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# Wednesday, March 31, 2010
Agent Advice: Marlene Stringer of The Stringer Literary Agency
Posted by Chuck

Agent Advice is a series of quick interviews with literary and script agents who talk with Guide to Literary Agents about their thoughts on writing, publishing, and just about anything else.

This installment features Marlene Stringer
of The Stringer Literary Agency

She is seeking: Fiction interests include mystery, thrillers, contemporary and urban fantasy, science fiction, historical fiction, women’s fiction, romance, and YA/teen. Nonfiction interests include history, military history, parenting, music, sports, and science.



GLA: How did you become an agent?

MS: I met Barbara Bova socially, and after we got to know each other, we decided to work together at her agency. My editorial and writing background was good training, and I really enjoy the business side, and being an advocate for writers. My mission was to broaden the scope at that agency, and bring more romance, women’s fiction, thrillers, etc., to the agency, which I did. I formed my own agency in December of 2008, so we celebrated our first anniversary in December.

GLA: What’s something coming out that you’re exciting about?

MS: I am thrilled as each book comes out! Something brand new is The River Kings' Road, by Liane Merciel, a debut fantasy that received a starred review in PW. Alex Bledsoe will have a new series coming from Tor featuring the Tufa, amazing contemporary fantasy, and next year Michelle Diener has a new Tudor thriller series debuting from Gallery. On the YA side, Shari Maurer has a debut novel, Change of Heart, coming in May, Alyx Harvey’s Blood Feud, second in The Drake Chronicles, arrives in June. In romance, Gabi Stevens has a paranormal romance series The Time of Transition, with The Wish List released end of April. I love variety!

GLA: You represent (and sell!) a lot of paranormal/urban fantasy. What draws you to this category?

MS: I love contemporary fantasy, and urban fantasy just works for me. I think it’s a lot more accessible than traditional fantasy for a lot of readers as it deals with a "contemporary" world. There’s a lot of energy in all fantasy, and a willingness to stretch boundaries that I find irresistible. I also seem to receive a lot of really good urban fantasy submissions.

GLA: Within urban fantasy, are you looking for anything in particular?

MS: I like novelty.  Anything can work as long as it’s a fresh take. However, it would take a really special vampire story to appeal to me now, though, as there are so many.




Marlene represented Alex Bledsoe's
urban fantasy, Blood Groove



GLA: Taking that same question more broadly, what are you seeing pour in through the slush pile? And what would you love to see more of?

MS: I’m seeing a lot of recycled concepts that don’t really bring anything new to the table. “New” doesn’t mean merely different character names and settings. I would love to see more romance, women’s and book club fiction, and thrillers.

GLA: I was looking over your recent sales on Publishers Marketplace and (I could be wrong), but I saw a lack of science fiction. It just seems that I see very little science fiction on anybody’s list. Is this a tough sell? Is it tough to find good writers?

MS: Not for lack of looking! I have a particular fondness for earth-based science fiction. Good stories are hard to find. I think in speculative fiction there’s been an emphasis on fantasy over the past decade. I would like to see more science fiction.

GLA: Are you looking for some of the more unique fantasy subgenres, like cyberpunk, splatterpunk and steampunk, etc?

MS: I love steampunk, and I am looking for it.

GLA: Three most common problems you see in query letters?

MS: 1) Query isn’t targeted. With the ease of e-mail queries, writers tend to send to agents who are not looking for what they’re pitching. They rely on second or third-hand online information regarding the agency, when they should take the time to look at each agent’s website or sales history.
     2) Query is sloppy. The query letter is usually the first intro to the agent. I often compare it to a cover letter for a resume—would you send something out without really proofing it? Yet writers do, again and again, and wonder why they are rejected.
     3) Query includes wrong information or is incomplete. Again, just look at the websites. Agents are not interchangeable. We have different tastes and ask for different materials in submissions. More apt to yield a successful result if you include what is requested.

GLA: It says you rep “YA/teen.” Do you also take middle grade?

MS: I do. I’ve always represented YA. When I went out on my own, I started accepting middle grade submissions. I love middle-grade, and have sold two fabulous debut authors who will be released soon. Randi Barrow’s Zasha, the Last German Shepherd to Scholastic, and Jen Blom’s Possum Summer recently to Holiday House. I’m a sucker for animal stories as long as they have no “Bambi” moments! I love the middle grade age group. It’s the time kids really begin to form their own taste in reading. If you turn a child onto reading then, you've got them for life. I’m always looking for middle-grade, and would love to find something that appeals to boys, too.

GLA: Your website is undergoing a makeover. Any idea on when the site will be overhauled and up?

MS: Soon. Very soon.

GLA: How should writers contact you if seeking representation? 

MS: One of the things I’m changing is that I will no longer be accepting snail mail queries.  It is much easier and quicker to respond on e-mail.  So writers should contact me at stringerlit@comcast.net. If you query by e-mail, make sure your e-mail account accepts responses. Bounce-back emails due to filtering will be discarded, as will queries sent to mass recipients. Place the word "query" in the subject line of your e-mail. Include contact information, the first five pages of your manuscript and a short synopsis within the body of the e-mail.

GLA: Will you be at any upcoming conferences where writers can meet/pitch you?

MS: I will be attending The Writers Institute in Madison, WI in April; and RWA National in Nashville.

GLA: Something personal about you writers may be surprised to know?

MS: I’m a NYC native.

GLA: Best piece(s) of advice we haven’t discussed?

MS: Writing is an art and a craft. It takes time to master any craft.  An agent should not be the first reader. Understand that, and don't submit your material before it's ready, and the odds of success increase.





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# Tuesday, March 30, 2010
7 Things I’ve Learned So Far, by Patricia Stoltey
Posted by Chuck

This is a new recurring column I'm calling "7 Things I've Learned So Far," where writers at any stage of their career can talk about seven things they've learned along their writing journey that they wish they knew at the beginning. This installment is from mystery writer Patricia Stoltey.




Patricia Stoltey is the author of two
mysteries,
The Prairie Grass Murders and
The Desert Hedge Murders.
She
focuses on the writing life at her blog.



1. That first novel is probably not as good as you think it is. No matter how hard you’ve worked at your revisions and no matter how many times you’ve gone through your manuscript to self-edit before writing your query letters, your manuscript can be improved with the help of a good editor. This is one of the reasons why most published authors (including me) recommend critique groups. We need that critical eye to help us improve our craft and to toughen our hides before we’re exposed to tough editors and tougher reviewers.

2. You cannot be just a writer. You must also be a publicist, a public speaker, an administrative assistant, a salesman, a bookkeeper, and more. You will be shocked at the amount of time you spend promoting yourself and your book.

3. Networking is the most important reason to attend writers’ conferences. Volunteer to help with registration, moderate a panel, conduct a workshop in your area of expertise, or stuff goodie bags. Make friends. Also hang out with the authors, editors, and agents during cocktail hour. Don’t be afraid to talk to them. They (at least most of them) won’t bite.

4. Approach social media with caution. It’s addictive and time-consuming. It’s also an important networking and promotional tool. Once you have a website and a blog, you can experiment with other sites to see what works best for you. Facebook, Twitter, and others are called “social” media for a reason. Engage followers and friends. Ask questions. Forward interesting communications. Visit blogs and leave comments. Be professional and discreet, but be open and friendly.

5. Watch what you say and write. Every word you speak at a presentation may be captured by someone’s flip video camera or phone camera and uploaded to the Internet. Every comment you leave on someone else’s blog could show up when someone initiates a Google search on your name. Set Google Alerts for your author name, the names of your published books, and your blog name if different from your author name. You need to know when and where you’re getting exposure (or getting exposed).

6. Don’t try to follow someone else’s rules. There is no one correct way to write, to get published, or to promote your book. Educate yourself so you know all the options, and then do it your way. Your way should include a critique group (in my humble opinion).

7. Never give up. No matter how talented you are, and no matter how excellent your agent, luck still plays a roll in whether your book succeeds. Do you snag a big publisher with a big advertising budget? Do you get reviewed by one or more of the reviewers consulted by acquisition librarians and chain bookstores? Does your book strike a chord with readers, resulting in the buzz that can sell more books than a dozen celebrity blurbs and starred reviews? If none of these things happen, be prepared to move on. Write a new book. Don’t be afraid of rejection. It’s part of the learning process. Keep going. Nothing good can happen if you quit.

   

ORDER The Desert               ORDER The Prairie
Hedge Murders                   Grass Murders



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# Monday, March 29, 2010
''Prosaic," ''Exacerbate,'' and Other Words I Tried to Squeeze Into College Newspaper Articles For My Own Amusement
Posted by Chuck

There were always the same few words that kept popping up in my college research papers. Words like "exacerbate," "maelstrom, "quagmire," "aforementioned," and the deliciously awesome "melange." Words like this were thrown in as an attempt to sound smarter than I was. But it would be senior year, when writing for the college newspaper, when I really started to have fun. As the year continued, I gathered a list of strange and unique words that I was determined to squeeze into newspaper articles somehow. By the way, if you've never tried to squeeze funky words and inside jokes into printed articles/books, you are letting the best in life pass you by.





My friend here at work just said that, in high school, all the newspaper reporters would use the word "plethora" as much as humanly possible in articles. "I'm pretty sure we were misusing it at times," said my fellow editor. In fact, best-selling author Malcolm Gladwell wrote an article where he talks about his time at the Washington Post and his many attempts to get the phrase "perverse and often baffling" in the paper. It took dozens of attempts before it snuck past the copy editor. 

For me, writing for my college newspaper was when I really started to just throw crap out there and see if it stuck. I remember one time I used the word "phoenix" as some kind of verb. That was a doozy. Another time, I snuck in the word "fancypants," which I thought was a nice touch. But my greatest achievement was a piece where I managed to squeeze in not one funky word, but actually four. The first three were "caveat," "prosaic" and "doomsayer." But wait! You haven't heard my crown jewel of weird-words-that-I-got-paid-to-write. It was:

Envenomed.

Back up! You heard me right. I used the word "envenomed" in an article that had nothing to do with snakes nor any kind of animal. Beat that! If anyone else has similar amusing stories to tell, I am all ears.


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Creating the Breakout Blog: A Platform Guide for the Pre-Published Writer
Posted by Chuck

I love Donald Maass. Not in a creepy, stalkerish way of course. Just in a the-man-is-brilliant sort of way. Not only is he a top agent, he's written several books on how to write well. One of my favorites by him is Writing the Breakout Novel. In it, he looks at what it takes to catapult writing into something that doesn't just stand out but breakout to become a best-seller. His targeted breakdown of what makes a novel a success is excellent. And it got me thinking: Could the same qualifiers apply to blogging?



Guest blogger Angela Ackerman is a kidlit writer
represented by Jill Corcoran of the Herman Agency.
Her blog,
The Bookshelf Muse, is home to several
Descriptive Thesaurus Collections for writers,
including an Emotion Thesaurus, which lists the
physical actions for over 40 different emotions.



Let's face it—there are a bazillion blogs out there targeting writers, and why? Writers need a platform; we need to get our name out there and building an audience for our work for when we do have a book in hand. So what does a Breakout Blog need?

A BREAKOUT PREMISE

Unless you're famous or well connected, you need a premise that will help you stand apart from every other writer's blog. This means one thing really—knowing who your audience is, and what they want. Just like the book business, you should be looking at what's out there and working, and what isn't. Where are the gaps in the writer’s blog market? Find a new idea, slant or need. Be original or creative (but hopefully both).

 A SENSE OF TIME AND PLACE

Blog posts should be unified by context. Create an environment that your audience will want to return to time and time again. Not only should it be easy on the eyes, it should contain resources (links to writing aids and industry professionals) and have regular postings.  Put up a Follower sign-up widget and a RSS feed, minimize the flashy sidebar stuff and don’t over-spam readers with ads.

PROVIDING GOOD CHARACTER

Show your personality in posts! Humor and wit always stands out. Your posts should contain good advice and information, but also a piece of who you are as well. And when you’re discussing the industry, be professional. Blasting editor or agent X for daring to reject you will not win friends or influence people. And guess what? They read blogs, too.

PLOTS, SUBPLOTS AND VIEWPOINTS

Variety is the spice of life, right? Well, it’s also key in keeping a following strong. Offer posts that look at different viewpoints of your unified theme. Explore topics that haven't been done to death or find a new angle on familiar ones. Shake things up by offering contests, guest posts and relevant linking. Soften posts with pictures, humor, 'Top 5/10' lists and ask questions that invite discussion and participation. Be aware of the pacing—long, cumbersome posts can be a turn-off.

HOW TO BREAK OUT: 5 WAYS

     1. Build a following by being seen. Link your blog in the signature of forum posts and be active in writing communities. Give your knowledge to others freely when it is wanted and you will learn and grow as a writer in return.

     2. Embrace social media. Twitter, Facebook and other social & sharing sites are all opportunities to let people know what you're up to.

     3. Reach out to other blogs and bloggers. If you comment, they will come.  And don’t forget to acknowledge those who do stop by and comment.

     4. Ask for (and give) links. Contest promotion and cross-linking in sidebars and posts can be a quick route into getting traffic to your blog.

     5. Enjoy what you do. If blogging feels like a job, reading it will become a job, too. Have fun with it!





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Storyline Contest Closed
Posted by Chuck

The (third) "Worst Storyline Ever" Contest is now closed. Thank you to all who entered. I got a few e-mails saying that blog comment functionality was iffy. This caught me by surprise. Tell you what. I will accept entries via email to literaryagent@fwmedia.com through the end of today, Monday, March 29, 2010. If you had comment trouble, submit this way. Same rules apply, so read everything first.

"Worst Storyline Ever"

Contest

Winners will be announced in approximately one week. I will contact winners by email, then announce everything on the blog. Thanks!


