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 Tuesday, August 05, 2008
Agents' Chapter 1 Pet Peeves!
Posted by Chuck
The forthcoming issue of Writer's Digest magazine (Sept/Oct 08) has a piece in it that I wrote on literary agents' chapter 1 pet peeves. For it, I basically just contacted a whole bunch of agents - new and experienced, fiction and nonfiction, Christian and not, juvenile and adult - and asked them all what they hate to see in chapter 1.
They gave a lot of great feedback - real good practical stuff touching on cliches and pet peeves and overused beginnings. The article will be online in several weeks, so you can see a lot of great advice soon.
Although we saved plenty of juicy parts for the WD article, in the meantime, enjoy all this great feedback that didn't make the final cut for space purposes!
Agents Chapter 1 Pet Peeves:
"Anything cliché such as ‘It was a dark and stormy night’ will turn me off. I hate when a narrator or author addresses the reader (e.g., 'Gentle reader')." - Jennie Dunham, Dunham Literary
"Sometimes a reasonably good writer will create an interesting character and describe him in a compelling way, but then he’ll turn out to be some unimportant bit player. Other annoying, unoriginal things I see too often: some young person going home to a small town for a funeral, someone getting a phone call about a death, a description of a psycho lurking in the shadows, or a terrorist planting a bomb." - Ellen Pepus, Ellen Pepus Literary Agency
"I’m really turned off by a protagonist named Isabelle who goes by 'Izzy.' No. Really. I am." - Stephany Evans, FinePrint Literary Management
"I dislike opening scenes that you think are real (I rep adult genre fiction), then the protagonist wakes up. It makes me feel cheated. And so many writers use this hackneyed device. I dislike lengthy paragraphs of world building and scene setting up front. I usually crave action close to the beginning of the book (and so do readers)." - Laurie McLean, Larsen/Pomada Literary Agents
"I do in fact hate it when someone wakes up from a dream in Chapter 1, and I dislike an overly long prologue. The worst thing that you can do is let that crucial chapter be boring - that’s the chapter that has to grab my interest!" - Michelle Brower, Wendy Sherman Associates
"I don't like an opening line that's 'My name is...,' introducing the narrator to the reader so blatantly. I might be prompted to groan before reading on a bit further to see if the narration gets any less stale. There are far better ways in Chapter 1 to establish an instant connection between narrator and reader. I’m also usually not a fan of prologues, preferring to find myself in the midst of a moving plot on page 1 rather than being kept outside of it, or eased into it." - Michelle Andelman, Andrea Brown Literary Agency
"I hate seeing a 'run-down list:' Names, hair color, eye color, height, even weight sometimes. Other things that bother me is over-describing the scenery or area where the story starts. Usually a manuscript can lose the first 3-5 chapters and start there. Besides the run-down list preaching to me about a subject, I don't like having a character immediately tell me how much he/she hates the world for whatever reason. In other words, tell me your issues on politics, the environment, etc. through your character. That is a real turn off to me." - Miriam Hees (editor), Blooming Tree Press
"Perhaps my biggest pet peeve with an opening chapter is when an author features too much exposition - when they go beyond what is necessary for simply 'setting the scene.' I want to feel as if I'm in the hands of a master storyteller, and starting a story with long, flowery, overly-descriptive sentences (kind of like this one) makes the writer seem amateurish and the story contrived. Of course, an equally jarring beginning can be nearly as off-putting, and I hesitate to read on if I'm feeling disoriented by the fifth page. I enjoy when writers can find a good balance between exposition and mystery. Too much accounting always ruins the mystery of a novel, and the unknown is what propels us to read further. It is what keeps me up at night saying 'just one more chapter, then I'll go to sleep.' If everything is explained away in the first chapter; I'm probably putting the book down and going to sleep." - Peter Miller, Peter Miller Literary
"1. Squinting into the sunlight with a hangover in a crime novel. Good grief -- been done a million times. 2. A sci-fi novel that spends the first two pages describing the strange landscape. 3. A trite statement ("Get with the program" or "Houston, we have a problem" or "You go girl" or "Earth to Michael" or "Are we all on the same page?"), said by a weenie sales guy, usually in the opening paragraph. 4. A rape scene in a Christian novel, especially in the first chapter. 5. 'Years later, Monica would look back and laugh...' 6. "The [adjective] [adjective] sun rose in the [adjective] [adjective] sky, shedding its [adjective] light across the [adjective] [adjective] [adjective] land." - Chip MacGregor, MacGregor Literary
