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# Wednesday, September 26, 2007
Agent Advice: Jeff Kleinman of Folio Literary Management
Posted by Chuck

Looking back through the 2006 edition of Guide to Literary Agents, I reread a great interview with agent Jeff Kleinman, previously of Graybill & English. A few years ago, Jeff acted as one of the founders of Folio Literary Management, LLC.

I've pasted some of that interview here below:

Jeff Kleinman

GLA: There are many qualities a writer must possess in order to be a successfully published author. What quality do you find most important?

JK: Besides wonderful writing and storytelling abilities, I really hope to find authors that realize all of usthe agent, editor, marketing folk, copyeditors, etc.are all on the writer's side. We all want to create a good book, and we all want to find the next book we can fall head-over-heels-in-love with. It's that helpfulness, that willingness, that "Sure, I'll go the extra mile," that can really make a difference.

GLA: If an agent is interested in a manuscript, he'll sometimes ask for an exclusive read. What does an exclusive read mean for both the agent and the writer? Under what circumstances might an agent request an exclusive read?

JK: Agents assume, in this marketplace, the writer has simulatenously queried an unknown number of agents. That said, when some agents want to read your project, they want to be able to read it and know they're the only person reading it ... So, the first agent will ask for an exclusive read.
      I think an exclusive's a fine thing, if that's what the agent needs, but the writer needs to be aware he's giving something up by giving that agent an exclsuive readso, the agent should provide something in exchange, perhaps the assurance he will read it quickly. Think of it like a bargain: "I (the writer) am giving you (the agent) a certain time with my manuscript, and you won't have to worry about someone else competing for it. In exchange, you agree to read it quickly because other agents are also interested in reading it. What's "quickly"? It depends on the agent. I think, though, about two months for a novel and about three weeks for a proposal is fair.

GLA: What's the biggest mistake a writer can make when he submits to you?

JK: The biggest mistake is not acting professionally enough. Writers need to keep in mind as soon as they enter the publishing business that they need to treat it as a business. Treat it as a job interview. Handle your interview like a professional: be courteous, concise, helpful and provide the kind of information the guy on the other side of the desk needs to have. Desperation rarely works; your potential boss might run the other way. Discourtesy (i.e., writing" Dear Agent" or "Dear Sir/Madam") may make it seem you haven't bothered to do your homework.

        Jeff Kleinman represents both fiction and nonfiction. To see his detailed submissions pages, click here.


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Wednesday, September 26, 2007 2:46:58 PM (Eastern Daylight Time, UTC-04:00)  #  Comments [1]
The Management Co. Changes Submission Guidelines
Posted by Chuck

The Management Company, a California-based agency focusing on film and TV scripts, recently changed their submission guidelines. Here are their new guidelines:

How to contact: Submit by e-mail only (tmco@mail.com), with the e-mail subject line reading "Writer Query Letter." Have a clear, one-sentence log line in bold type and include 2-4 short paragraphs summarizing the story (i.e., what would be on the back of a DVD).

This agency will contact writers by phone for more information, but only if interested. Queries that do not follow these guidelines may not be read. This agency is actively seeking "studio-quality, high-end action scripts with great characters, as well as really good comedies." No horror please.

Address queries to Tom Klassan, The Management Co.


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Wednesday, September 26, 2007 1:53:04 PM (Eastern Daylight Time, UTC-04:00)  #  Comments [0]
# Monday, September 24, 2007
Leather Bound Words Agency Closes
Posted by Chuck

Leather Bound Words, a newer agency based in St. Louis that focused on nonfiction books, has closed, according to its Web site.

See the Web site to see the closure notice.


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Monday, September 24, 2007 3:44:25 PM (Eastern Daylight Time, UTC-04:00)  #  Comments [2]
# Friday, September 21, 2007
How Royalties and Advances Work
Posted by Chuck

If you're going to wheel and deal with agents and editors, you'll end up spending more time than you'd like discussing rights, contracts, advances, royalties and a whole lot of other boring important stuff. That said, I want to address a recent question that came in over e-mail regarding how advances and royalties work. In other words, how does the payment process work when you sell a book?