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# Sunday, March 28, 2010
How I Got My Agent: Marianne Elliott
Posted by Chuck

"How I Got My Agent" is a recurring feature on the GLA blog. I find it fascinating to see the exact road people took that landed them with a rep. Seeing the things people did right vs. what they did wrong (highs and the lows) can help other scribes who are on the same journey. Some tales are of long roads and many setbacks, while others are of good luck and quick signings.

To see
the previous installments of this column, click here.

If you have a literary agent and would be interested in writing a short guest column for this GLA blog, e-mail me at literaryagent@fwmedia.com and we'll talk specifics.



Marianne Elliott is the author of the
blog Zen and the Art of Peacekeeping.
(She has written a memoir of the same name.)
Marianne loves to connect with other writers
on Twitter (@zenpeacekeeper).


"QUERY AS SOON AS POSSIBLE"

While I was still writing Zen Under Fire: Learning to Sit Still in Afghanistan, a memoir about my life and work as a UN peacekeeper and human rights advocate in Afghanistan, I started reading agent advice blogs. I started filling a new notebook with information about agents and the query process and began making a list of agents who seemed like a great match for my book. On many agent blogs I read that, unlike other forms of nonfiction, you generally need a completed manuscript before you can query agents for representation for a memoir. So I diligently set about completing my manuscript.

When I was close to finishing the manuscript, I shared my synopsis and first three chapters with some beta readers. One of them is a published author who thought the synopsis was fantastic and asked whether I had started approaching agents. I explained why I was waiting. She wasn’t convinced and offered to ask her agent for advice.

Her agent’s advice was this: Because the subject matter of my memoir (i.e. Afghanistan) is so newsworthy at the moment, I should query as soon as possible. She wanted to see my first three chapters. I decided that if I was going to send the chapters to her, I would also take a risk and query the five agents who were at the top of my wish list.

UH-OH. TOO QUICK?

So I queried six agents. Two of them were agents to whom I had personal referrals from their clients (including the one who encouraged me to query early). Three were agents with whom I had no connection. The sixth agent had approached me after she read my blog, which she loved, and saw that I was working on a memoir.

I had my first response the next morning—a request for a full manuscript. I had to explain that I didn’t have a complete manuscript. She still wanted to see whatever I had written. So I took another risk. I sent her ten more chapters despite the fact that they had not been through the purifying fire of my beta readers’ insightful critiques. She eventually passed on the manuscript.

The first agent contacted me again, asking to see more. I sent her the additional chapters. She came back saying that it was a fascinating and well-written story but that the market at the moment demanded more grit in its war stories. She would be interested in seeing another, grittier, draft. I got two more requests for full manuscripts. I was beginning to doubt the wisdom of querying early but I decided to give the draft chapters two last outings before I regrouped.

TWO OFFERS!

A few weeks later, I awoke to my first offer of representation. I was stunned. It was such a surprise after the first two rejections that I almost accepted the offer on the spot. Instead, I asked for a little time and wrote to the one remaining agent who had my partial manuscript. She wrote back almost immediately, also offering me representation. Now I was spinning. Two New York literary agents wanted to represent my book!

I set up phone interviews with both of the agents. I got in touch with all the published authors I knew and asked them for advice. I prepared my questions. Each of the agents did a fantastic job of answering them. Both gave me referrals to clients who gave them rave reviews. I knew that I couldn’t go wrong with either of them.

In the end, the deciding factor was that when Laura (Laura Nolan of DeFiore and Company) talked about my manuscript it was as though she had been inside my head as I wrote it. She got to the heart not only what I had written but also of what I was trying to write but hadn’t quite pulled off.

I broke one of the cardinal rules of querying, which is: Never query until your manuscript is complete, beautifully polished and the best that it can possibly be. In this instance, it paid off. I was fortunate to find two agents who were willing to work with me on a promising manuscript that still needed work. Not all agents do that. Not all writers need that. Maybe it worked for me because of the timeliness of my subject matter. Maybe it was because I found the right champions for my project. In either case, I’m grateful.


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Agent Advice: Anne Hawkins of John Hawkins & Associates
Posted by Chuck

Agent Interview by
contributor Ricki Schultz.

Agent Advice is a series of quick interviews with literary and script agents who talk with Guide to Literary Agents about their thoughts on writing, publishing, and just about anything else.

This installment features Anne Hawkins
of John Hawkins & Associates, Inc.

She is seeking: Anne has an eclectic list, ranging from thrillers to literary fiction to serious nonfiction. She has particular interests in science, history, public policy, medicine and women’s issues. She is not looking to represent self-help, new age, erotica, how-to, advice/relationship, horror, Westerns, category romance, action/adventure, science fiction, fantasy, or juvenile.



GLA
: Why did you become an agent?

AH: My brother-in-law John Hawkins recruited me for several reasons. He knew that I was a great lover of books and had, in fact, taught English in the past. Also, he had seen me negotiate in an entirely different field, and that gave him confidence that I could handle the business aspects of the job.

GLA: Tell us about a recent project you’ve sold. 

AH: I've cut deals for any number of my established authors, and it's always a thrill to see their careers grow and flourish. Your readers, however, might want to hear about the sale of a first novel. It started with a cold-call e-mail query that intrigued me. I asked for a synopsis and sample pages, and I was simply blown away by the quality and originality.  fter reading the full manuscript, I immediately offered representation. This book, The Informationist, by Taylor Stevens, sold to Sarah Knight of Shaye Areheart Books and will be a lead hardcover title in Winter 2011. So far, it has sold in six foreign language markets, and CAA [Creative Artists Agency] is currently marketing it to film interests.
 
GLA: Are there any books coming out now that have you excited?
 
AH: I have two wildly different books coming out in April—Kristy Kiernan's third novel, Between Friends (high-concept women's fiction), and Michael Pewtherer's Wilderness Survival Handbook, a guide to outdoor survival with minimal manufactured equipment. One of the great things about my job is the variety!
 
GLA: What are you looking for right now when tackling the slush pile?
 
AH: I'm always on the lookout for "reading group" books, whether fiction or nonfiction. These are books that, while entertaining, also have ideas and content worth discussing. 
    
I also love historical fiction, but it is so difficult to find one that hits on all cylinders. Writing good historical fiction is challenging because, in addition to the hurdles that all novelists face, historical authors also have to do massive research, incorporate historical detail in an interesting way, and craft a convincing voice that is suitable to the period.
 
GLA: You don’t work with much genre fiction, other than thrillers and mystery/suspense. With particular regard to thrillers, do you prefer any subgenres, such as legal, psychological, or supernatural thrillers, etc.? Anything you tend to stay away from?
 
AH: In thrillers, I'm looking for strong characters, outstanding storytelling, and an original concept. Too many queries give me that "been there, done that" sort of feeling, so I don't pursue them. 
Truth to be told, I like thrillers that don't fit neatly into any subgenre. The Informationist, mentioned above, is one of those. Both the editor who acquired it and I remarked that we hadn't seen anything quite like it before. That said, I find legal thrillers a tough sell in today's market, and I just don't care for any sort of fiction with supernatural elements.
 
GLA: One of the nonfiction areas you represent is biography. What is essential to a solid biography proposal?
 
AH: That's a really tough question. "Serious" biography most often requires serious author credentials. Think of Robert Caro's multivolume biography of Lyndon Johnson or David McCullough's biography of John Adams. "Lighter" biography, such as Seabiscuit or Longitude, often categorized as "niche history," requires only a compelling voice and exacting research. 
    
Of course, the proposed book cannot treat an individual whose life has been documented many times already. And the subject has to be of interest to a substantial readership.
 
GLA: Is there anyone in particular about whom you’d love to see a biography written?
 
AH: I can't think of anyone specific offhand, but as Justice Potter Stewart said: "I know it when I see it."
 
GLA: I read in an interview you did last year that you take on a number of “cold queries.” Agents seem to differ across the board in terms of whether or not they think authors should personalize these types of queries (i.e., “I see you rep Author X, so I hope you will be interested in Manuscript Y”). How do you feel about this?  Do you prefer cold queriers jump right into the pitch, or does a little personalization go a long way?
 
AH: By all means, personalization goes a long way. If a query letter begins with something like, "I'm a huge fan of your author Tasha Alexander... ," I'm predisposed to read on.
 
GLA: How can writers maximize their success in this changing industry?

AH: It goes without saying that a writer must hone his craft to the highest level possible. Once that's accomplished, however, a writer needs to put on his business hat and devise a smart strategy for gaining representation and eventual publication.     
    
If I could give unpublished authors one piece of advice, it would be this: Learn as much as you can about the publishing industry, how it works, and who the players are before beginning the query process. Publishing is a quirky business, and things often happen in a nonlinear fashion. The author who adopts a learn-as-you-go philosophy runs the risk of making costly, even disastrous mistakes.
 
GLA: Will you be at any upcoming writers’ conferences where writers can meet and pitch you?

AH: DFW (Dallas Fort Worth) Writers Conference, April 10-11, 2010; American Independent Writers Conference (Washington, D.C.) June 12, 2010; Anhinga Writers Conference (Gainesville, Fla.) July 28-31.
 
GLA: What is something about you writers would be surprised to hear?

AH: I played the bassoon professionally for many years.
 
GLA: Best piece(s) of advice we haven’t talked about yet?

AH: Don't assume that everything you read online is true. Some writer-friendly websites do offer accurate, up-to-date information. Others perpetuate wild untruths. As a case in point, I Googled myself and discovered, among other curious things, that: 1) I am a top agent for horror fiction (I have never represented a single horror novel), and 2) I am one of the top ten agents for YA fiction (In my entire career, I have represented only one young adult novel). Get the picture?

This agent interview by Ricki Schultz,
freelance writer and coordinator of
Shenandoah Writers in VA. Visit her blog
or follow her on Twitter.


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# Saturday, March 27, 2010
Cover Band Soap Opera: 'Creep' by Radiohead
Posted by Chuck

For anyone who follows the ridiculous adventures of my Cincinnati rock cover band, you may have noticed that I don't put up much video.  Truth is, I'm self-conscious. Someone missed a note, or this didn't sound right, or that's blurry, blah blah blah. 
 
Well, no more of that. This is my band playing "Creep" by Radiohead at a recent winter show. That's me playing guitar on the right. Please excuse the lead singer's awful beard, which never made another appearance after that night, thank God. (Note: Our lead singer tried out for the band with this song way back when.) Also note: This song, as you probably know, contains a bad word or two. Take precautions if at work.
 
 

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100 Pages in 30 Days: This April, Participate in Script Frenzy With Me!
Posted by Chuck

You know National Novel Writing Month (NaNoWriMo)? It's where you just sit down for one month and crank out a novel. It doesn't have to be awesome. It just forces you to sit down and work through that painful first draft. Well now imagine the same thing, but for movie scripts. It's coming in April, and it's called Script Frenzy. I, for one, will be participating and trying to write a script. Come join the fun!



Script Frenzy is an international writing event in which participants take on the challenge of writing 100 pages of scripted material in the month of April. As part of a donation-funded nonprofit, Script Frenzy charges no fee to participate.

      Who: You and everyone you know. No experience required.

      What: 100 pages of original scripted material in 30 days. (Screenplays, stage plays, TV shows, short films, and graphic novels are all welcome.)

      When: April 1-30.

      Where: Online and in person (if you want!). Hang out in the forums, join your fellow participants at write-ins, and make friends by adding writing buddies online.

      Why: Because you have a story to tell. Because you want a creative challenge. Because you’ll be disappointed if you missed out on the adventure. Because you need to make time for you.

      How: Sign up. Tell everyone that you are in the Frenzy. Clear your calendar. (US participants: Get your taxes done now!) Start some wrist exercises. Have fun! The official Script Frenzy site has more rules and FAQ. Check it out.


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# Friday, March 26, 2010
Successful Queries: Agent Lisa Bankoff and 'If You Follow Me'
Posted by Chuck

This new series is called "Successful Queries" and I'm posting actual query letters that succeeded in getting writers signed with agents.  In addition to posting the actual query letter, we will also get to hear thoughts from the agent as to why the letter worked. 

The 30th installment in this series is with agent Lisa Bankoff
(ICM) and her author, Malena Watrous, for the literary novel, If You Follow Me (March 2010, HarperCollins).





Dear Ms. Bankoff,

After graduating from Barnard College in 1997, I worked as a freelance journalist in New York before moving to rural Japan, where I taught English and wrote articles for Salon.com, among other publications. I spent my first year there in a tiny nuclear power town called Shika, which was quite a change from Manhattan.  Inspired by my own experiences, my debut novel, Repeat After Me, is the story of a young American woman who moves to rural Japan not long after her father's suicide.
 
The book is structured in four sections, each occupying a different season, in keeping with the Japanese tradition of honoring the seasons in art and writing. It opens with a letter to "Miss Marina" from her Japanese supervisor, a man named Hiroshi Miyoshi, informing her of her latest "gomi" (garbage) errors. Every time she throws her trash away, an old man from the neighborhood shows up at her door with whatever items she put in the wrong bins. She has no privacy, which is an issue since she's living in secret with a girlfriend. Although each section of the novel focuses on a different problem and introduces new characters in the narrator's life, garbage remains a central motif throughout the book as she comes to realize that in Japan, you can never really throw anything away. For a young woman who fled to another country to try and outpace her grief, this comes to have a profound meaning. The novel is a dark comedy of manners and ultimately a strange kind of love story. It has a similar sensibility to Elizabeth Gilbert's Eat, Pray, Love, and shares the cross-cultural humor of David Sedaris's Me Talk Pretty One Day.

I am a graduate of the Iowa Writers' Workshop and a recent Wallace Stegner Fellow at Stanford, where I am currently a Jones Lecturer in fiction writing. An earlier draft of this novel received a Michener/Copernicus award in 2006/7. My short fiction has been published in Story Quarterly, Triquarterly, The Massachusetts Review, Glimmertrain and Kyoto Journal.  I also write nonfiction articles and monthly book reviews for the San Francisco Chronicle. I have received two Pushcart nominations for short stories and second place in the Pen/Faulkner novella contest (for an earlier version of the first section of this novel). 
   