 "Here are things I can't stand: Cliché openings in Fantasy can include an opening scene set in a battle (and my peeve is that I don't know any of the characters yet so why should I care about this battle) or with a pastoral scene where the protagonist is gathering herbs (I didn't realize how common this is). Opening chapters where a main protagonist is in the middle of a bodily function (jerking off, vomiting, peeing, or what have you) is usually a firm NO right from the get-go. Gross. Long prologues that often don't have anything to do with the story. So common in Fantasy again. Opening scenes that our all dialogue without any context. I could probably go on..." - Kristin Nelson, Nelson Literary "I recently read a ms when the second line was something like, 'Let me tell you this, Dear Reader...' What do you think of that?" - Sheree Bykofsky, Sheree Bykofsky Literary
"I know this may sound obvious, but too much 'telling' vs. 'showing' in the first chapter is a definite warning sign for me – the first chapter should present a compelling scene, not a road map for the rest of the book. The goal is to make the reader curious about your characters, fill their heads with questions that must be answered, not fill them in on exactly where, when, who and how. Don’t ever describe eye color either..." - Emily Sylvan Kim, Prospect Agency
"Characters that are moving around doing little things, but essentially nothing. Washing dishes & thinking, staring out the window & thinking, tying shoes, thinking ... Authors often do this to transmit information, but the result is action in a literal sense but no real energy in a narrative sense. The best rule of thumb is always to start the story where the story starts." - Dan Lazar, Writers House
"I hate reading purple prose, taking the time to set up-- to describe something so beautifully and that has nothing to do with the actual story. I also hate when an author starts something and then says '(the main character) would find out later.' I hate gratuitous sex and violence anywhere in the manuscript. If it is not crucial to the story then I don't want to see it in there, in any chapters." - Cherry Weiner, Cherry Weiner Literary
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8/5/2008 2:38:06 PM (Eastern Daylight Time, UTC-04:00)
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Kind Words From Author Brad Thor
Posted by Chuck
Author Brad Thor (His book, The Last Patriot, was a NYT #1 bestseller) had these kind words to say when meeting WD editor Maria Schneider:
"Writer’s Digest is always going to have a very special place in my heart because Writer’s Digest was there at the beginning. I read the magazine and I used the Guide to Literary Agents. As a starting writer, you folks were an incredible resource for me. I mean that. I recommend Writer’s Digest to all beginning writers; when they have a manuscript and are trying to move ahead to the next level."
Yep ... He gave GLA some mad props. Awesomeness.
8/5/2008 1:16:59 PM (Eastern Daylight Time, UTC-04:00)
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All About Children's Agents
Posted by Chuck
Alice Pope, editor of Children's Writer's & Illustrators Market, has been in the thick of things out in Beverly Hills this past week at the SCBWI Summer Conference, where the best and the brightest involved in the juvenile writing world gather to network and learn from one another. In fact, she has been blogging about her adventures nonstop. Check out her blog homepage here.
Of particular interest is this post called All About Agents, where she listens to a panel of agents talk.
Also check out a post about Michael Bourret of Dystel & Goderich Literary. The post is great because Michael really has some time to talk about what he wants, what he's not getting in the slush pile, and what's selling.
Children's Writing
8/5/2008 10:01:20 AM (Eastern Daylight Time, UTC-04:00)
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 Wednesday, July 30, 2008
New Agent Alert: Josh Getzler of Writers House
Posted by Chuck
Reminder: Newer agents/agencies are
golden opportunities for new writers because they're likely building
their client list; however, always make sure your work is as perfect as
it can be before submitting, and only query agencies that are a great
fit for your work. Otherwise, you're just wasting time and postage.
Josh Getzler of Writers House
21 W. 26th Street, New York NY 10010. Email: jgetzler@writershouse.com. www.writershouse.com Seeking new and unagented writers. Prior to becoming a junior agent, Mr. Getzler have had 15 years in the business (not all publishing). Currently handles: 75% fiction, 25% nonfiction. Nonfiction areas of fiction: Biography, Business/Investing/Finance, Music, Religious, Cookbooks, History, Sports. Fiction areas of fiction: General fiction, Mystery, Historical novels (esp. mysteries), Thrillers, Noir, Children's. Does not want to receive: picture books.