For this example, I'll keep it real simple (for my own sake and well as yours). Let's say you acquire an agent and sell a novel. The publishing house offers you royalties of $3 per book sold. 
      It's probable that you'll be given money in advance - more specifically: an advance against royalties. What this means is that they give you a lump sum of money before the book comes out as payment that's yours to keep - say, $60,000. However, the money is not in addition to royalties, but rather part of royalties - meaning they've given you royalties for the first 20,000 books (times $3/book) upfront. Since they've already paid you the royalties of the first 20,000 books, you will not starting actually making $3/book until you sell the copy 20,001.

Think of it like this. When you get hired at a new job, you ask for several months pay upfront and the boss agrees. It's not a separate signing bonus you're getting - it's your hard-earned money paid to you early. You get the lump sum quickly, but then you don't get paid again till the regular checks start months later.

Many things to consider:

  • Royalties per book vary greatly. If you get $3/book, that's pretty darn good. If you write a typical nonfiction book, you may just get $1/book.
  • Advances against royalties are a pretty sweet deal. You get a lump sum upfront, which you get to keep even if the book fairs poorly. (Repeat: The advance is yours. Period.) But if the book takes off, you will start getting royalties down the road.
  • Reality check: Be aware that the money amount promised will hit your bank account as a lot less than expected, as Uncle Sam will take a big cut and your agent takes 15%.
  • You may run into a "flat fee" situation, where a publishing company pays you one sum of money upfront with no talk of royalties. This is legitimate - just make sure it's what you want.
  • It's common for a house to break up the advance. They may give you $30,000 when you sign the contract and then $30,000 upon completion of an acceptable manuscript. On this note, make sure you turn in an "acceptable manuscript," so that you get to not only receive the second payment, but also keep the first one, and not have a publisher demand it back.
  • Read your contract thoroughly. It's all spelled out.

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Friday, September 21, 2007 3:25:38 PM (Eastern Daylight Time, UTC-04:00)  #  Comments [4]
# Wednesday, September 19, 2007
The Evolution of Agenting (2008 GLA Article Excerpt)
Posted by Chuck

2008 Article Excerpt:

With the recent news that Imprint Agency is now FinePrint Literary Management (see last post), I wanted to post something else related to the merger. The principal of Imprint is the great agent Stephany Evans, who, it just so happens, penned an article this year for the upfront section of the 2008 Guide to Literary Agents. See an excerpt from her article below.

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Stephany Evans talks about how
the roles of agents and publishers
have changed over time.

" ... It's never been simpler to learn an agent's likes and interests before querying. But just as you have more access to agent information, publishers and agents have more access to information about youespecially if you've already had a book published.
      "Introduced in 2001, Nielson's BookScan ... allows editors a chance to 'run the numbers' on books in the 'competing titles' sections of their proposals. If too many (competing titles) show lackluster volume, an editor may conclude that the potential market for your book is not worth pursuing ... If you have published before, be sure to provide your agent with solid sales figures and be prepared to detail how and where the books were sold, whether you sold them out of the trunk of your station wagon, or at pet stores, or via your Web site. And if editors are paying attention to things such as BookScan, rest assured agents are, too. An agent needs to know about a project's vulnerabilities from the get-go.
"

       - "The Evolution of Agenting: An Agent Talks of Change" (page 68)

While Guide to Literary Agents is best known for its large and detailed list of literary agencies, every edition has plenty of informational articles and interviews designed to help writers perfect their craft and contact agents wisely. The 2008 edition is no different, with more than 80 pages of articles addressing numerous writing and publishing topics.


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Wednesday, September 19, 2007 4:48:59 PM (Eastern Daylight Time, UTC-04:00)  #  Comments [0]
FinePrint Literary Management Opens
Posted by Chuck

It's been in the works for a while now, but it now seems to be official.

Two great midsize literary agencies in Manhattan - Imprint Agency and the Peter Rubie Literary Agencyhave merged into FinePrint Literary Management.

The new Web site is up. Both agencies are part of the Association of Authors' Representatives. Make submission changes if necessary.

Imprint Agency consists of:
      Stephany Evans
      Gary Heidt
      Meredith Hays
      Janet Reid, formerly of JetReid Literary

Peter Rubie Literary Agency consists of:   
      Peter Rubie
      June Clark
      Amy Tipton

Hat Tip: The great Kristen Howe


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# Thursday, September 13, 2007
Agency Profile: Anderson Literary Management
Posted by Chuck

The following is submission
information for Anderson Literary

Management, LLC in New York

12 W. 19th St., New York NY 10011. Phone: (212)645-6045. Fax: (212)741-1936. E-mail: kathleen@andersonliterary.com. Contact: Kathleen Anderson. Seeking new and established writers. Prior to her current position, Ms. Anderson was with Grinberg Literary. She has more than two decades of publishing experience. Established: 2006 Member of AAR. Represents 100+ clients. 20% of clients are new/unpublished writers. Specializes in: commercial fiction (literary, women's, thriller, historical, young adult) and commercial nonfiction (investigative journalism, women's studies, biography, environmental studies, history, philosophy and religious studies).