If you would be interested in reading part of my novel, please let me know. I appreciate your time and consideration.

Sincerely,
Malena Watrous


Commentary from Lisa

Malena's novel is about a character who moves to Japan to teach English. My son studied Japanese, spent a summer in Japan as an exchange student, and harbors a desire to return after college graduation to teach English. On this basis alone, I was primed to want to read Malena's novel. In the first paragraph, she shows the themes of the story: fish out of water, culture clash, immersion in the unfamiliar. These are reasons to keep reading.

In my apartment building with its common recycling area, I'm always finding glass in the paper bin and vice versa, so I could understand the old man's motivation mentioned in the second paragraph. As the pitch continues, the line "you can never throw anything away" struck me. Is this an intriguing commentary about a society—or is it metaphor? I wanted to know.

She nails it with the line about how her book is "a
dark comedy of manners and ultimately a strange kind of love story"promising some of my favorite literary ingredients. Finally, her credentials are the real deal. She has this story in her blood and is determined as well as clearly talented.

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# Thursday, March 25, 2010
New Agent Alert: Marissa Walsh of Shelf Life Literary
Posted by Chuck

Note from Chuck (4-28-2010):
Soon after posting this new agent alert, Marissa
contacted me and said she is joining the crew at
FinePrint Literary Management. All her bio
info remains the same.

---------

Reminder: Newer agents are golden opportunities for new writers because they're likely building their client list; however, always make sure your work is as perfect as it can be before submitting, and only query agencies that are a great fit for your work. Otherwise, you're just wasting time and postage.



About Marissa:
Shelf Life founder Marissa Walsh began her publishing career at Nan A. Talese/Doubleday and the Ellen Levine Literary Agency. She was an editor at Delacorte Press/Random House Children's Books for seven years, where her books received various awards. She is the author of the comic memoir Girl with Glasses: My Optic History (Simon Spotlight Entertainment) and the YA novel A Field Guide to High School (Delacorte Press/Random House Children's Books), as well as other projects.

She is seeking:
pop culture, humor, narrative nonfiction, memoir, or children's books. Concerning picture books, she is looking for younger books with very little text (800 words or fewer). Include the manuscript in the body of your query e-mail. Concerning middle grade and YA, no paranormal please. She prefers contemporary stories. Include the first chapter in the body of your query e-mail.

How to contact: querymarissa(at)gmail(dot)com.


Recent sales
: How the South Won the Rap Civil War, by Ben Westhoff (Chicago Review Press); The World is Like a Big Sister, by Jennifer Stark: (Putnam); and Rules to Rock By, by Josh Farrar (Walker).





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# Wednesday, March 24, 2010
How to Market and Sell Your Books
Posted by Chuck

I have some exciting news regarding WD's webinars. Agent Chip MacGregor, founder of MacGregor Literary, is teaching a new, amazing class called "Marketing for Authors." Chip, who runs a popular agent blog, is very wise when it comes to marketing both fiction and nonfiction. We are fortunate to have him aboard for this course, and I, for one, will be attending this webinar and yoking his knowledge.





This is a unique business-oriented webinar for authors who have self-published books out, authors who have traditional published books out, and authors who have books coming out soon. Chip will be presenting and also answering questions from writers.

DETAILS

It's a 90-minute webinar. It goes down at 1 p.m., EST Thursday, April 8.  Each registration comes with access to the archived version of the program and the materials for 1 year. In other words, if something happens and you cannot attend it live, you can watch it later.



WHAT YOU'LL LEARN

These days most publishing houses expect their authors to handle the vast majority of the marketing effort for their books. Since most authors are trained writers but not trained publicists, it can be a bit daunting. The goal of this webinar will be to break the marketing process down into clear, doable steps. We'll explore how to create and begin implementing your own, personalized marketing plan to make your book stand out in a crowded marketplace. What you'll learn:
  • The basics of marketing in the new economy
  • What an author "brand" is, and how to establish and use it
  • Five things you can do to become your publisher's favorite author
  • What to expect your publisher to do (and what not to expect)
  • The keys to great marketing copy
  • How to get maximum impact out of social media
ABOUT CHIP

Chip MacGregor has been in publishing for almost three decades. He has represented hundreds of titles, his authors have won numerous awards, and the books he's represented have hit every major bestseller list, including #1 on the New York Times list.

Questions? Contact writingwebinars@fwmedia.com. Sign up here!


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Your Fans Are Your Collaborators: A Novelist's Take on Publicity and Networking
Posted by Chuck

When my YA fantasy The Order of Odd-Fish first came out, I had no idea about publicity. "I shall withdraw into a Salinger-esque haze," I muttered to myself at the grocery store. "I will cultivate an air of mystery ... why not? The book is done, what more can I say? Anyway, the very fact I am incommunicado will only make me seem more intriguing!" My fans taught me differently. And it turned out that, far from being completed, the creation of the world of Odd-Fish had only begun.


 

Guest writer James Kennedy is the
author of The Order of Odd-Fish, a YA fantasy.



I learned that fantasy fans are eager co-creators. Soon they were making and posting online astonishing Odd-Fish fan art. Impressed, I got in touch with these ambitious young artists. I started featuring their art in a special gallery on my website. Then the trickle became a deluge!

APRIL 17 GALLERY SHOW

Artists like these deserve proper recognition. So on April 17, to culminate this creative outpouring, I’m putting on a gallery show in Chicago of all the great Order of Odd-Fish fan art I’ve received. I’m working with Chicago theatre groups Collaboraction and Strange Tree to pull it off. We’re decorating their space to portray scenes from Odd-Fish. Characters from the book will stroll around the gallery, and the evening will climax with a costumed dance party! The week after, we’re bringing in school field trips for author performances, art viewings, and writing workshops. This is not only a great way to honor the fan art, but it’s fun publicity for the book, too.



Jo and Ian with Odd-Fish
Banner" by Diana Todd



It hasn't just been illustrations. Check out this cake by Elise Carlson, which won the “Most Creative” prize at the University of Florida’s Edible Book Contest. It depicts a pivotal scene from Odd-Fish in which a giant fish vomits a building onto a beach:




My editor described it as
“simultaneously the most impressive
and least appetizing cake I’ve ever seen.”



Last year, I noticed that a high school student named Max Pitchkites had posted some impressively original cut-paper Odd-Fish art on Twitter. I was so blown away, I contacted him and asked for more. In the space of just a few months, Max went on to illustrate all twenty-eight chapters of the book. Max is no longer just a reader. He’s now a collaborator and a friend. Click here to see all his amazing work.

When I announced the art show, I went on to the artists' social networking site DeviantArt and invited Odd-Fish fans to submit. The response was tremendous. With every new piece of art, I was thrilled to make a personal connection with my readers. None of these connections would've been possible before the Internet, of course. Our generation of writers is blessed with being able to be in close contact with those who appreciate our work in a way that was impossible before.




"The Belgian Prankster"
by Kathleen Simmons



In short: to be a mysterious, inaccessible mandarin is to miss out on all the fun! How else would I have learned about this homemade beer based on Odd-Fish’s villain? Matt Mayes and Meghan Rutledge of Chicago brewed and bottled this Belgian ale in their basement. Gabe Patti painted the label. They invited me over to try it, and it was delicious! More new friends, and an opportunity to enjoy one of my characters in liquid form. They’re making a keg of it for the art show!





I’m astonished at how creative and generous Odd-Fish fans have been. I think this tendency is unique to fantasy and science fiction. Fantasy fans want to be part of the process of creation of the stories they love. I especially appreciate it when the artist puts their own twist on Odd-Fish, adding elements that aren’t technically in my story but probably should've been—ideas that are quintessentially Oddfishian, and yet uniquely the artists’ own.

The great grand-daddy of the genre, J.R.R. Tolkien,
famously likened fantasy to "sub-creation." For me, it has also become an experience in "co-creation." If you are a fantasy author, don’t ignore your co-creators. Collaborate with them. Amazing things will follow.

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Live Around Dayton, OH? Come See Me Speak at the Erma Bombeck Writers Workshop
Posted by Chuck

If you live anywhere near Dayton, OH, or you have a passion for humor writing, come to the Erma Bombeck Writers Workshop, April 15-17, 2010. The conference specializes in humor writing and human interest writing.

DETAILS

April 15-17, 2010, at the University of Dayton. See the event website here
. The registration fee is $375, with some scholarships available for University of Dayton students. The 2008 workshop sold out, as did the 2006 event, do register quickly! Workshop sessions take place on campus, with dinners held at the Dayton Marriott Hotel, 1414 S. Patterson Blvd. The contact is Matt Dewald, director, at 937-229-1404.





WHO WILL BE THERE?

I will be there all day Friday doing a variety of presentations on agents and publishing, and also meeting with writers whenever I can. Keynote speakers include:
  • New York Times columnist Gail Collins
  • "Fox & Friends" co-anchor and author Steve Doocy
  • 8 Simple Rules for Dating My Teenage Daughter author W. Bruce Cameron
  • "Late Show With David Letterman" Emmy-nominated writer Bill Scheft.
  • Christian Lander, author of Stuff White People Like: The Definitive Guide to the Unique Taste Of Millions
  • Donna Gephart, author of As If Being 12 ¾ Isn’t Bad Enough, My Mother Is Running for President!, winner of the Sid Fleischman Humor Award for the best humorous children's book of the year

OTHER COOL TIDBITS

Matthew Dewald, director of the workshop, says: "Our presenters come from a lot of fields: traditional column-writing, television, blogging, podcasting, twittering, photography, memoirs, fiction and stand-up. Some favorite faculty from past years are coming back, and we have plenty of new, very funny and accomplished folks to keep the conversations fresh."
  

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# Tuesday, March 23, 2010
7 Things I've Learned So Far, by James Dashner
Posted by Chuck

This is a new recurring column I'm calling "7 Things I've Learned So Far," where writers at any stage of their career can talk about seven things they've learned along their writing journey that they wish they knew at the beginning. This installment is from successful kids writer James Dashner.




Guest blogger James Dashner's latest
YA book is The Maze Runner.



1. Not every agent is right for you. I’ve had quite the interesting journey with my book, The Maze Runner. I actually wrote the first draft of it almost five years ago, and it’s been through many ups and downs since. One of those stops included signing with my first agent. Although she was great and got my manuscript in front of some top editors, I think she should have recognized that my work wasn’t good enough yet, and pushed me to make it better. We also had major communication problems and ended up going our separate ways. Later, after many revisions of Maze and the publication of The 13th Reality, I signed with a new agent (Michael Bourret of Dystel & Goderich) and we sold Maze to Random House three weeks later.

2. Networking is key. Almost every author I know—and certainly myself included—can trace their publishing success back to someone they met at a writers conference. If you want to get published, I can’t think of any better advice. Attend every conference you can find and afford. Not only will you find editors and agents (and you can’t overstate the value of face-to-face meetings), but you’ll also meet other authors and aspiring writers who can help your journey. My two biggest breaks: meeting an editor from the publisher of
The 13th Reality, and becoming friends with an author who later recommended me to her agent.

3. Differentiate your characters. In my early writing, all of my characters were exactly the same person. They all spoke the same, made the same types of jokes, reacted the same, etc. I think they were all just me in disguise. Something I’ve worked on really hard over the last few years is making them stand out from each other. Different backgrounds, thought processes, ways of speaking, emotional reactions, senses of humor (or lack thereof), etc. Ironically, this was very difficult for
The Maze Runner because none of the characters remember their previous lives, and memories and background are very useful tools for character development. But I did the best I could!

4. Immerse your reader in the story with depth. Another thing I’ve worked hard to improve. In the beginning, I wrote my stories much in the way you’d tell a quick bedtime story. This happened, then this happened, then this happened, etc. I’ve learned patience. Give internal thoughts of the characters—show us what they’re thinking and feeling. Use the five senses when describing setting. Patiently develop scenes, building them to their climax or revelation. It’s a fine line—you don’t want your reader to get bored. But you also don’t want them to feel like you’re just rushing from one cool scene to the next.

5. Don’t make your hero or villain two-dimensional. This is so important on both sides of the coin. A villain is so much more compelling if they’re not just purely evil. When you’ve made your reader feel empathy for the bad guy, you’ve won. Two great examples are Severus Snape and Darth Vader. By the same token, you don’t want the protagonist to be Mr. or Mrs. Perfect. Give them flaws and weaknesses. Make them do things that cause the reader to doubt whether or not that person is worthy of the title, hero. Then you’ll have created characters they’ll never forget.

6. Set goals and work to achieve them. True story: In August of 2003, I set a goal to become a full-time author within five years. I told a bunch of my friends so I’d have witnesses and people to push me. Well, funny enough, I quit my old job as an accountant (bleck, retch, puke) in August of 2008, exactly five years later. I know the goal helped me. I also set daily writing goals (words per day) when I’m in first draft writing mode, and that really helps keep me on task. You don’t have to get all Stephen Covey crazy about it, but goals do work.

7. It’s all about the story. You will and should do everything in your power to improve your actual writing skills. You’ll work hard to create characters that are compelling and unforgettable. But in the end, it’s the story that matters. Don’t ever let the other stuff get in the way of your inherent skills as a kick-butt storyteller. Move the reader, make them happy and sad and excited and scared. Make them stare into space after they’ve put the book down, thinking about the tale that’s become a part of them. Be unpredictable, be real, be interesting. Tell a good story.



James Dashner is the author of
The Maze Runner as well as
The 13th Reality series (all YA books).
See his author website here
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# Monday, March 22, 2010
Agent Advice: Shannon O’Neill of The Sagalyn Literary Agency
Posted by Chuck

Agent Interview by
contributor Ricki Schultz.

Agent Advice is a series of quick interviews with literary and script agents who talk with Guide to Literary Agents about their thoughts on writing, publishing, and just about anything else.