How to contact: E-mail only with query with five or so pages. Synopsis not necessary. Actively seeking: Foreign and historical thrillers. Recent sales: Devil's Thrill by Gerald Elias (Minotaur, Fall 2009).
This new agent tip provided by GLA blogger extraordinaire Kristen Howe.
 New Agency Alerts
7/30/2008 1:53:28 PM (Eastern Daylight Time, UTC-04:00)
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Agency Profile: Ashley Grayson Literary Agency
Posted by Chuck
Ashley Grayson Literary Agency
1342 18th St., San Pedro CA 90732. Fax: (310)514-1148. E-mail: graysonagent@earthlink.net. Member Agents: Ashley Grayson (fantasy, mystery, thrillers, young adult); Carolyn Grayson (chick lit, mystery, children's, nonfiction, women's fiction, romance, thrillers); Denise Dumars (mind/body/spirit, women's fiction, dark fantasy/horror); Lois Winston (women's fiction, chick lit, mystery). Prefers established writers, mostly referrals. Established: 1976. Member of AAR. Represents 100 clients. 5% of clients are new/unpublished writers.
Specializes in: "We prefer to work with published (traditional print), established authors. We will give first consideration to authors who come recommended to us by our clients or other publishing professionals. We accept a very small number of new, previously unpublished authors." Currently Handles: 20% Nonfiction Books; 50% Novels; 30% Juvenile Books. Nonfiction areas of interest: Business/Economics; Computers/Electronic; History; Popular Culture; Science/Technology; Self-Help/Personal Improvement; Sports; True Crime/Investigative; mind/body/spirit; health; lifestyle. Fiction areas of interest: Fantasy, Juvenile, Multicultural, Mystery/Suspense, Romance, Science Fiction, Young Adult, Women's, chick lit.
How to Contact: As of 2008, the agency was only open to fiction authors with publishing credits (no self-published). For nonfiction, only writers with great platforms will be considered. Accepts e-mail queries. Recent Sales: Ball Don't Lie, by Matt de la Pena (Delacorte); Heaven, by Jack Cohen and Ian Stewart (Warner Books); I Wish I Never Met You, by Denise Wheatley (Touchstone/Simon & Schuster). Other Clients Represented: Isaac Adamson, John Barnes, Andrew Fox, Barb and J.C. Hendee, Geoffrey Landis, Bruce Coville, J.B. Cheaney, David Lubar and Christopher Pike. Terms: Agent receives 15% commission on domestic sales; 20% commission on foreign sales. Agency Profile
7/30/2008 1:42:37 PM (Eastern Daylight Time, UTC-04:00)
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Do You Send a Query or a Proposal or Both?
Posted by Chuck
Q. I have completed my nonfiction book proposal and am ready to begin contacting agents. In the 2008 Guide to Literary Agents, I notice that the preferred method is to send agents a query letter. Does the agent require the proposal too, or is the proposal used to send to publishers? Can I send agents the proposal and a cover letter? I'm just wondering how best to proceed, and appreciate any insight you might have. - Jane
A. Every agent is different in terms of what they want, so there is no preferred method, so to speak. Most will probably tell you to send the proposal right away. Some will want to see a strong query letter, and then ask for the proposal if they're intrigued by the query. Much more often than not, they will say exactly what they want on their website. If they do NOT (and you've really looked everywhere), then I advise just sending the proposal. Most agents can size up a proposal in about two minutes. After that, they will either be interested and read the whole thing, or they will send a form rejection your way. And to address another point here, the proposal is indeed sent to publishers by the agent, but an agent will go over it with a fine-tooth comb for a while to make sure it's perfect.
