genre fiction, children's works, and some nonfiction areas. She accepts hard copy or e-mail queries - e-mail address: LiteraryNancy2@gmail.com. Send snail mail queries to 240 West 35th Street, Suite 500, New York, NY 10001. Joanna's interests: "chap books to upper YA (non-fiction, contemporary, humor, historical and fantasy *fantasy/sci-fi needs to really stand out, unique), romance (historical, paranormal, contemporary), fantasy (women's, urban, steampunk, unique), up-market fiction (dark, literary, horror, dark comedies, speculative fic), narrative non-fiction (pop culture, environmental, foodie)." She is NOT interested in "cozies, cookbooks, academic nonfiction, epic fantasy for adults, hi-science fiction, poetry, collections/short stories, screenplays."

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