This installment features
Shannon O'Neill of The Sagalyn Literary Agency. Director of Domestic Rights, Shannon is a native of the Washington region. She has a Masters of Arts in Writing from Johns Hopkins University and graduated with honors from Dartmouth College. She worked for Island Press and Politics and Prose Bookstore before coming to the agency in 2007.

She is seeking:
The Sagalyn Literary Agency specializes in quality nonfiction and mainstream fiction. They do not represent romance, westerns, science fiction, poetry, children's books, or screenplays.





GLA: Why did you become an agent?

SO: Since childhood, books provided me things that nothing else could—an unwavering supply of companionship, escapism, entertainment.
     In high school and then at Dartmouth College, I started taking creative writing classes and found that I didn't just enjoy reading, I was also curious about how poems, short stories, novels, and long narratives were constructed and assembled. I got a Masters in Writing from Johns Hopkins University while working as an assistant editor at a small publisher and as a bookseller at Politics and Prose, a powerhouse of an independent bookstore here in Washington DC.
     When I learned more about what agents do, I was struck by the combination of skills the job required, and I started looking around to see what agencies were located in DC. I was lucky enough to land at a place where editorial input is welcomed as essential, and where each project is given ample time and attention, no matter what.
     I love meeting with potential authors and helping them hatch an idea, and then watching/helping/guiding as that idea grows into a book proposal and a full-fledged manuscript.

GLA: Tell us about a recent project you’ve sold.

SO: I've worked on a host of eclectic projects lately—everything from a biography of a Civil War general to a book on the health of presidents and how it affects their policies while in office to a look inside the modern mysteries of aviation and the air travel industry. Basically, a lot of nonfiction from experts in their fields who have the writing chops and the clear voice needed to appeal to a general audience.

GLA: Are there any books coming out now that you’re excited about?

SO: I'm very excited to see Judy Pasternak's Yellow Dirt come out in the fall from Free Press. Judy is a marvelous writer and, in this book, she tackles a subject that demands attention. The United States government undertook uranium mining operations on the Navajo reservation during the frenzy of the Cold War and left behind a contaminated wasteland. The local people have suffered immensely as a result, and this book is a reckoning for all the world to see.

GLA: What are you looking for right now when tackling the slush pile?

SO: I pray for someone who has done their homework. By that I don't mean a nicely written “grabby” query. By that I mean someone who is intimately involved in the inner workings of the field that they are writing about or who has at least done extensive research on their topic and knows it inside out.



GLA: Looking at your agency’s title list, I notice the majority of subjects—in both fiction and nonfiction—deal with the political, the historical, or the military (which makes sense, being that you are based in the DC area). Do you notice any trends in the kinds of projects that pique your interest, in terms of subgenres or elements that particularly grab you?

SO: The best writing embodies a sense of discovery. As far as subject matter goes, my tastes are catholic and wide ranging. In terms of execution, I tend to be quite orthodox.
     So pique my interest with your discoveries about why insects congregate, your new findings about how the limbic system affects cognition or your new theory about how the war in Afghanistan will end. But hold it by writing in an engaging and effectual manner about what that means about human behavior, how we can recover from brain trauma, or what that means for future geopolitics in the Middle East. 
     Details can be captivating, but the big picture is what concerns us all.

GLA: You teach a number of writing and publishing workshops at The Writing Center in Washington, DC. One of your current classes focuses on the idea that writers have four distinct artistic personalities. Can you tell us a bit more about that?

SO: I think that writers are often too hard on themselves in the initial stages of the creative process—that, or they think that first stage is the only one. Writing is a methodical process that involves drafting and revision, rereading and revision, more drafting, more revision ... you get the point.
     You have to let yourself go and write that sh*tty first draft (Hemingway said it, not me!)—just let the ideas flow and get it out on paper. But that's not the draft you show to anyone except your cat or your spouse. There's a lot of work that you need to do to get it to some end stage where it can be judged and reviewed by a person like an agent. So that particular class talks about the stages along the way.

GLA: With the amount of nonfiction your agency represents, author platform must play a major role in your everyday decisions when considering book proposals. We’ve all heard writers need to have a Web presence (and it doesn't hurt to have your own TV show), but what impresses you in terms of platform?

SO: Doesn't have to be much—a couple well-placed, thoughtful articles in well-known publications, or even just publications that are important to your field. I like reading projects from academics and journalists, as long as they can translate their style from that of their profession to that of the general book reader.

GLA: Will you be at any upcoming writers’ conferences where writers can meet and pitch you?
 
SO: There might be a few others in the spring and summer, but I know for sure I'll be at the June 12, 2010 American Independent Writers Conference in Washington, DC.

GLA: I read you came first in your age group in the XTERRA Fugitive 10K in June 2009 (congrats, by the way!). Is there anything else writers might be surprised to learn about you personally?

SO: Wow, you did some serious sleuthing to come up with that one. I'm impressed. Running is a big part of my life—though I prefer longer distances than 10k. I'm a marathoner, really. And I enjoy the training as much, if not more, than the racing. Kind of like the writing process and the finished product ...

GLA: What should new writers do in 2010 to keep up with the publishing industry?

SO: As a new writer, I would worry less about e-books and more about sustained narrative, creating an arc of a story, and incorporating telling detail into your writing. Yes, it's important to keep abreast of trends in publishing. But you have to have something worth publishing first. Start worrying about industry stuff when your first book is out and you're cracking on the second.

This agent interview by Ricki Schultz,
freelance writer and coordinator of
Shenandoah Writers in VA. Visit her blog
or follow her on Twitter.


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Contest Winners Announced: Urban Fantasy and Paranormal Romance
Posted by Chuck

Judging is complete and here are the winners for the third "Dear Lucky Agent" contest, which focused on paranormal romance and urban fantasy writing. Congratulations to all winners! We had about 300 entries, which was great.

The current contest happening as of this week (March 22, 2010) is a contest for the worst storyline you can come up with. The next agent-judged "Dear Lucky Agent" contest will start anywhere from a few days from now to two weeks. Stay tuned!

GRAND-PRIZE WINNER: Taming Raven, by Kitty Ducane.

FOUR RUNNERS-UP (the judge chose 4):
I Heart Moonlake, by Brandi Baughman; In the Aether, by Amanda Sabourov; Colors Like Memories, by Meradeth Snow; and The Stranger Inside, by Melanie Marks.

YOUR AGENT JUDGE: Joanna Stampfel-Volpe is an agent with Nancy Coffey Literary. Books she's repped include:

     


Pieces of Sky
,
by Kaki Warner. This award-winning, Romantic Times Top Pick debut novel is the first book in Warner's Blood Rose trilogy (Berkley, January 2010)

Haunting Emma, Book One: Deception by Lee Nichols (Bloomsbury Children's, June 2010)

The Town that Food Saved: How One Community Found Vitality in Local Food by Ben Hewitt (Rodale, March 2010)


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# Sunday, March 21, 2010
How I Got My Agent: Dom Testa
Posted by Chuck

"How I Got My Agent" is a recurring feature on the GLA blog. I find it fascinating to see the exact road people took that landed them with a rep. Seeing the things people did right vs. what they did wrong (highs and the lows) can help other scribes who are on the same journey. Some tales are of long roads and many setbacks, while others are of good luck and quick signings.

To see
the previous installments of this column, click here.

If you have a literary agent and would be interested in writing a short guest column for this GLA blog, e-mail me at literaryagent@fwmedia.com and we'll talk specifics.

Dom Testa is a radio host in Denver and
an award-winning young adult author
The paperback of
The Comet's Curse,
the first book in his sci-fi series, is available
now. See his
series website here.


NOT LOOKING FOR LOVE

Relationship experts say that the key to finding true love is to not look for it. Although it might seem counter-intuitive, the anecdotal evidence appears to back them up. How many couples have you known who either met through total chance, or met when one or neither was even interested in a relationship? They weren’t cruising the bars, or active in an online dating service; it just happened. That’s essentially my story when it came to landing an agent and a book deal. But before you roll your eyes and/or curse me, consider this: the road to representation is often much easier when your focus isn’t on the actual hunt itself, but rather on the product that fires your passion.

My publishing journey began in the early 90s when I participated in the annual Dr. Seuss birthday celebration at a Denver-area school. As a morning radio show host, I’m often asked to either emcee an event, or to be a celebrity this-or-that for a charity. But this was different, and—surprise, surprise!—I had a great time. I began reading at schools on a regular basis. Plus, because I’d been writing as a hobby since high school, the kids’ enthusiasm inspired me to devote more and more time to polishing my skills.

By the late 90s I had segued from reading at elementary schools to actively working with older students. I began hosting writing assemblies and workshops at middle schools (something I still frequently do today), while scribbling out ideas for a YA book. My radio career took up much of my time, but all writers know that you carve out whatever time possible to get it done. By 2003 I had finished the first few drafts of what would become The Comet’s Curse.

FORMING MY OWN PUBLISHING COMPANY

But I never considered finding an agent, or, for that matter, landing a traditional publishing deal. I wanted control of the release, the cover, the marketing, and the planned sequels, so I opted to form my own publishing company and put in even more time. This was truly a labor of love, and I felt that if I believed in it that much, I could do anything with my book.

The Comet’s Curse was published in January of 2005. In the fall of that year I was cruising down I-25 in Denver when my cell phone rang. On the other end was Chuck Sambuchino, calling from Writer’s Digest magazine. “Pull over,” he said to me. “You don’t want to be driving when I tell you this.” What he told me was that I had won the grand prize in the annual Writer’s Digest Best Self-Published Book contest, beating out 1500 entries from around the world. Yes! (pumps fist in air)

In the next two years I published two more volumes in the Galahad series: The Web of Titan, and The Cassini Code. By this point I was overwhelmed with radio, speaking, running a small independent press, and finding time to write. One evening I sat on my deck, drinking beers with my friend Judith Briles, who has published more than twenty books. I told her that the time might have come to find a traditional publisher. She recommended I contact a former agent of hers, Jacques de Spoelbergh.

TOR BOOKS

Jacques was quite pleasant, but unsure that he would represent me. Instead he suggested that I directly contact Tom Doherty of Tor Books, the worldwide leader in sf/fantasy. My first thought was, “Really? Write to the man who FOUNDED Tor? Isn’t that...presumptuous?” But I did indeed send off the package, with a one-page letter to Tom and copies of the first two Galahad books that I’d published.

Five days later—yes, five—Kathleen Doherty, the publisher of Tor’s YA division, called. Her first words to me were memorable: “We love your books, and want to sign you to a six-book deal.” After I picked myself off the floor, I got back in touch with Jacques, and, after a few in-depth conversations, agreed that he would represent me with this series. He’s a true gentleman, and a savvy industry vet.

So my story is quite different than most. I funneled my energies into creating a tangible—and credible—body of work. While some might say, “wow, it only took you five days,” I’m quick to point out that the entire process began fifteen years earlier. That’s fifteen years of writing, visiting schools, hosting workshops, building a one-man independent publishing imprint, and staying focused on the end result: the book itself. The key is gravity; I created gravitational pull that attracted people to my book. And then, like true love, it “just happened.”


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Footnotes: 4 Articles on Agent Pet Peeves
Posted by Chuck

Footnotes is a recurring series on the GLA blog where I pick a subject and provide several interesting articles on said topic. You’ve revised your manuscript and polished that query letter until it’s nice and shiny; now it’s time to submit to agents. But before you send that query, check out this list of articles regarding agent pet peeves.



1. A professional e-mail. If you’re using that cute nickname your boyfriend gave you as your e-mail address, you may want to change it.
     
2. Resubmit? What’s the protocol for contacting the agents you’ve submitted to once you receive an offer? Agent Elana Roth discusses her thoughts on the subject.
           
3. A big list. Here’s a “cornucopia” of agent pet peeves for you to check out.

4. Pass on phone calls. If you you’re thinking about pitching an agent over the phone, please think twice.      

This guest series by writer
Nancy Parish, who runs her
blog, The Sound and Furry.


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# Saturday, March 20, 2010
Cover Band Soap Opera: How a Set List is Constructed
Posted by Chuck

I am in charge of creating the set list every gig for my Cincinnati cover band. We have three sets of music during our four-hour night, with a 20-minute break in between each set. This is fitting, because just as a story is told in three acts, our night is laid out in three acts, each one different than the other. Here's how a set list is constructed and why.

ACT ONE: THE FIRST SET

The beginning of the first set is filled with songs I would describe as "not dancy" (awesome description, I know). The goals for our first few songs are to show our capabilities as musicians (in other words: not suck) and also play a variety of time periods. So early on, you'll hear "The Rock Show" by Blink-182 (2000s), "Alive" by Pearl Jam (1990s), "Every Little Thing She Does is Magic" by The Police (1980s) and "Rockin Me Baby" by Steve Miller Band (1970s). This is all done to show you that we play a variety of music so you'll stick around.

About halfway through the first set, we start playing more dancable songs; this is almost like the inciting incident in a novel. We bust out "I Want You to Want Me" or "All Summer Long" and see if people start moving. The first set wraps up with some highly dancable songs, like a Queen medley and more. We end strong to get people pumped about Act II.





ACT TWO: THE SECOND SET


So now it's 20 minutes and two beers later. We shift to all dancable stuff. Again, we mix the decades, but this set tends to skew toward the 80s. This is where you hear "Jessie's Girl" and "Blister in the Sun," etc. This is often the most fun set because the dance floor is bumping and people are having a good time. The whole crowd sings along when we make it to Journey.

ACT THREE: THE THIRD SET

The third set can be called "the most exciting," because it never repeats itself. When the third set begins, we continue with dancable songs to see if the crowd still has some boogie in them. Whether they do or don't, tanks are running empty. There's usually a lull in the middle of this third set, so we start doing one of two things: 1) playing 90s rock that we grew up on (such as Nirvana, Weezer, Pearl Jam), or 2) just start taking requests.