Nonfiction
7/30/2008 1:27:35 PM (Eastern Daylight Time, UTC-04:00)
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Interning With an Agency
Posted by Chuck
I am in the southwest part of Virginia right now where you recently did a speaking engagement, though I didn't go since I did not know about it, and I really want to get into the publishing business. However, I have made an obligation to stay here with a friend of mine for a year or so. I'm having trouble finding a job at a bookstore (or really anywhere), despite having run a book review site for over a year now (myspace.com/bookchicclub), and so am thinking about branching out a bit. Anyway, my question is, do you know of any agents, particularly those who deal with YA/MG manuscripts, who are in the southwest part of Virginia? It's hard to find them on agentquery.com since most people are looking for genre-specific agents rather than location-specific agents. I would love to be able to help them out and work under them for a while. - James
A. There are two parts to my answer. First, like I've said before on the blog, you don't need to work with an agent that's near you in terms of proximity. That makes no difference. But I think you're also asking about it because you want to intern and learn some things about the business, correct? I admire your goal here, as working at an agency will help you learn a lot. But I know of no agencies in SW Virginia (let alone children-centric ones), so the problem remains. You can work for an agency from a distance, though. You would be reading a lot of submissions and queries and picking out the best ones to send to the agents for their perusal. It's a long-distance business internship. An arrangement like that is quite common, but you have to find a good agency to hook up with, have a solid agreement with them as to your role, and then have an ultimate goal in mind so you're just not plodding through a slush pile for the rest of your life.
7/30/2008 1:21:23 PM (Eastern Daylight Time, UTC-04:00)
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 Monday, July 28, 2008
Exclusive Submissions: Treading Carefully
Posted by Chuck
Q. I have been sending out multiple submissions for the past few months on my completed manuscript. I received and granted a one-month request for reading exclusivity to an agent. The next day, I receive a request from another house. What is the best way to proceed with the second request? I am not sure if I should tell the second agent to wait 30 days or just stall and send the manuscript to the agent in 30 days. What is the etiquette for this situation? - Dave
A. First of all, congrats on getting multiple requests for the full ms. Now, on to your question. The best etiquette is to simply be honest. Reply to Agent #2 (by e-mail, hopefully), saying how excited you are about their request for the full text, but you regretfully have to inform them that it is in the middle of an exclusive read. Ask them if you can send it to them in a few weeks when the exclusive period ends, providing Agent #1 has ultimately said no to the project. The quicker you can do this and reply, the more professional it seems. If Agent #1 says no and Agent #2 hasn't answered your question, I advise sending it anyway. They wanted to see it, and they may have not replied because they were momentarily frustrated that you couldn't immediately send it. But, still, they did want to see it, so send the requested ms over to Agent #2 ASAP.
7/28/2008 10:57:21 AM (Eastern Daylight Time, UTC-04:00)
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Calling Debut Childen's Authors!
Posted by Chuck
This message passed on from Alice Pope, editor extraordinaire of Children's & Illustrator's Market.
"With the 2009 CWIM out the door and in the stores, I'm officially starting my search for first-time authors and illustrators to feature in 'First Books' in the 2010 edition of CWIM. If you have a debut book coming out in the near future and woud like to be interviewed for 'First Books,' I want to hear from you. But there are some rules—and you must visit my blog to read them. (And remember, if I don't choose your for 'First Books,' you could be a Debut Author of the Month featured in this newsletter and on my blog.)"
Children's Writing | Contests
7/28/2008 10:45:21 AM (Eastern Daylight Time, UTC-04:00)
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 Friday, July 25, 2008
Agent Advice: Lilly Ghahremani of Full Circle Literary
Posted by Chuck
"Agent Advice" is a series of quick interviews with literary and script agents who talk with Guide to Literary Agents about their thoughts on writing, publishing, and just about anything else.
This installment features Lilly Ghahremani of Full Circle Literary in San Diego. Lilly handles some fiction, but her passions are nonfiction, children's works, and the occasional graphic novel.
GLA: How did you become an agent?
LG: I joined a law firm/literary agent straight out of law school, so I quickly learned the art of finessing a publishing deal, protecting authors' rights, and understanding what the market responded to. I met Stefanie, then a fellow agent at the company, and upon realizing our shared vision for a young, energetic agency, we joined forces to launch Full Circle in 2004.
GLA: What's the most recent thing you've sold? LG: This week I'm selling renown hypnotherapist Debra Berndt's Let Love In (calling all single girls!) to Wiley. Other recent sales in the past couple of weeks include Baby Sing and Sign by Penny Warner to Three Rivers
GLA: Online, your fiction "wants" say "multicultural, literary or by referral only." What does this mean exactly? Does this mean any adult fiction not multicultural or literary can only be submitted through a referral?
LG: Yes. We have really done quite well within nonfiction and children's, so that's our main focus for new clients. As avid fiction readers ourselves, we are open to representing fiction and certainly do on occasion, but we prefer that it fall within our pronounced interests. There are so many fantastic agents out there aggressively representing fiction, so we've tried to outline what 's likely to get strong consideration with us. GLA: You just attended the Writers League of Texas Agents & Editors conference. Besides writers being too nervous, what is the most common mistake(s) you see writers making during an in-person pitch?