Currently Handles: 50% nonfiction books; 50% novels. Nonfiction subjects of interest: Anthropology/Archaeology, Art/Architecture, Biography, Current Affairs, Education, Ethnic, Gay/Lesbian, Government, History, Memoirs, Music, Nature, Psychology, Women's. Fiction subjects of interest: Action/Adventure, Ethnic, Family Saga, Feminist, Gay/Lesbian, Historical, Literary, Mystery/Suspense, Thriller, Westerns, Young Adult, Women's.

How to submit: Query with SASE. Submit: Synopsis, first 3 sample chapters (fiction), proposal (nonfiction). Accepts e-mail queries. No fax queries. Accepts simultaneous submissions. Responds in 12 weeks to queries and manuscripts. Returns materials only with SASE. Does not want: genre fantasy, sci-fi or romance. Sold 20+ titles in the last year.
Recent sales: Vibes, by Amy Ryan (Houghton Mifflin); Another Faust, by Daniel and Dina Nayeri (Candlewick); The Assassins' Gate, by George Packer; 17 Huntley Gardens, by Richard Mason (Knopf); The Reindeer People, by Piers Vitebsky (Houghton Mifflin); Maps for Lost Lovers, by Nadeem Aslam (Knopf). Terms:
Agent receives 15% commission on domestic sales. Offers written contract.


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Thursday, September 13, 2007 2:00:12 PM (Eastern Daylight Time, UTC-04:00)  #  Comments [2]
Editor Interview: Nick Eliopulos of Random House Children's
Posted by Chuck

The GLA Blog has a special treat this weekan interview with Nick Eliopulos, editor for Random House Children's Books. He fits right in with our recent focus on agents and editors for children's writing, which includes picture books, young adult and middle grade works.

Associate Editor at Random House Books for Young Readers (an imprint of Random House Children's Books), Nick Eliopulos started out at the University Press of Florida, where a college internship led to a full-time job as an acquisitions assistant. Eventually, he moved to New York and subsisted on freelance for a few months before landing at Random House.   

Two of Nick's projects will be published in 2007: Squirrelly Gray, a picture book by indie-comics superstar James Kochalka, and The Hound of Rowan, first in a middle-grade fantasy trilogy by newcomer Henry H. Neff. His comics work appears in the anthologies Stuck in the Middle (Viking, 2007) and First Kiss (Then Tell) (Bloomsbury, 2008). He has survived three consecutive winters in Manhattan.


Nick Eliopulos

 

GLA: What are some subjects or some styles that you don't see tackled often, and wonder why more writers are not tackling such a subject/style?

 

NE: Thoughtful, literary novels with boy appeal. Newbery-caliber stuff. These books are few and far between. And if we're worried that boys don't read enough, not making books for them won't help the problem.

 

GLA: Do you ever turn down work because it's too "smart"meaning either the concept is too complex or the language is too advanced?

 

NE: I recently read The Golden Compass, and you know what? It's way too smart. The language, the premise, the roaming POV ... but it's such a wonderful book and it's obviously found an audience.

      I hope I'm never in a position where I have to turn down a submission because it's smart or challenging. I can imagine, as an editor, asking for edits to broaden the appeal: Can this concept be clearer? Does the language seem like too much here? Does the work benefit from limiting the POV? But never in the interest of talking down to the audience.

      (I'm thinking mainly of novels here, of course. If you're working with an established format, like the Random House Stepping Stones line, then it's essential that the language fit the guidelines of that format. And I think picture books have limits, as well, though mostly in terms of content.)

 

GLA: What is the most common reasons you and your fellow board of editors turn down a project (manuscript)?

 

NE: We have to think in terms of our listwhere our strengths lie. But it's a fine line. We want something that is somewhat familiar, but that offers something new.

      That's really the best way to find a publisher--look at who's publishing work similar to your own. If my group is having success with fantasy novels and you submit a teen cookbook, chances are we won't have the resources to make your book a hit.