See, by that point, we've lost the dancing girls. What remains is usually drunk guys, and then want singalong rock. So we give them Radiohead and The Killers, and they eat it up. The crowd has completely changed, so we do, too. This is also the time of night where we bust out any funky raggae-style jams, such as "No Woman No Cry" or "Jane Says." Drunk guys just seem to love that stuff.
And, naturally, we end with "Zombie" by The Cranberries ... just cause.

So even when we're playing at some smoky bar, we're still constructing a kind of narrative for people, with planned highs and lows - scripted exciting stretches as well as moments for you to catch your breath. There is a method in it, I swear.

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# Friday, March 19, 2010
5 Query Letter Tips
Posted by Chuck

It's been a while since I addressed
simple query writing tips, so here
are a few of my pointers on
writing good queries.


1. Give us something with voice. Agent Dan Lazar once said it like this. "Instead of saying 'Jane Smith is tall, blonde, pretty and lives in New York,' try 'Manhattanite Jane Smith turns heads wherever she goes and hasn't paid for a drink since high school.'" Both sentences are essentially saying the same thing, but the second version 1) paints a picture, and 2) establishes voice in the query.

2. If you have self-published a book or two in the past, you have to come clean and say so. You can, however, mention this at the very end and not even say the title of your previous book. It's a way of having honest disclosure but trying to keep the focus on your new project.

3. State your credits quickly. If you won first place at a writers conference young adult contest, great. Just mention it quickly. If you've published articles, say so concisely. Try this: "I've written articles for variety of regional and national publications, including the Cincinnati Enquirer and Writer's Digest." Simple and to the point.

4. Try not to say "My novel is." Instead of saying "My novel is full and twists and turns," prove that it is by showing it in your pitch. It's a simple matter of showing vs. telling.

5. Avoid comparisons to the biggies.
Comparing your work to other books is always a little tricky and dangerous, but above all, avoid the cliches that everyone else is saying. These include the following: Harry Potter, Twilight, Janet Evanovich, Stephen King and The Da Vinci Code. I'd also include Eat, Pray Love here because it is slowly approaching cliche status.


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Perseverance and Encouragement: The Benefits of Contests
Posted by Chuck

“And the winner is” are four words that inspire anticipation whenever they are uttered. The heart beats a little bit faster, nostrils flare slightly, the eyes widen and pupils dilate as we await the name that follows the fateful phrase. In theory, the winner is the pageant contestant with the most poise, intelligence, talent and beauty; the horse that peaks at the proper moment in the race; the actor whose performance transcends imitation and takes us to a place where we can do more than simply imagine—we can believe. Getting it done at the optimal time seems to be the key to success. But having all the right stuff in place at the proper time can be a delicate process. And “right” can be very subjective—especially in writing.




Guest columnist Pamala Knight, a perennial
writing contest bridesmaid, is busy helping
Chicago North RWA plan Spring Fling 2010,
their upcoming writing conference. Attending
agents include Diana Fox, Laurie McLean,
Joanna Stampfel-Volpe and Paige Wheeler.
Dates are April 23-24.



A good gauge of whether or not your writing has reached the level where all those moving parts (POV, pace, characterizations, plot, etc.) are synchronized like two sixteen-year-olds wearing sequins and performing ballet in a pool, is to enter a writing contest.

CONTESTS = CRITIQUES

Think of the judges as a big group of anonymous critique partners and then consider the benefits of that arrangement
no one who’s married to, involved with or gave birth to you giving the straight scoop on how to get to where you want to be in your writing career. Critiques obtained through contests tell where your writing needs to be tweaked and tightened. All the good information needed before you can send your baby out into the business end of the publishing world.   

One of the things I love best about contests (apart from winning, which I haven’t done yet) is that the comments are always so encouraging. No one will say “shred this manuscript at your earliest opportunity, donate that laptop and get back to your day job.” The comments are all about learning to make craft blend in perfectly with your creative abilities. "All inspiration all the time" is how I look at it.

TYPES OF CONTESTS

Contests ranging from RWA’s prestigious RITA’s and Golden Heart to the less-stringent-but-no-less-meaningful chapter contests offer excellent feedback and critique on where the foundation of a manuscript might need a few more yards of concrete before the house is ready to go up. If you’re looking to test the waters with your manuscript, contests are a good way to get advice. If you win, you get affirmation that you’re on the right path. There’s also name recognition, opportunities to have the professionals read your work and maybe even some chocolate. Personally, I check first to see if the winners get chocolate. But, if you don’t win, there’s the advice and encouragement. Bonus items all around, in my opinion.

CHICAGO NORTH RWA

My local RWA chapter, Chicago North, just published the finalists in our 12th annual Fire and Ice contest for unpublished writers. This year, we had a record number of entries. I judged a few entries and put myself into the shoes of each entrant as I formulated my comments. I wanted to give helpful feedback and praise where needed from both the perspective of a writer and as a reader. It’s my dearest wish that my words will supplement an existing desire to make their manuscripts as bright and shiny as possible. Since we’ll announce the winners at Spring Fling 2010, I’m especially excited to meet the writers who will be in attendance. I know I’ll be as breathless to meet them here at the start of their careers as I will be when they’ve been on the New York Times bestsellers list for years.


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Successful Queries: Agent Jessica Faust and 'Murder on the Rocks'
Posted by Chuck

This new series is called "Successful Queries" and I'm posting actual query letters that succeeded in getting writers signed with agents.  In addition to posting the actual query letter, we will also get to hear thoughts from the agent as to why the letter worked. 

The 29th installment in this series is with agent Jessica Faust
(Bookends, Inc.) and her author, Karen MacInerney, for the book Murder on the Rocks, the first of Karen's Gray Whale Inn mystery series.





Dear Ms. Faust,

I enjoyed meeting you at the conference in Austin this past weekend. As I mentioned, I have had my eye on BookEnds for quite some time; when I discovered you would be at the conference, I knew I had to attend. We met during the final pitch session and discussed how the series I am working on might fit in with your current line of mystery series. Per your request, I have enclosed a synopsis and first three chapters of Murder on the Rocks, and 80,000-word cozy mystery that was a finalist in this year’s Writers’ League of Texas manuscript contest and includes several bed-and-breakfast recipes.

Thirty-eight-year-old Natalie Barnes has quit her job, sold her house and gambled everything she has on the Gray Whale Inn on Cranberry Island, Maine. But she’s barely fired up the stove when portly developer Bernard Katz rolls into town and starts mowing through her morning glory muffins. Natalie needs the booking, but Katz is hard to stomach—especially when he unveils his plan to build an oversized golf resort on top of the endangered tern colony next door. When the town board approves the new development not only do the terns face extinction, but Natalie’s Inn might just follow along. Just when Natalie thinks she can’t face more trouble, she discovers Katz’s body at the base of the cliff and becomes the number one suspect in the police’s search for a murderer. If Natalie doesn’t find the killer fast she stands to lose everything—maybe even her life.

I am a former public relations writer, a graduate of Rice University, a member of the Writers’ League of Texas, and founder of the Austin Mystery Writers critique group. I have spent many summers in fishing communities in Maine and Newfoundland, and escape to Maine as often as possible. The second Gray Whale Inn mystery, Dead and Berried, is currently in the computer.

If you would like to see the manuscript, I can be reached at (phone number). Thank you for your time and attention; I look forward to hearing from you soon.

Sincerely,
Karen Swartz MacInerney



Commentary from Jessica

Let’s start by looking at the first paragraph. Flattery can get you everywhere and Karen used it well here. She wasn’t over the top, but stated what I can only hope are facts. We had met at the conference and she had been watching BookEnds grow. She was smart to remind me immediately how we had met and that we had a personal connection.

I like that Karen put the title in italics. Bold, italics, whatever, but something to make your title jump out a little helps. I’m not sure why, but it does. The word count is right there with the standards for cozy mysteries, and since that’s what she’s targeting she’s headed in the right direction. I also want to point out that her description actually fits her genre. All too often I’ve received submissions in which the author named a genre for the book, but the description didn’t seem to match the genre.

Typically I would say that Karen’s blurb is a little long and I suspect she could probably have tightened it to one paragraph, but it does work. What really works about it for me is that it gives a sense of Karen’s voice and the feeling for the book. I like the sentence, “But she’s barely fired up the stone when portly developer Bernard Katz rolls into town and starts mowing through her morning glory muffins.” There is so much that’s said in that one line and so much we learn. I get the sense that Karen’s voice is light with a touch of humor and I get a real feel for the hominess of the bed-and-breakfast as well as the arrogance of Bernard Katz.

Karen’s credentials are impressive. She’s obviously been writing for a while and I really like the addition of her summers in Maine. I think it’s a personal touch, but one that’s perfectly related to the book. Book note: We did in fact sell Murder on the Rocks. It was the first title to launch her Gray Whale Inn series. So this query letter truly did launch an exciting career for Karen.




This query featured in the book
Formatting & Submitting Your Manuscript, 3rd. Ed.
To see dozens of query letter examples (novels,
nonfiction, short stories, kids books and more),
seek out this title.


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# Thursday, March 18, 2010
Bent Objects: An Awesome Blog-to-Book Success Story
Posted by Chuck

I am a big fan of blog success stories—instances where someone starts a blog that has enough momentum to warrant a book deal. Now there are the big blogs that are almost too big to feel happy for, such FailBlog or F My Life. And then there are middle-of-the-road awesome success stories like Bent Objects, which just make me smile all day long.




The Bent Objects blog was a simple brainchild of Terry Border, who aimed to show people to secret lives of everyday things—while making you laugh. These pictures are absolute genius. It's a great example of a blog that gained enough of a readership for an agent to come calling. Very cool. It's a great example that it can be done.


    


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# Wednesday, March 17, 2010
The (Third) ''Worst Storyline Ever'' Contest!
Posted by Chuck

Have you got a horrible idea for a story? Well I want to hear about it. Welcome to the (third) "Worst Storyline Ever" Contest - a competition that encourages terrible loglines.  This contest happened before, so click on "Contests" at the bottom of this post and scroll down a bit to see previous incarnations. (If you have any problems or concerns, e-mail me at literaryagent@fwmedia.com.)


"Worst Storyline Ever"

Contest


A logline
is a one-sentence line that explains what your story is about and shows the "hook" - the unique idea that makes people want to see more.  You see loglines all the time in TV Guide and on the back of DVD boxes. Here are some examples:

  • "Three middle-aged men defeat their midlife crises by starting a college fraternity." (Old School)
  • "When a Roman general is betrayed and his family murdered by an evil prince, he comes to Rome as a gladiator to seek revenge." (Gladiator)
  • "In a future where criminals are arrested before the crime occurs, a cop struggles on the lam to prove his innocence for a murder he has not yet committed." (Minority Report)

But that's all the examples I'm going to give you, because I'm not looking for good examples of a logline; I'm looking for bad examples. Nay - terrible, stupid, "oh-my-God-that-idea-is-dumb-as-hell" examples.


Examples of Bad Loglines

1. "After an unidentified cow swallows an armed nuclear device in a botched Homeland Security raid, Agent Tom Anderson is thrust into an unlikely partnership with buxom organic farmer Daisy Jones to sift through three hundred cows and 10 barns full of manure as the clock runs down in a desperate quest to save Kansas City from a moo-clear disaster." (past contest winner from Livia Blackburne).

2. "A man's lifelong plan to dress up like Jabba the Hutt and star in a new line of workout tapes finally comes to fruition, but everything goes horribly awry when the man gets ink poisoning, lead poisoning and mercury poisoning all at once."

3. "
After losing badly in The Kentucky Derby, a horse is sold to the glue factory where he is processed and bottled, and we follow the stories of everyone who uses the glue, from a nose-picking pre-schooler to a dyslexic kidnapper who glues cut-out letters on a ransom note, until the last drop is gone." (past contest winner from Chris Whigham).


Here are the rules:

1. Stick to the format, but have fun with the idea. You want your logline to be one sentence only and must be 60 words or fewer, and explain what the story/movie is about. It's what you put in that one sentence that will win you this competition. So the trick is to make your logline a terribly creative idea that's pitched in a professional manner.
2. The contest will go until the end of the day, 11:59 p.m., EST, Sunday, March 28.  Submissions received after that will not be considered.
3. To participate, simply click on "Comments" at the end of this post and leave your submission as a comment with your full name and e-mail. You must include your real name and e-mail.  If you are super paranoid about leaving your name (Google!), use "L. Martin Smith" instead of "Leonard Smith."
5. You can submit up to two (2) bad loglines. You can include both in the same comment post as you wish.
6. The contest is open to everyone of all ages, save those employees, officers and directors of GLA's publisher, F+W Media (formerly F+W Publications).
7. By posting a terrible logline for consideration in this contest, you are agreeing to the terms written here.

Please note: To be eligible to submit, I ask that you do one of two things: 1) Mention and link to this contest twice through your social media - blogs, Twitter, Facebook; or 2) just mention this contest once and also add the Guide to Literary Agents Blog (www.guidetoliteraryagents.com/blogto your blogroll. Please provide link(s) so I can verify eligibility. You can e-mail the links if you wish (literaryagent@fwmedia.com).


The Prizes:

First prize (grand prize): 1) A query letter critique from me. 2) A follow-up phone call to discuss the query critique and a plan of action for seeing your work published (basically: you ask questions, I answer). 3) A one-year subscription to WritersMarket.com; 4) Praise on this blog from yours truly.

Two runner-up prizes: 1)
A one-year subscription to WritersMarket.com (value $50).

The Judges:


       

          First Round Judge                           Final Round Judge:
        Chuck's dog, Graham 
                    Graham's owner, Chuck
           (pictured age 3)                               (pictured age 11)

* Please do not throw dog mentions into every entry. Graham is an independent judge who is looking for just plain funny.