LG: That's a great question, Chuck, thanks for asking! I think the mistake of the pitch is to read. You have 5, or possibly 15 minutes with an agent. This is their chance to see you as a person. Many of us (at the very least I can say this is true for myself) feel it's important to connect not just with the work, but with the author. Your work will speak for itself once we have a chance to sit down and read it - take this time to make eye contact with us, show us why you'd be easy and wonderful to work with, show us your passion for your project. And to qualm the nervousness, remember that, no matter how agents behave, without writers we have no job!
GLA: What are you looking for right now and not getting? For example - an adventure novel set in Iran. A nonfiction book proposal about massage therapy... LG: I am very interested in doing more books that will preserve our environment and that introduce readers to "green" issues in a non-cliche way. I'm also interested in hip crafting books. I would love to do some children's, YA, or middle-grade books about the middle east. Multicultural books are appearing about a variety of ethnicities, but I'm not seeing them about Middle Easterners as much as I'd hoped. I'm also interested in pop culture, always and forever!
GLA: Do you consider yourself to have any weird quirks as an agent? In other words, have you ever been on an agent panel and heard all the other agents agree on something while you yourself thought differently?
LG: I seem to differ with my colleagues on the likeability of an author. I came to publishing from law because I don't want to work for a client just because they're a client or they pay me. I wanted to work for clients because I believe in them and their work and because we have an energetic partnership. I feel that one of the benefits of running my own company is the opportunity to handpick who I work with, and I make use of that privilege regularly. In other words, I'm not a Diva Management Firm. I take the author and book as a full package! GLA: You look for multicultural fiction, and books set in the Middle East are of special interest. Concering these submissions you see, what are the most common places where writers go wrong? What makes you stop reading a multicultural fiction submission? LG: The biggest mistake I've seen is people who want to write about the Middle East because they think it's a hot topic, but then not educating themselves enough about it. For example, one woman submitted a project to me that just briefly mentioned a heavy dresser that the character's parents had brought over during the Revolution. Well that caught my eye, because people who left Iran during the Revolution did so under duress, traveling over mountains by car or animal, or leaving all their worldly possessions and hopping on one of the last flights out of Tehran. This is a fact that cursory research would have uncovered. Another common mistake is folks who present genre fiction to me. Even if a genre novel takes place in the Middle East, my interest in those doesn't surpass my need to stay within what we can sell well for you!
GLA: I know your co-agent, Stefanie, reps kids books, but do you as well?
LG: Yes, I do. And readers may not know this, but Stefanie and I work together on all the projects at Full Circle - many agencies have one agent designated to a project, but we pool our resources to give authors the strongest footing going forward. Even if I acquire a project for us, they will benefit from Stefanie's superior years in the children's book industry.
GLA: What are you looking for in a graphic novel? What are the elements of a perfect GN query?
LG: In a graphic novel (I have yet to take one on!), I'm looking for stylized, professional artwork, but more than that - a fresh, compelling story. My mind was opened to graphic novels after reading Marjane Satrapi's incredible Persepolis. I myself hadn't realized how emotional and powerful a graphic novel could be as a medium to tell a tale until the moment I opened that book. GLA: Will you be at any upcoming writers' conferences where writers can meet you?
LG: I don't have any on deck at the moment, but we try to keep an updated list on our website.
GLA: Any blogs you want to plug?
LG: Yes! Two in particular. First, ours - fullcirclelit.blogspot.com. Secondly, our author Jon Yang. He's the author of the Rough Guide to Blogging, and his insights are hilarious. To be honest, I first found him as a blogger online, and that's how we parlayed the first book deal. His YA novels, beginning with Exclusively Chloe, are forthcoming from Penguin.
GLA: Other bit of advice on something we haven't discussed?
LG: Yes! Did you know Kirkland Vodka is actually Grey Goose, produced for generic packaging? You can thank me later.