 

GLA: When you sit down to read a manuscript, what do you want to see (or "feel") in the first 10-20 pages?

 

NE: A strong sense of characterthrough action and dialogue as opposed to narration.

      Much of what I read is slow to get to the actual plot. That's OK in a draft; it (will help) if there's some kind of synopsis so that I know what to expect. But voice and character should be front and center from the start.

 

GLA: Many YA books follow a similar formula. With that in mind, is a big part in the concept? Like writing the standard "Girl feels awkward in high school and likes boy" except "Girl turns into a werewolf at night"? Does it need a hook like that, or can you still write a good story that no big hook?

 

NE: Hooks helpa lot. Even once I've signed on a book, I have to pitch it to sales and marketing, who have to pitch it to retailers and librarians. If you've got a unique and memorable spin, that's half the battle won.

      But different books come with different expectations. If you've written a story about an awkward girl with not a werewolf in sight, but with a strong and believable voicewell, there's likely an audience for that book. Notice that a lot of the award-winners are quiet tales that you can't do justice in a one-line pitch.

 

GLA: What advice would you like to give concerning a topic we haven't addressed yet?

 

NE: Read! Read a lot. And not just children's books. It definitely helps to know what's out there for your target age groupbut if you're up on current events or quantum physics or the cultural history of deodorant, then you have a better chance of bringing something altogether new to the table.

 

GLA: Does Random House Children's ever take unagented submissions?

 

NE: Officially we don't, but it's certainly happened before. Chances are that a blind submission will eventually be seen by somebodybut having an agent is really the way to go. For one thing, it guarantees your submission will be read. For another, it truly pays off to work with someone who knows the ins and outs of the business (and who can give you objective feedback before your work lands on an editor's desk).

 

GLA: Will you be at any upcoming conferences where writers can meet you?

 

NE: Yesthe Rutgers University Council on Children's Literature in October 2007.


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# Tuesday, September 11, 2007
Americans Need Not Apply...
Posted by Chuck

I just received a note from the Ampersand Agency, based in the United Kingdom. The note basically says that although they have always had a policy of taking on quality American writers, UK publishers are just not interested in writers from across the Atlantic.

Sigh. This brings up a bigger question - is it worth it at all to query a UK agency? There are plenty located overseas, and plenty take queries from American authors, but I so rarely hear a success story. This sounds like a good article topic for the 2009 Guide to Literary Agency upfront section...


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Tuesday, September 11, 2007 10:57:04 AM (Eastern Daylight Time, UTC-04:00)  #  Comments [1]
Around the Properties 9/11/2007
Posted by Chuck

The most recent WD special publication is out: You Can Write for Children. (If you don't see it in bookstores, don't worry - it will be there soon.) The magazine is packed full of information for children's writers of all kinds - YA, middle grade and picture book writing tips.

WD's own "answer man," Brian Klems, has posted a new post on his Questions and Quandaries Blog about writing log lines for movie scripts.

The WD poetry blog, Poetic Asides, is still going strong thanks to numerous posts by both Writer's Market Editor Robert Brewer and Poet's Market Editor Nancy Breen.

On a side note, if you live in the Lexington, Ky. area, several editors from Writer's Digest will be at the Joseph Beth Booksellers tonight (Sept. 11) for a big Q&A session at 7 p.m. Stop on by!


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Tuesday, September 11, 2007 10:29:39 AM (Eastern Daylight Time, UTC-04:00)  #  Comments [0]
# Wednesday, September 05, 2007
'Create a Word' Contest
Posted by Chuck

Writer Unboxed, a helpful site devoted to genre writing, has kicked off a cool contest asking writers to create a new word.

Writers must create a new word and then define it. The winner gets a sweet prize indeed: more than $150 worth of Writer's Digest books.

See the Web site page for all the details.



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Wednesday, September 05, 2007 3:38:05 PM (Eastern Daylight Time, UTC-04:00)  #  Comments [0]
# Wednesday, August 29, 2007
'All Agents - All Day'
Posted by Chuck

Just got a tip from a fellow editor (thanks, Alice) about the Backspace Agent-Author Seminar, Nov. 6-7, in Manhattan. It looks to be a large conference-like gathering with plenty of powerful agents in attendance. It seems like there will be free time built in where authors can schmooze with reps. This one is not to miss if you're in the area.