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7 Things I've Learned So Far (Using Songs), by Jessica Lee Anderson
Posted by Chuck

This is a new recurring column I'm calling "7 Things I've Learned So Far," where writers at any stage of their career can talk about seven things they've learned along their writing journey that they wish they knew at the beginning. This installment is from kids writer Jessica Lee Anderson.




Jessica Lee Anderson is the author of Trudy,
which won the 2005 Milkweed Prize for Children’s
Literature, as well as Border Crossing. She’s
published two nonfiction readers, as well as
fiction and nonfiction for a variety of magazines
including Highlights for Children. See her
website
and her blog.



1. “You’ve Got a Friend” by James Taylor. In this business, sometimes the north wind of rejection blows, an agent might desert you, or reviews seem like they’re taking your soul. There is nothing like having a network of friends that are willing to support you through it all!  

2. “Lean on Me” by Bill Withers. I’ve leaned on the advice of my critique partners to strengthen my writing. I’ve also sought out the counsel from my mentors when I’ve needed a hand making important career decisions.

 3. “With a Little Help from My Friends” by Joe Cocker. I’ve discovered there is definitely power in group marketing, and getting by with each other’s help. Jo Whittemore, P.J. Hoover, and I recently started a group called The Texas Sweethearts for this very reason.  

4. “On the Road Again” by Willie Nelson. The life I love is writing, and I’ve learned that I need to hit the road to make new connections by attending conferences (local, national, and international), book festivals, assemblies, book clubs, etc. 

5. “Patience” by Guns N’ Roses. I’ve made some progress over time by trying not to focus on the things I can’t control (like how long it takes to get a response), and I try to focus on staying productive instead. 

6. “Taking Chances” by Celine Dion. What do I say about taking chances? I’m all for it, especially since my first novel, Trudy, was pulled from the slush pile. I felt like I’d jumped off the edge when I wrote about schizophrenia in my second novel, Border Crossing. What I do say about taking chances? Go for it!

7. “Don’t Stop” by Fleetwood Mac. Yesterday is gone, and even though there are many things I didn’t get accomplished, tomorrow will be here soon. I can only hope it will be even better than before! 




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# Tuesday, March 16, 2010
New Media Rehab: Opportunities Through Blogs and More
Posted by Chuck

It’s no news that big print media considers new media a kind of onslaught, as though traditional print is the once-lustrous orchard, and bloggers and other independents are each a locust, which, one-at-a-time, are not normally threatening, but jillions of them at once is a different story.



Guest blogger Hollis Gillespie is a humor writer
and columnist for
Atlanta magazine. She is also an
NPR commentator and guest on "The Tonight Show
with Jay Leno." Her blog is titled Inappropriate
Conversation. Her third book,
Trailer Trashed: My
Dubious Attempts at Upward Mobility
, was just
released. She is also the founder of the Shocking
Real-Life Media Continuing Education Academy,
which hosts writing, blogging and new-media workshops.


WRITERS HAVE THE POWER

But the plight of print media does not equal your plight. Because here is the fact: Writers have all the power now. They aren’t waiting to be deemed worthy of a platform by the Big Prints. Instead they are creating their own platforms by blogging, and because of that, advertisers have recognized a grassroots means to reach a massive audience by partnering directly with the writer. In short, advertisers have figured out a way to cut out the middleman. This is problematic for traditional media but not necessarily for you.

In fact, it’s a good thing for many writers, especially those who are still trying to make their mark. Because now you are able to plant your own sapling with a much better chance of seeing it grow. Because now the ground is level, and it’s fertile. Right now is when you need to plant your own tree, and I am talking directly to all of the out-of-work traditional-print writers out there who are wasting time bloviating about how no one’s paying them anymore.

BUILD YOUR IDEA

You need to build your boat right now, and, to do that, you need the basic equipment to compete in the new playing field. I am not even talking about equipment that costs money, I mean resources that are free. You simply need to learn to use them. What you need, in short, is a simple media rehab, the very basics of which consist of these components; a blog, an affiliate marketing account, Twitter and Facebook.

All of these are free to start and maintain. In the most elementary terms, it works like this: Your Twitter and Facebook accounts feed traffic to your blog, this traffic buys products advertised there and you receive a check for a percentage of those purchases. It’s no different from when you worked at a newspaper or magazine, except for all the difference in the world in that you are now your own publisher, and your income is directly related to the volume of the audience you are able to attract. This is freedom, people. Your product—your voice, your expression, your ability to write it—that hasn’t changed at all. That is still exactly where you left it, and there are still droves of people hungry to connect with it. What has changed is that Big Print can’t pay you for it anymore, so they are either taking away their platform or asking you to do it for free (now a depressingly common occurrence for writers).

THOSE WHO CAME BEFORE YOU

Enter your blog. Examples like peopleofwalmart.com should be very encouraging to you. This blog reportedly began garnering $1,000/day in revenue only three months after its inception. Another example is this brand-new twitter account that landed a TV deal just months after its inception, and a novice blog called regretsy.com that landed a book deal almost immediately after the first few posts hit the web. All of these blogs were started by people no different from you; people dealing with downsized income because of the economy so they created their own platforms to showcase their expression and the world responded.

IT'S A NEW WORLD

Writers, you have to stop kicking that dead horse hoping it will cough up another paycheck. And stop worrying about the travails of traditional media. History has proven that whenever a new media is introduced, it weeds out the weaker of the old media, but it doesn’t destroy it altogether. Radio didn’t destroy newspapers. Television didn’t destroy radio. And the internet won’t destroy all of the above. Just because some big trees in the orchard are dying, and making a lot of noise about it, doesn’t mean it’s a bad thing for you as a writer, even if you are one of the leaves that used to be attached to them.

Remember, you are the one with the power. Set up your own online platform and get your money directly from the advertisers who used to pay your former employer who, in turn, used to toss you your check. You are on your own now. Now is not the time to freak out or listen to the deafening (and often false) wailings of the dying meglomedia. You are not a leaf on a dying tree. You are a seed that has been set free.




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# Monday, March 15, 2010
Agent Advice: Quinlan Lee of Adams Literary
Posted by Chuck

Agent Interview by
contributor Ricki Schultz.

Agent Advice is a series of quick interviews with literary and script agents who talk with Guide to Literary Agents about their thoughts on writing, publishing, and just about anything else.

This installment features
Quinlan Lee of Adams Literary. Prior to joining Adams Literary, Quinlan worked for eight years as a freelance children’s writer for Scholastic, HarperCollins and Simon & Schuster, working on licensed projects for Clifford Puppy Days, Dora the Explorer, Hello Kitty and the Planet Earth series.

She is seeking:
interested only in children’s, middle-grade, and young adult literature.





GLA: How did you become an agent?
 
QL: I had worked in children's publishing for years as a writer and knew the importance of having someone focus on the business aspects of a writer's career, so a writer can focus on his or her creative process.
 
GLA: Tell us about a recent project you’ve sold.
 
QL: Penguin recently bought Time Snatchers by Richard Ungar, which will pub in Fall 2011. It is the exciting story of a 14-year-old orphan and conscripted time thief from 2061 New Beijing who steals treasures from the past for a Fagin-like character named Uncle. (Richard is also a picture book author and artist, and this is his debut novel.)

GLA: Are there any books coming out now that have you excited?

QL: Dark Life by Kat Falls pubs this May with Scholastic Press. It is an amazing story set in an apocalyptic future, where global warming and rising oceans have forced people to settle in underwater communities. From the moment I read it in our submissions inbox, I couldn't wait to share with other readers.

GLA: Adams Literary specializes in juvenile literature—picture books to middle-grade to young adult and everything in between. Do you find you gravitate toward a particular age group within kids’ lit?

QL: I love all children's and YA literature—from clever picture books to edgy YA. However, if I read the first pages of a middle-grade novel where the character's voice rings true or a YA novel that creates a world that seems familiar but lives only in the author's imagination, it goes to the top of my reading pile.

GLA: Do you accept any nonfiction?

QL: We do accept nonfiction, but Adams Literary is selective in taking on nonfiction authors and projects because it is a challenging market. A great example of nonfiction that we love is Vaunda Nelson's Bad News for Outlaws, which recently won the Coretta Scott King Award.

GLA: What are you looking for right now when tackling the slush pile?





QL
:
Books that appeal to boys are often hard to come by—I'm always looking for something that would make my nine-year old son laugh out loud or stay up past his bedtime, reading with a flashlight under the covers. When I'm tackling the slush pile, I want the same experience—to be sucked in so completely by a character or story that I want to stay up past my bedtime to finish it.

GLA: Do you notice any trends in the kinds of projects that pique your interest, in terms of subgenres or elements that particularly grab you?

QL: Of course, high-concept Dystopian stories are big in the market right now, and I find them fascinating. The great thing about these stories is that worlds can vary greatly from the underwater settlements of Dark Life to the disparate colonies of Panem in Suzanne Collins’s The Hunger Games, so each one is interesting and fresh.
     The best ones tell an enthralling story, but also raise important moral and life-changing questions that readers are dealing with in today's world.

GLA: What would you say is the number one mistake writers make when writing for kids?

QL: Bad children's writers don't think very highly of children—in a picture book, they go for cute instead of clever; in middle-grade fiction, they over-explain or dramatize a character's emotions so the reader is sure to “get-it”; and in YA, they assume edgy only means sex and drugs, not the tightrope of teenagers’ emotional lives.

GLA: How healthy is kids’ lit at the moment? Do you see it increasing or declining in the coming years?

QL: Literature for children and young adults is a bright spot in the challenging publishing market and continues to grow. For example, adult hardcover sales were down 17.8% for the first half of 2009 versus the same period in 2008, but children's/young adult hardcovers were up 30.7%. Another great trend is adult readers are gravitating towards YA books because they're well-written and tell a compelling story.  Who doesn't want to read a book like that?

GLA: Name two things writers can include in their queries that will elicit an automatic rejection from you.

QL: Adams Literary only accepts children's and young adult literature—so anything that's adult goes out immediately. That said, we read everything that comes in through our e-mail submission form from our website (www.adamsliterary.com). We receive more than 6,000 submissions annually, so be patient in waiting for a reply, but we will respond. 
     Queries that put up red flags say things like, “I made this story up for my grandchildren and they love it!” or “I don't know anything about children or writing, but I've always wanted to be writer.” 
     Conversely, showing you take your writing seriously and know the industry by attending SCBWI or other writing conferences, being in a writers' group or having an MFA in writing from a reputable school make your query stand out.

GLA: Will you be at any upcoming writers’ conferences where writers can meet and pitch you?

QL: I'll be attending the SCBWI Carolinas Conference in Charlotte, North Carolina, September 24-26, 2010, and I'll also be on the faculty of the annual conference on Children's Publishing at Carthage College in Wisconsin on October 1-2, 2010. 
     You can also meet other Adams Literary agents at these events: Tracey Adams will be at the NJ SCBWI, June 4-5, 2010, and Josh Adams will be on the faculty of the National SCBWI Conference July 29-August 2, 2010, in LA. 
     You can always visit Adams Literary's website to submit and to learn about other upcoming events.

GLA: What is something about you that writers would be surprised to hear?

QL: I am a writer myself, so I know the absolute joy and horrors of a blank page. I am also aware of the dangers of thinking that being a “published author” will make your life complete. I encourage all writers to learn the truth that Anne Lamott puts so beautifully in Bird by Bird, that “Writing has so much to give, so much to teach, so many surprises. The thing that you had to force yourself to do—the actual writing—turns out to be the best part.”

GLA: Best piece(s) of advice we haven’t talked about yet?

QL: Don't send something on the first day that you write the last word.  Patience! Let your writing sit for a while, let others read it and tell you what confuses or bores them, and then read it again yourself and see what worked better in your imagination than it does on the page. After that, revise. I see so many submissions with potential, but few with the confidence and maturity that comes from working on something until it is fully developed and ready for us to send it out editors.


This agent interview by Ricki Schultz,
freelance writer and coordinator of
Shenandoah Writers in VA. Visit her blog
or follow her on Twitter.


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# Saturday, March 13, 2010
Writing Tips From Max Lucado, Best-Selling Author
Posted by Chuck

It was his first time attending a writing conference. He is a best-selling author who has written more than 50 books and has sold 65 million copies of his work. Yet it was also his first time speaking at a conference. Although he was on unfamiliar territory, New York Times best-selling Christian author Max Lucado spoke of the tools writers have, at the Writing for the Soul conference in Denver in February 2010. Below, find his best tips on subject, discipline and clarity for writers.




Guest column by Audra Krell, published
freelance writer. Audra is also a vocalist,
and she and her son lead worship in
churches and at conferences across the country.



MAX SAYS: BE PASSIONATE

     • Your subject must be so worthwhile that it keeps you riveted to your chair.  
     • Because of your passion, you write without ceasing until it's finished.  
     • Strong topics and subjects cause writing to happen from the soul.
     • Desire to work your writing through, so the reader doesn't have to.

MAX SAYS: STEADY IS AS STEADY DOES

     • Make a date night with your notebook. If you sit long enough, you'll find something to write about.
     • With disciplined writing time, you'll grow to appreciate your work. 
     • Good words are worth the work.
     • The only thing better than writing is when your words connect with the reader.
 




MAX SAYS: ON A CLEAR DAY

 
     • Get your book down to one sentence. Every paragraph must pay homage to that sentence, or it doesn't get to play.
     • Every word must earn its place on the page.
     • Write concise but not shallow. 
     • Revise for as long as you can.

Good writing will go where we never can, and reroutes the trajectory of life. It seeps into the farthest corners of the world and the depths of a reader's soul. Readers let authors into their private moments by inviting the author to speak through their story. Although it's a challenging invitation, it's valuable and authors should accept. Clear thinking will deliver your words to their destination. Most places are far away, and require a long, long chair ride. Do not begrudge the hard work of getting it there, this generation needs the best books you can write. 