Lilly Ghahremani is an attorney now "using her
powers for good" as a literary agent with Full Circle Literary
(co-founded with Stefanie Von Borstel). Lilly is interested in a wide
range of nonfiction, driven by a compelling narrative voice (even if
it's a how-to). She is interested in YA, and is open to reviewing chick
lit or literary fiction. As a rule please know that Full Circle does
not represent genre fiction
(thriller, mystery, romance, suspense, horror, western, historical), poetry,
or screenplays. A sampling of her recent sales include Raina Lee's karaoke book Hit Me with Your Best Shot (Chronicle Books), Joseph Sommerville's Rainmaking Presentations (Palgrave), and Cal Patch's Patternmaking
(RH/Potter Craft). Lilly particularly enjoys books about pop culture,
crafts, the rest of the world (with a soft spot for the Middle East),
music and the performing arts, and topics that connect with a female
readership. Agent Advice (Agent Interviews) | Children's Writing | Graphic Novels
7/25/2008 10:20:13 AM (Eastern Daylight Time, UTC-04:00)
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FinePrint Literary's New Blog
Posted by Chuck
FinePrint Literary Management in New York has started a new blog: http://fineprintlit.blogspot.com/. FinePrint is a medium-sized agency full of super-cool agents.
Hat tip on this great info: future famous writer Nancy Parish.
7/25/2008 9:48:27 AM (Eastern Daylight Time, UTC-04:00)
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 Wednesday, July 23, 2008
Talking Script/Screenplay Managers
Posted by Chuck
Q. I was wondering on how you can help me get the right agent. I've written a screenplay, which is copyedited and registered. My query letter and my synopsis seem to be very good. - Natalie
GLA: A-ha. You're looking for a script agent, not a literary agent. More specifically, you want a script manager. Agents in California are wheeler-dealers who generally do not take on or consider new clients. If you're trying to break in cold, query a manager. Managers work like literary agents out there. When the time comes, your manager will connect with an agent to make a deal. It stinks a bit, because you have to pay 15% to one and 10% to the other. A lot of reps out west who are open to queries from new screenwriters are managers, but may not call themselves that (they may use the word "agent"). The new 2009 Guide to Literary Agents book doesn't list any script managers. Why, you ask? Because in less than six months, the first ever edition of Screenwriter's & Playwright's Market will be in bookstores. If you don't want to wait that long, just get a subscription to WritersMarket.com, which has the entire database. Fortunately enough, I just interviewed script and literary manager Marc Manus, of Manus Entertainment Literary Management, who was a panelist at our writers' conference in Los Angeles in May. I interviewed him for the new SPM book, but I want to post some of his answers here because I think they'll help.
GLA: Besides a concise pitch, what are you looking for when a writer talks to you in person or contacts you via a query?
MM: Personally, I look for some sense of concept and marketing in a writer's queries - is the person hitting the commercial side of my brain? Or is the person boring me with unnecessary details about how the main character changes because of a tragedy? If the person's loglines seem to encapsulate a really good movie idea, I will usually ask to read a sample. A person's background can help, as well. I will lend weight to someone who claims to have a background in writing (journalism, advertising, etc.) or someone who has gone to film school. Assuming the writer makes it past the query stage and I've read a good sample from the person, it's time to meet. When I sit down (or chat via phone) with a writer, I am essentially looking for someone that I am not afraid to put in a room with executives and producers. That person should be articulate and energetic. I've actually passed on representing people who come across as lethargic or argumentative. Life is too short.
GLA: We know the textbook definition between a manager and an agent in Hollywood. That said, do you feel like contacting a manager is the best route for newer writers? Are agents just too busy?
MM: For newer writers, yes. Agents rarely have time to deal with some of their existing clients.
GLA: When a writer contacts you, how many scripts should they have up their sleeve?
MM: I recommend at least two, if not more. And a plethora of good ideas!
GLA: What are the most common problems you see in the first 5-10 pages of the specs you read?
MM: Beginnings that are uninteresting and fail to set the tone of the script. And lackluster introductions of main characters. I can't tell you how many scripts fall short on those two levels...
GLA: Any other advice or tips for newer writers on a topic we haven't covered?
MM: Yes, it's not enough to simply generate a feature or TV idea, write the script and be done with it. You have to think about the business - how it grows, where it's moving. Think about your idea as intellectual property and not just a movie or television show; platforming is important. And legacy. Will your idea stand the test of time? It's important to understand what moves human beings and how to effectively communicate that in your story.
Agent Advice (Agent Interviews) | Screenwriting and Script Agents
7/23/2008 10:32:15 AM (Eastern Daylight Time, UTC-04:00)
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