All the information is available online:
http://allagents.bksp.org/index.htm


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Wednesday, August 29, 2007 10:14:47 AM (Eastern Daylight Time, UTC-04:00)  #  Comments [1]
Why Your Manuscript Can Get Rejected (Part 3)
Posted by Chuck

At Killer Nashville, a trio of extremely knowledgeable publishing pros held a panel on the most common reasons why a manuscript is rejected by an agent. Below you'll find part two of this post series.

Keep in mind that the panelists were discussing why a manuscript will be rejected, not a novel synopsis or query letter. They were talking about problems within the writing.

Panelist No. 3: Maryglenn McCombs

Editor at Oceanview; book publicity specialist
http://www.maryglenn.com

Maryglenn's top reasons why your manuscript can be rejected:

1. Not following the publisher’s (or agent’s) submission guidelines. The guidelines exist for a reason. 

           

2. Early overpopulation—too many characters at the beginning of a story, especially when they’re introduced quickly. She said she received one submission that had 40 names in the first chapter. If the reader has to flip back pages to clarify who’s who, the writer is in trouble. 

           

3. Not having consistent tense. Don't start a story in past tense and then switch to present in the next chapter.

           

4. Sex scenes with lurid and unnecessary details.

 

5. (For the query letter or nonfiction book proposal) – Lack of touch with reality. Mentioning Oprah or saying that your work will be a bestseller shows you’re not a professional. 


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# Monday, August 27, 2007
New Agency Alert: Spiridon Literary Agency
Posted by Chuck

Update: As of April 2009, it looks
like this agency
is closed.

- Chuck

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Reminder: Newer agencies are golden opportunities for new writers because they're likely building their client list; however, always make sure your work is as perfect as it can be before submitting, and only query agencies that are a great fit for your work. Otherwise, you're just wasting time and postage.

The Spiridon Literary Agency

P.O. Box 47594, 946 Lawrence Ave. E., Unit 2, Toronto ON M3C 1P0, Canada. Phone: (416)850-8767. E-mail: spiridon@rogers.com. Contact: Alethea Spiridon. Seeking new and established writers. Prior to becoming an agent, Ms. Spiridon was an editor for Harlequin Books in Toronto. Established: 2007. This agency specializes in romance and women's fiction. "I lived and breathed romance fiction for 6.5 years while an editor. I know what editors are looking for and can guide writers so they can land that much coveted first or next contract."

Currently Handles: 25% nonfiction books, 25% novels, 25% short story collections, 25% juvenile. Nonfiction subjects of interest: Business/Economics, Child Guidance/Parenting, Cooking/Foods/Nutrition, Current Affairs, Health/Medicine, History, How-To, Juvenile nonfiction, Language/Literature/Criticism, Memoirs, Nature/Environment, Popular Culture, Self-Help/Personal Improvement, Women's Issues/Studies. Fiction subjects of interest: Action/Adventure, Confession, Erotica, Experimental, Family Saga, Fantasy, Feminist, Glitz, Historical, Humor/Satire, Juvenile, Literary, Mainstream/Contemporary, Mystery/Suspense, Picture Books, Romance, Young Adult.

How to contact: Query with SASE. Submit:Outline/Proposal, Synopsis, Author Bio, 50 pages if submitting fiction, SASE. Accepts e-mail queries. No fax queries. Accepts simultaneous submissions. Responds in 4 weeks to queries. Responds in 6 weeks to manuscripts. Returns materials only with SASE. Actively seeking: Actively seeking romance, women's fiction, young adult, middle grade, nonfiction, mysteries, literary fiction and commercial fiction.

Terms: Agent receives 15% commission on domestic sales; 20% commission on foreign sales. Offers written contract. This agency charges for office expenses, such as postage and photocopies. Tips: "Think of the agent as your first reader. Do a meticulous self-edit of your work to ensure you present your best possible writing. Observe how other books are marketed by reading tons of back cover copy and then write a blurb for your own book. If you’re struggling, you might not have a clear sense of direction for your work. You need to have a solid sense of your manuscript so you can present it seamlessly to agents (and then editors). Be clear. Be concise."


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# Friday, August 24, 2007
Why Your Manuscript Can Get Rejected (Part 2)
Posted by Chuck

At Killer Nashville, a trio of extremely knowledgeable publishing pros held a panel on the most common reasons why a manuscript is rejected by an agent. Below you'll find part two of this post series.

Keep in mind that the panelists were discussing why a manuscript will be rejected, not a novel synopsis or query letter. They were talking about problems within the writing.