For his final point, Max reminds the writer to let every part of the process work. "Sentences are like just caught fish. Spunky today, stinky tomorrow." Let editing do its job. That way, you will put forth good, passionate writing, which will reach readers where they live.


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Conference Spotlight: Writers at the Beach, Delaware
Posted by Chuck

As you may know, I attend a lot of writers' conferences and like to promote the events I will be at. Today I am doing something special, and promoting one I will not be at. It's Writers at the Beach: Pure Seaglass, a writers' conference in Delaware. The reason: Proceeds of this event all go to charity.





DETAILS


Hosted by the Rehoboth Beach Writers’ Guild, a 501c(3) association, "Writers at the Beach: Pure Sea Glass" was founded in 2005 to raise money for, and awareness of, mitochondrial disease, a little known disease that affects as many as 1 in 2000 children.

Still, why a writers’ conference? Because unless this story gets told—and heard—the money for a cure will never be raised. Because we all have stories like this that need to get told for whatever reason. Writers at the Beach is about helping others to tell their stories.

WHO WILL BE THERE?

Flip Brophy and Douglas Stewart, two literary agents from Sterling Lord Literistic, a very cool NYC agency, will be taking pitches. A mix of published authors, some who have attended before and some new to the event, present workshops.

REASONS TO ATTEND

Overall, there are more than 30 workshops, a dozen panel discussions, and plenty of manuscript reviews! There is a keynote dinner at the Atlantic Sands instead (and the cost is included in your registration). There will be an open mic on Saturday following the reception.

100% of our net proceeds will be donated to Nemours/Alfred I. DuPont Hospital for Children to help defray medical costs of those being treated there for mitochondrial disease.

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# Friday, March 12, 2010
New Agent Alert: David Patterson of Foundry Literary + Media
Posted by Chuck

Reminder: Newer agents are golden opportunities for new writers because they're likely building their client list; however, always make sure your work is as perfect as it can be before submitting, and only query agencies that are a great fit for your work. Otherwise, you're just wasting time and postage.



About David:
Before joining Foundry Literary + Media, David has worked at PublicAffairs and Henry Holt and Company. Books that he published while at PublicAffairs and Henry Holt include Nate Blakeslee's J. Anthony Lukas award-winning Tulia: Race, Cocaine, and Corruption in a Small Texas Town, Thurston Clarke's bestselling The Last Campaign: Robert F. Kennedy and 82 Days that Inspired America, Peter Manseau's Rag and Bone: A Journey Among the World's Holy Dead, Ethan Brown's Shake the Devil Off: A True Story of the Murder that Rocked New Orleans, and Michael Schaffer's One Nation Under Dog: America's Love Affair with Our Dogs.

He is seeking:
David is looking especially for the most prominent and talented journalists, scholars, and personalities in a wide variety of fields, with either outstanding narratives and/or idea-driven works of nonfiction, which can be deeply serious or terrifically entertaining, and often combine those two qualities. David will also represent fiction when he feels strongly that the author has a distinctive voice that can break out of the pack.

How to submit: Please address your materials to one agent only and include the following materials in your submission. Fiction submissions should have a query, synopsis, first 3 chapters of the ms, and author bio. Nonfiction proposals should include the query, sample chapters, table of contents and author bio/platform. Mail queries to Foundry Literary + Media, (Agent name), Submissions, 33 West 17th Street, PH, New York, New York 10011. Please include a SASE if you would like your materials returned. E-mail queries to submissions[at]foundrymedia[dot]com.


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Reminder: Third ''Dear Lucky Agent'' Contest Ends Sunday!
Posted by Chuck

Note from Chuck: It's March 15, 2010, which means this contest
is now closed. Thank you for entering. Winners
should be announced within 7 days or so.
Meanwhile, our next contest should start
within a week or two, as well.  

------------------------------

The latest "Dear Lucky Agent" contest, for writers of paranormal romance and urban fantasy, is about to end at the end of Sunday, March 14—so get your submission in now! You can see all the rules here.



See the full page for rules, but the gist is that agent Joanna Stampfel-Volpe is judging this contest, and writers of paranormal romance and urban fantasy are invited to submit the first 150-200 words of their completed books. Top three stories = winner winner. The three finalists will be notified via e-mail within one week of the contest's end. Winners announced on the blog thereafter.


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# Thursday, March 11, 2010
7 Things I've Learned So Far, by Libby Gleeson
Posted by Chuck

This is a new recurring column I'm calling "7 Things I've Learned So Far," where writers at any stage of their career can talk about seven things they've learned along their writing journey that they wish they knew at the beginning. This installment is from prolific kids writer Libby Gleeson.


  

Two of Libby Gleeson's most recent
juvenile books are Mahtab's Story
and
Clancy & Millie and the Very Fine House


1. The publisher who accepts your first work is not necessarily beginning a lifelong affair.
You may decide the experience is not completely positive and decide to try some other publishing house. You may discover that your book doesn’t sell well and your publisher loses interest in you. Your publisher may be gobbled up by a bigger company that sacks your editor and wants to discard you along with the stock in the warehouse. Don’t take it too personally. It happens to all of us.

2. Publishing a book doesn’t mean the second one will come easily. It won’t. Each book brings its own problems which need unique solutions. There are times in your career where you may decide to change genre or to vary your style. To stay interested in writing, you need to grow and change and try new directions. Believe me, I’m currently struggling with number thirty five and I feel almost as vulnerable as I was with number one.

3. Don’t wait till your book is published until you start the next one. The lag between acceptance and publication is rarely less than twelve months—frequently more. You can waste a lot of time basking in the glow of anticipated publication.

4. Nothing comes easy. The brilliant idea you have had for a story now needs developing and crafting and laboring through many drafts before it will be ready for submission. And then there’s editing.

5. One publisher saying no doesn’t mean they all will. My first novel (Eleanor, Elizabeth, 1984) was rejected by the first publisher it was sent to. They listed five or six points they felt were flaws in the story and its structure. The next publisher who saw it accepted it and when told of the first publisher’s verdict said the points raised were the very strengths they liked about the book.

6. Don’t accept writer’s block. Writing becomes stalled for any one of a number of reasons. Maybe the idea just isn’t strong enough to sustain the kind of story you envisaged. Maybe you can see problems emerging in the story and you don’t want to deal with them. Maybe something else in your life is demanding your time and energy. Find solutions. In my case, a long solitary walk or a time spent reading really good writing often works. There is a power in good prose.

7. Join your professional association. Writing is a solitary pursuit and, at times, you have to deal with complex issues such as contracts, co-authorship and copyright law. You need assistance, and there are writers before your time who have banded together to help you sort out your relationship with your agent and your publisher. How else are you going to work out what exactly the Google Book Settlement means and how you should position yourself?




Kids writer Libby Gleeson lives in New
Zealand and has written more than thirty
books for children, including picture
books and kids novels.


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A Story of a Second Chance: How One Writer Fought to Have His Memoir Reissued
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Bertelsmann didn’t want to return my rights, even though my book, Heartbreaker, had lain dormant for over twenty years. Doubleday, the original publisher, had been swallowed by this German conglomerate, and of course they wanted to hang on to any book in their catalogue, even if it hadn’t sold a copy in years. But Oh, no no, they said, this book isn’t dormant; anyone who wants it can order it through print-on-demand. I finally had to enlist the help of a lawyer and then The Author’s Guild counsel, Kay Murray. Kay told Bertelsmann she would make my book, Heartbreaker, a test case of the issue for any author who wanted his/her rights back, and would pursue it all the way to the Supreme Court. (Go, Kay!) Threatened with this tough talk, Bertelsmann knuckled and sent a letter of release. Now I owned my book and was free to pursue a reissue.




This guest column by John Meyer,
author of Heartbreaker.



I spent a year querying agents. No one wanted it. But I knew I had something salable—a memoir of the time I tried to rescue Judy Garland from her demons, shortly before the end of her life. In 1968, I had been an idealistic young composer who met Garland to show her a song. Meeting her, I was entranced. Foolishly, I undertook to "save" her from her unhealthy lifestyle of pills and liquor. I thought I could succeed where everyone else had despaired. I was blinded with a Messianic fervor, and spent eight excruciating, emotionally draining weeks with her, acting as her manager, booker, escort, chauffeur, general factotum and boyfriend. I wore myself out with the effort and eventually fell, exhausted. But my obsession had granted me an up-close, detailed look at this amazing woman, with all her fascinating idiosyncrasies.

THE FIRST RELEASE

Finally, after years, I felt I’d gained enough objectivity to put down the story in a fashion the general reader would find palatable. In 1983, Lisa Drew, then an editor at Doubleday, snapped up the manuscript. Now, of course, the agents came flocking. It’s not hard to get an agent when you’ve already made the sale. (By the way, this is a good way to go; if you know an editor, you can place the book yourself—then have an agent negotiate terms. You don’t want to accept the publishing house’s first offer). In its initial release, the book sold eleven thousand copies. Not bad.

A SECOND LIFE

Now, in 2005, what made the book re-printable, I thought, was the CD that new technology now allowed to be bundled within the book, inside the back cover. It was a forty-minute rehearsal I’d taped with Judy around the piano, singing and telling stories, unself-conscious, impromptu. But even the promise of this rare window into the life of a legendary entertainer couldn’t convince the current crop of agents. Everyone was running scared—the publishing "climate" was getting more and more difficult to surmount. But I forced myself to remember: To Kill a Mockingbird went through fifty rejections.

After two years, discouraged, I was about to give up and go the self-publishing route. Ironically, this would have amounted virtually to Bertelsmann’s POD method.  But an acquaintance offered to introduce me to June Clark, an agent at Peter Rubie (Now FinePrint Literary). June took the book to an editor named Bob Shuman, who was thrilled at the possibility of grabbing the new Heartbreaker for Kensington. He went to bat for the book in an editorial meeting, and Kensington reissued the book in 2006. It came out in a glamorous new edition, with the inclusion not only of the CD, but an eight-page photo section with shots of Sid Luft, Kay Thompson, and ... my parents! So, whaddaya know –a story with a happy ending.




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# Wednesday, March 10, 2010
So You’ve Set Up a Writer Blog—Now What?
Posted by Chuck

If you read my previous guest post on how to set up a blog, you know how easy the tech stuff can be. Once you’ve found your perfect theme and written up your contact info, there’s just one thing left: the first entry. Faced with the paralyzing task of finding something relevant to say, many new bloggers ditch their blog before they even get started. But blogging isn’t as hard as it seems—you just have to get a feel for it.




Guest post by Peta Jinnath Andersen,
freelance writer & editor. See her website,
 *Insert Literary Blog Name Here*. She also
writes flash fiction and short fiction.


THE MISSION STATEMENT

Spend some time working out a sort of "mission statement." Think about why you want a blog, and the general focus (e.g. writing, rejections, book reviews, etc.) and scope. You don't have to stick to what you come up with, but it might help you get your head around the startup process.

Once you're feeling a bit more comfortable, write a little intro post/about page. Tell prospective readers about yourself. If it's easier, pretend you’re being interviewed by your best friend, and write it as a Q&A. Try and stay on topic. If you write animal-related fiction, talk about your dogs—or the time an alligator chased you at the zoo. Include a picture; readers like being able to put a face to the name, and are more likely to read your page if they can relate to you.

IDEAS, IDEAS, IDEAS!

Blogging is about more than writing—it's about reading. The most popular blogs are how-tos, or opinions and reactions to things the authors have read. For writers, there are a few places to get started—an article you read in PW, a post on the GLA blog, a review in The New Yorker, etc. Pick things that make you think, or that you find yourself talking about. One useful trick is to write your blog posts in a Word document (make sure you use the paste from Word tool if you do this) and treat them as articles or letters. Don’t go overboard—if your focus is too broad, you’ll have a hard time keeping readers interested. And remember, if you go the how-to route, make sure you research appropriately!

GETTING BUSY WITH THE BLOGOSPHERE

Bloggers like to talk, network, and generally get to know each other. Look for blog rings and blogfests (a quick Google search will get you started), take part in writing prompts and challenges on other blogs, and get involved in networks (try http://bookblogs.ning.com—book blogs on Ning).

Be honest in what you write, and write about things you're interested in or love. Post links to other pages you like; link posts are a great way to get to know other bloggers. Pull together your top five posts on any topic (top five descriptions of chocolate cake!), and write about why you love them and what the poster did well.

SCHEDULE IT!

Some people have no problem finding things to blog about—the rest of us need to plan ahead. Keep a file of post ideas (or even one file per idea)  and paste useful links into it, along with any thoughts. Outlining posts, complete with subtitles and bullet points, can help you get a better idea of what you're trying to say.

KEEP IT APPROPRIATE

There are no hard and fast rules about blogging, but it’s important to remember that whatever hits the Internet stays on the Internet. As long as you don't post anything inappropriate for your line of work—say, you work in a Kosher butcher's shop then blog about how much you love bacon—you can't really go wrong. It takes a while for blogs to find their feet, and that’s okay.

     Blogging is a great tool for promoting yourself. More importantly, though, it’s an excellent way to create connections and learn from other people. Now it's time to roll up your sleeves and get to work.





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# Tuesday, March 09, 2010
Agent Advice: Kate Epstein of The Epstein Literary Agency
Posted by Chuck

Agent Advice is a series of quick interviews with literary and script agents who talk with Guide to Literary Agents about their thoughts on writing, publishing, and just about anything else.

This installment features Kate Epstein of The Epstein Literary Agency.
Kate founded her agency in 2005, after four years' acquisitions experience at Adams Media. Kate Epstein holds a B.A. with Highest Honors in English from the University of Michigan. She lives with her husband and two children outside Boston. 

She is seeking: The only fiction she accepts is YA. On the nonfiction side, she likes
Crafts, Fashion, Health, Humor, Inspiration. Journalism, Lifestyles, Memoir. Nonfiction Narrative, Parenting, Pets, Popular Culture, Reference, Relationships, Self-Help, Travel, and Women's Interest





GLA: How did you become an agent?