Panelist No. 2: Donna Bagdasarian

Agent at Maria Carvainis Agency, Inc.
Formerly at William Morris

http://www.authorsontheweb.com/features/0105-literary-agent/carvainis.asp

Donna's top reasons why your manuscript can be rejected:

1. Problems with basic writing skills—grammar, syntax, defining who the protagonist is. To be successful, aspiring writers must learn how to write—well. 

 

2. Bad dialogue. Write like people speak. 

 

3. Too much plot. Writers may read a variety of books by bestselling mystery authors and then try to take plot elements from several of these books, combining those elements into one convoluted tale. Write one book, not eight books crammed into one. 

 

4. Not having the protagonist involved in the climax.

 

5. Spending too much time at the beginning of a story on a character who seems to be the protagonist, but isn't.

 

6. Supplanting quality for a gimmick. Take a moment and examine certain gimmicks, such as the following: 
      - Writing in the second person

      - Having many points of view
      - Having your book be very, very dark in nature
      - Having scenes in a backwards order

      - Hopscotch (where you can jump around anywhere and the story still makes sense)

      These gimmicks are unique, and can produce an extraordinary book, but they can only be pulled off by the most superior of writers—and most writers are not superior writers. Therefore, writers should pass on all such gimmicks and just try to tell a good story. 

 

7. Excessive and salacious material. When your manuscript is complete and a peer/editor says "It needs more violence/sex/action/dialogue," they may be right, but inserting these aspects in the book must make sense. There can’t just be violence or sex in a story simply to have it. Make it work. 

 

8. Know how much is too much. If you can cut a scene and the story still works, you must cut it. Ask of the scene: "Why is it here? What does it do to further the plot?"

 

9. Purple prose—writing where the reader is conscious that these are the author’s thoughts, not the character's. This is prose where the language is excessively flowery and/or lyrical.


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Helpful Resource of the Day: Crusie/Mayer Blog
Posted by Chuck

A few years ago, two prominent writers - romance writer Jennifer Crusie and mystery writer Bob Mayer decided to team up together and write a romantic mystery. The result was Don't Look Down, a book that received praise for its content, and press for how the authors teamed up to collaborate on such a project.

Since then, not only have Crusie and Mayer finished a second book together, but they've posted a blog that instructs on writing. Though the blog is now dead, just like with Miss Snark's site, there is a wealth of information left behind for writers to mine and enjoy.

The blog (called He Wrote/She Wrote) deals a lot with craft, and touches on numerous topics. Getting to know more about them is also wise if collaboration with another author is in your future. 



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# Thursday, August 23, 2007
Reasons Why Your Manuscript Can Get Rejected (Part 1)
Posted by Chuck

At Killer Nashville, a trio of extremely knowledgeable publishing pros held a panel on the most common reasons why a manuscript is rejected by an agent. Below you'll find part one of this post series.

Keep in mind that the panelists were discussing why a manuscript will be rejected, not a novel synopsis or query letter. They were talking about problems within the writing.

Panelist No. 1: Hallie Ephron

Author of several mystery novels
Book reviewer for the Boston Globe
Author: Writing and Selling Your Mystery Novel (WD Books)
www.hallieephron.com

Hallie's top reasons why your manuscript can be rejected:

1. Profligate use of adverbs. For instance, saying "She looked at me and smiled happily." That's telling, not showing. Instead of using adverbs, use action to show the characters' feelings and emotions.

2. Predictability—using the same plot as others. For example, a cliche mystery plot opening hook is this: A P.I. picks up his office phone and his ex-wife is on the line. She's in trouble, but can’t say why. They agree to meet later at a bar or parking lot, but she never shows because she’s been murdered. 
      "
I want twists. Surprise me in the first chapter and I'll keep reading."

3. Too many killers. A recent manuscript she read revealed six people were actually complicit in the book's murder. It’s convoluted, confusing, and shows that the author had to pull six rabbits out of a hat at the end to wow us. This problem is likely because of earlier problems in Act II—a.k.a "the muddy middle."

4. Point of view that’s out of control. If you’re in a character’s head, stay there until the scene is over.

5. Prologues that don’t work—where writers have a boring opening, so they simply pluck out an exciting scene from the middle, put it at the beginning, and call it the prologue. 

6. A plot with no spine. When the scenes seem to jump around—you’re here, you’re there, now you’re there—the book has no backbone. "You have to get me to care about the main plot for me to keep reading."

7. Getting stuck to an outline. "Don’t let your plot trap your characters." If you write an outline and, in the middle of the story, the protagonist is supposed to run into a burning building, that’s fine. But as you begin the flesh out your protagonist and write the book, you may craft a character who wouldn’t realistically run into a burning building—perhaps he’s too smart, or too cowardly or whatever. 

      Her final tips: "Surprise me. Make me laugh. Make me care about your characters. Don’t let the frustration get you down. We all go through the 'It’s a piece of sh*t' stage."


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My Adventures in Nashville
Posted by Chuck

After speaking in Maine last week, I flew directly to Tennessee for the mystery writers' conference, Killer Nashville (see post about losing luggage below to get a sense of my Friday).

Missing luggage aside, the conference was great. There was a great variety of speakers, including agent Donna Bagdasarian, as well as mystery authors Hallie Ephron, Chris Roerden, P.J. Parrish and Don Bruns. All these great writers were in attendance, not to mention, the man himself, Michael Connelly, who spoke as well. At one point, during author signings, I was sitting next to Michael at a table. He had a line about a bazillion people long waiting for autographs. I sat there, tapping my pen, looking at his line, and thinking "I'm nothing!"

Those in attendance at the Saturday night dinner were privy to Don Bruns picking up the guitar and singing. The man can sing - and I can prove it. See this link to watch him play:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=CVcNFtN5N1c

Conference coordinator Clay Stafford (left) presents
keynote speaker Michael Connelly with his gift: a
sweet six-string.

Me, on the breakfast panel, listening to Oceanview
editor Maryglenn McCombs.

If writing thrillers, mysteries, suspense, etc. is your bag, try and make it next year. The dates are already set: Aug. 15-17, 2008. Word on the street is that the coordinators are planning on getting more agents and editors in attendance for writers to pitch, and making the conference a little longer.


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Thursday, August 23, 2007 10:04:08 AM (Eastern Daylight Time, UTC-04:00)  #  Comments [0]
Meet a WD Books Editor: Fall 2007
Posted by Chuck

There's still plenty of time to sign up for one or many fall writers' conferences, where you can meet agents, network and recharge your batteries. Some conferences this fall have invited Writer's Digest Books editors to come and speak. Here's a rundown of some autumn engagements for WDB staffers:

      Market Books Tour: Dayton, Aug. 29, Dayton, OH. Editors in attendance: Alice Pope, editor of Children's Writer's & Illustrator's Market; Robert Brewer, editor of Writer's Market; and Nancy Breen, editor of Poet's Market. Topics: General publishing Q&A with the crowd.

      Market Books Tour: Lexington, Sept. 11, Lexington, KY. Editors in attendance: Chuck Sambuchino, editor of Guide to Literary Agents, Alice Pope, editor of Children's Writer's & Illustrator's Market; and Robert Brewer, editor of Writer's Market. Topics: General publishing Q&A with the crowd.

      Midwest Literary Festival, Oct. 5-7, Aurora, IL. Editors in attendance: Kelly Nickell, WD trade book editor; Lauren Mosko, WD trade books editor; and Chuck Sambuchino, editor of Guide to Literary Agents. Session topics: "Mastering the Query Letter," "Selecting a Literary Agent," and many more.

      La Jolla Writers' Conference, Nov. 2-4, San Diego, CA. Editor in attendance: Chuck Sambuchino. Chuck's session topics: TBA.

Come out and meet a WD Books editor!

PS. If you're interested in receiving notifications about upcoming writers' conferences, sign up for the free biweekly GLA newsletter by visiting www.guidetoliteraryagents.com. The newsletter always includes several conferences and which agents will be in attendance to meet writers.


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# Wednesday, August 22, 2007
International Transactions Address Change
Posted by Chuck

International Transactions, the literary agency of agents Sandra and Peter Riva, just sent me a postcard saying that the agency's addresses have changed. To see their submissions guidelines, open this PDF link. The submissions e-mail is submissions@IntlTrans.com.

The New Principle Mailing Address:

I.T., Inc.
Box 97
28 Alope Way
Gila, NM 88038-0097
Phone/fax/e-mail remain the same

New NYC Office:

I.T., Inc.
Suite 9L
3 Hanover Square
New York, NY 10004
Phone/fax/e-mail remain the same


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# Tuesday, August 21, 2007
Around the Properties 8/21/2007
Posted by Chuck

If you've ever thought about going back to school for more classes on writing, consider Writers Online Workshops. It's a variety of online classes and workshops taught by WD staffers, contributors and editors. Fall sessions are about to begin.
      I myself will be instructing "Fundamentals of Nonfiction Writing," starting on Sept. 6. Sign up now!
      Also see the full list of courses available.
      As well as the faculty link.

Novel & Shory Story Writer's Market has a new editor - Rachel McDonald. Get to know her through her posting on the NSSWM blog. Recently, she's posted some fiction writing contests as well as an excerpt from the newest edition of the book.

WD Columnist/funnyman Kevin Alexander has just completed his thesis, which has given him not only plenty to joke about, but also more time to write posts. Check out his Writer's Life blog here.


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My Adventures in Maine
Posted by Chuck

Ah, Maine in the summertime...

I had a great opportunity this past week—to attend the Writers' Conference at Ocean Park in Ocean, Park, Maine (25 mins. south of Portland) and present several sessions. Though the event calls itself a "conference," it's truly a retreat. The attendance is smaller than most, and the whole shebang lasts five days, with homework assignments each night for writers, poetry writings on the beach, and inside jokes galore from individuals who have attended this gathering many years in a row. (On the first day, I was sitting next to a woman who had been there 16 straight years. Two other nearby attendees were from Chicago and Ventura. Calif. No joke. They're hardcore.)

The gathering gave me a chance to sit down with plenty of writers and talk critique and craft—something I don't always do at conferences. The people were extremely nice and the Maine shore was ... well, see for yourself.

The coastline at 9 a.m. Ah, Maine. The state with
warm days, cool nights, fireworks aplenty, and
the locals who just want the &^%$ tourists
to drop some cash and get lost.

It was incredible to be with a group of people and talk writing, not so much business. Many of the attendees just loved to write (read: lots of poets) and everyone got several chances to read their work aloud. The retreat focused on the love of writing and reading, and that was enough to recharge even my batteries.

Me presenting a workshop. Note my cool
query letter drawing on the right.


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# Sunday, August 19, 2007
Market Books Panel in Cincinnati
Posted by Chuck

Before I forget, I want to mention that editors from Writer's Digest Books will be appearing at Joseph Beth Booksellers in Cincinnati on Wednesday, Aug. 22, in the evening. Editors will be going over the basics of publishing before opening it up for any and all questions.

I'm not exactly sure who will be there besides me, but the other editors who usually attend such events are the following:

      - Robert Brewer, editor of Writer's Market
      - Alice Pope, editor of Children's Writer's and Illustrator's Market
      - Rachel McDonald, editor of Novel and Short Story Writer's Market
      - Nancy Breen, editor of Poet's Market

Hope to see you there! In the coming weeks, we will also be presenting at bookstores in Lexington and Dayton.


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# Friday, August 17, 2007
Recommended Life Stories and Memoirs to Read
Posted by Chuck

As author Bob Mayer wisely put it, writers' first books tend to be blood-lettings.

What that means is writers compose stories about their own lives (memoirs or life stories) - for catharsis, or to just tell their story because they need to tell it. Month by month, I continue to see that everyone wants to write a memoir or life story, even though such things don't sell well and are often written like a diary, not a book. (That said, agents will be hesitant to take on anything that's a tough sell.)

Just today at a book signing in Tennessee, a young writer came up and said she was writing a life story about her uncle and wanted some advice. I wanted to recommend some good memoir and life story books but couldn't think of anything off the top of my head. After we finished talking, I brought the subject up with some other writers and asked for some good recommendations. These are the three they immediately came up with:

      1. The Color of Water, by James McBride
      2. Angela's Ashes, by Frank McCourt
      3. Tuesdays with Morrie, by Mitch Albom

Bottom line: "Personal story is dead," as agent Chip MacGregor said in a previous post. However, if you are determined to write yours, make sure you are reading excellent memoir writing. The three books above seem like a good start.

For more on personal story writing as well as when it might actually be beneficial to self-publish such a book, see this previous post.


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Friday, August 17, 2007 9:30:52 PM (Eastern Daylight Time, UTC-04:00)  #  Comments [0]
Interview with Writer Unboxed!
Posted by Chuck

Writer Unboxed, a cool site devoted to genre fiction writing, was kind enough to interview me recently, asking plenty of questions about the new 2008 Guide to Literary Agents.

Please check out the full interview here!


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