KE: The short answer is that I quit my editor job, paid my town $20 for a business certificate, and hung out my shingle. My background as an editor was invaluable; I also took a number of agents out to lunch or drinks, in exchange for which they let me pick their brains. These days I still find it helpful to solicit advice, at times, and I’m always open with my own. (Even agents more experienced than me seem to find me useful at times.)
 
GLA: What's something coming out right about now that you're excited about?

KE: Jeffery Guidry’s memoir, An Eagle Named Freedom, releases in May from William Morrow. It’s a moving story of a man who volunteers in wildlife rescue and his relationship with a very special bird. 

GLA: You used to be an editor. How does your background play into your skills and style of agenting?

KE: I find it immensely useful to know where an editor is coming from when issues arise. Editors are, for authors, the face of their publisher, and sometimes have to present decisions that were not made by them unilaterally. While at times it’s my job to be a bad cop so my clients can protect their relationships with their editors, I keep in mind that there are always people involved.
     I’m extremely good at the ventriloquism and sympathy involved in editing a manuscript, and I delight in such work. I love to seek ways to make a book more what its author dreamed it could be.
 
GLA: Your history is specializing in nonfiction, and I see a lot of pet- and animal-related books you've sold. Are you still looking for books in this area?

KE: Absolutely I am. Nonfiction for adults was my exclusive focus for a several years and now I’ve added YA fiction and nonfiction. Nonfiction continues to stand out among submissions because so much of what I’m getting now is fiction. When it comes to pet books, I know a good deal about what I can sell and a good, credentialed author in that area is especially welcome, because I do bring so much expertise to that area. Doing your homework and making it show in your query that you’ve read my website is still the best thing you can add to a great query to make me pay attention.

GLA: You probably see more book proposals than most anybody. Can you give writers three tips on improving their proposals?

KE: The most important thing to remember is that it is a sales piece. It should be professional—but also dynamic. It’s great to dot your i’s and make sure all the pieces are there, but you need to transmit a level of excitement about your project.
     A really common problem is a weak marketing plan. I do understand the challenges people face in this area. I believe that even if your efforts are unlikely to directly generate more than a few hundred sales, that you should still describe what you are going to do personally to push your book. An ambitious, even creative, plan for what you will bring to the effort tells a publisher that you will be an eager partner, and that any resources they do provide you will not be ill-spent.






GLA
:
What are some bite-sized helpful tips writers can take home concerning how to boost their platform?

KE: I think the most important thing is to understand your audience. Know them well. The trap of platform-building—apart I suppose from simple burnout—is that talking can preclude listening. Talk (I mean that broadly—if it’s online it’s typing, of course) about who you are and what you have to offer, but at the same time, listen (or read) and learn.
 
GLA: Concerning the slush, besides "good writing" and "voice," what are you looking for and not getting? What do you wish there was more of in the slush pile? 

KE: Practical nonfiction by credentialed authors is certainly the smallest stack in my pile, and I’d love to see more of that. I’ve placed a couple of craft books recently, and more of that is welcome. Uncredentialed authors that want to write practical nonfiction should, as a rule, team with someone more credentialed. If I were more on top of my slush pile right now, I could better answer this question, but thus far I’m getting the strong impression that a lot of YA authors have embraced hackneyed ideas about high school and social strata. Plot and character are to me the two most important things; I think most people that attempt YA realize how vital plot is, but to me character is just as important.
     I can truthfully say that I’m open to all kinds of topics in YA.
     When it comes to memoir, I’m always curious about peculiar jobs or unusual experiences, and I tend to see a lot more books about family life, which aren’t necessarily as interesting to me.


GLA: Recently you made an announcement about taking on your first fiction submissions—with young adult. What draws you to young adult?  

KE: I really thought for many years that I had lost much of the ability to gobble a book like a delicious meal, to be so absorbed in it that the real world looks pale. I thought perhaps that was a childish thing. When I started reading YA again, I realized that it is a function of the books themselves. Good YA draws in a reader and doesn’t let go, but it doesn’t stint on plausibility or fullness of character.
     I fear to comment on my favorite subgenres because it’s so hard to say how I’ll feel about a book without looking at it, and there isn’t wide agreement about what defines certain genres. (For example, by my lights The Hunger Games, which I adore, is obviously science fiction. But not everyone seems to agree.) When a novel has speculative elements—fantasy, sci-fi, paranormal—I tend to like it most when it reflects in some way on the world we live in. This has not generally been a norm of fantasy (Tolkien told the truth when he said he didn’t write allegory), but it can certainly appear. 

GLA: You also said you'd take on YA nonfiction. Do writers still need to submit a proposal?
 
KE: Absolutely publishers will expect a proposal for YA nonfiction. I’m pretty open in this area. It’s probably pretty narrow, though, since young adults read nonfiction for adults as well. 

GLA: Best way for writers to contact you? 

KE: E-mail, definitely, kate[at]epsteinliterary[dot]com. I have a rule set up so that if you’re not in my address book and your email has “query” in the regarding line, it’ll get sorted correctly. My guidelines are on my website; I’ve recently started asking for the first three pages for all memoir and fiction submissions.
     The only reason I have not simply closed the door to paper submissions is because I am committed to the first amendment rights of prisoners, and prisoners generally can’t e-mail. Everyone else should be able to, is my point of view.

GLA: Something personal about you writers may be surprised to know?

KE: My undergraduate thesis was about Emily Dickinson. It was called “Visiting with Emily Dickinson” and it was about how poets have responded to her in prose and poetry. That feels like a long time ago; but I do still mark December 10 as her birthday.

GLA: Best piece(s) of advice we haven't discussed?

KE: Read, for gosh sakes, read! Read books!
     I also think that if you’re getting ready to pitch agents, it might be worth your while to read Publishers Marketplace for a month for $20. The deal announcements are mostly mini-versions of agents’ pitches to publishers (notwithstanding editors can post deals as well, I think it’s mostly agents that do it), and they give you a very up to date version of what’s selling and how. You can also see what agents are placing books like yours—though don’t assume Publishers Marketplace is always complete.
    


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# Monday, March 08, 2010
How I Got My Agent: C.J. Omololu
Posted by Chuck

"How I Got My Agent" is a recurring feature on the GLA blog. I find it fascinating to see the exact road people took that landed them with a rep. Seeing the things people did right vs. what they did wrong (highs and the lows) can help other scribes who are on the same journey. Some tales are of long roads and many setbacks, while others are of good luck and quick signings.

To see
the previous installments of this column, click here.

If you have a literary agent and would be interested in writing a short guest column for this GLA blog, e-mail me at literaryagent@fwmedia.com and we'll talk specifics.







OFF TO KANSAS CITY

You’ve probably heard the story of the aspiring writer who cornered the unsuspecting agent in a conference bathroom and passed her manuscript under the door of the stall. Arguably the most celebrated moment in the history of how-not-to-get-an-agent. You should also not pass your manuscript to an agent in an elevator, in the buffet line or during their keynote speech. But is all casual contact taboo? Is there a way to use a chance meeting to your advantage? Sure, as long as you do it right.

I met my agent, Erin Murphy, in an elevator. I was in the process of writing my first novel and was starting to research agents (in hindsight, I recommend actually finishing your book first).  Erin was at the top of my list and I heard she was speaking at a weekend conference in Kansas City.  Although I live in Northern California, I needed a weekend away and had enough frequent flyer miles, so although I really didn’t know anyone in Kansas City, I went. 

THE ELEVATOR PITCH

I saw Erin speak at the conference that first day and it only cemented the fact that I wanted to work with her. She’s editorial, knowledgeable about the business, has great contacts and a fantastic client list. All good. But I had nothing to show her and no reason to talk to her, so I spent the whole day in seminars and talking to other writers. I figured that I’d just take my experience home with me, finish the book and query her when I was ready. And then I got my chance.

Early on the last morning, I was riding the elevator down to the hotel lobby when Erin stepped aboard on her way to speak at a seminar. My mind was racing as the floors flashed by—this was my big chance! What the heck do I do with it? I started with the brilliant “Good morning.” She smiled and said "Good morning" back. She yawned and said that she was tired and I mentioned that I’d stayed up late, too, talking to some of the other conference attendees. Then I glanced at her and said, “Luckily, I just have to sit there and listen. Unfortunately, you have to go and be brilliant again.”  That broke the ice and she laughed. Erin glanced down at my outfit and admired the trouser jeans I’d bought special for the trip. I told her where to get them, we chatted for a few seconds and that was it. The elevator reached the lobby and we went our separate ways. My palms were sweaty as I replayed the conversation in my head, knowing that there was so much more I could have done to make a better impression. At least I hadn’t blown it ... had I?

"REMEMBER ME?"

Fast forward a few months, and my manuscript was polished and ready.   I’d read everything I could about query letters, and decided to take a chance with mine. I opened with, “Dear Erin, We met briefly at the Missouri Writer’s Guild conference—I am the tall gal with the striped hair and the fabulous not-jeans from J.Jill. I know that you are not accepting unsolicited submissions and I know that you are not looking for any new clients. I also know that I want you to be my agent.” After a short wait that I spent holding my breath, Erin e-mailed that she did indeed remember me and invited me to send her my manuscript. I’m pleased to say that my novel Dirty Little Secrets came out from Walker books on February 2 and I look forward to a long and prosperous partnership with Erin.

If you find yourself in an elevator with your dream agent, resist the urge to slip them your manuscript. Instead, engage in some casual conversation. Mention something they said or someone they represent that you really like. Compliment them on a necklace you admire. Treat them like real people and you never know what might happen. If you happen to meet your dream agent in the conference bathroom however, I strongly suggest you leave her be. 



Cynthia Jaynes Omololu is the author of
Dirty Little Secrets (2010) as well as
When It's Six O'Clock in San Francisco.
See her website here and her blog here.
She lives in Northern California.

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Live Near Lexington, KY? Come See Me Speak on March 20!
Posted by Chuck

On Saturday, March 20, I will be presenting at the Carnegie Center for Literacy & Learning in Lexington, KY—giving a two-hour speech on "Everything You Need to Know About Getting an Agent." Come out and see me! This is my first dealings with the Carnegie but it seems like they have year-round cool programs for writers. See their website here. To register for the event, call the main number (859) 254-4175.





In this speech, I
will address all things agent, and show writers how to snag a rep without fear of being scammed. We’ll discuss book proposals, novel synopses, query letters, pitching, how to find an agent, and everything else. Questions welcomed and encouraged!

The whole thing goes down from 10 a.m. to noon, Saturday, March 20, at the center, 251 West Second St., Lexington, KY. Phone: (859) 254-4175. Validated parking for the Carnegie Center is now available at a new location: Validated parking for the Carnegie Center is available at the Featherstone Garage on Upper Street between Second and Church streets.



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# Sunday, March 07, 2010
Successful Queries: Agent Sharlene Martin and 'You'll Never Nanny in This Town Again'
Posted by Chuck

This new series is called "Successful Queries" and I'm posting actual query letters that succeeded in getting writers signed with agents.  In addition to posting the actual query letter, we will also get to hear thoughts from the agent as to why the letter worked. 

The 28th installment in this series is with agent Sharlene Martin (Martin Literary Management) and her author, Suzanne Hansen, for the book, You'll Never Nanny in This Town Again: The True Adventures of a Hollywood Nanny.

This query is from Sharlene's awesome new work, Publish Your Nonfiction Book (Nov. 2009). If you're looking to sell a book proposal, this book is a must-buy.



Dear Ms. Martin:

When I was 18 years old, I moved from my hometown in Oregon (population: 7,500) to live with the most powerful man in Hollywood and be a nanny to his three children.

In my memoir: You’ll Never Nanny in this Town Again: The True Adventures of a Hollywood Nanny, I describe my unusual experiences with the rich and famous, and provide a peek into their private lives. I also share humorous stories about my girlfriends who were working for celebrity families. The book describes my short education at the Northwest Nannies Institute in Portland, Ore. It also describes my journey as a 24-hour-a-day modern servant, juggling medical emergencies, as well as toddler and adult tantrums.

This book is a cross between People magazine and “Seinfeld.” One example of the bizarre priorities of the wealthy: The family had a small painting in their family room that cost five times as much as my parents’ home, but I was told not to take anything from the hotel honor bar on vacation, because it was too expensive.

I self-published the book last year and was selected for a distribution contract through the IPG small publishers program. I’ve consistently ranked in the top five percent of Amazon.com sales. I’ve already sold more than 4,000 copies in 12 months and have garnered great reviews. I also have a popular website: hollywoodnanny.com. Some of the media attention I have received includes an E! Channel “Will Work for Stars” red carpet interview for the Screen Actors Guild awards. I’m featured on an upcoming A&E special “Fathers and Sons in Hollywood.” I’ve been interviewed on many radio programs, and I speak nationally.

So now I’m ready to go mainstream with a major publisher. Apart from writing this book, I’m a mother of two, and have worked as a high-risk labor and delivery nurse, lactation specialist and childbirth educator. I can send you a copy of the book by e-mail or regular mail, and hope to hear from you to discuss this further.

Suzanne Hansen


Commentary from Sharlene:

The instant appeal of a nanny who worked for a major Hollywood player is obvious. And paragraphs two and three make a clear description of the work, so that when the “spoiler” comes in paragraph four—telling of the book’s self-publishing past (a usual deal killer)—she builds upon momentum she has already established, pointing out that her self-published book enjoyed real success in online sales and through word of mouth.

After Suzanne sent me this letter, the supposedly “impossible” happened: Her previously self-published book sold to Crown Books/Random House for a six-figure advance in auction, and quickly went into multiple printings. It became a New York Times and Los Angeles Times bestseller.


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Agent Rachelle Gardner's Teaching a Webinar!
Posted by Chuck

Exciting news. Literary agent Rachelle Gardner (well known for her super-awesome and popular publishing blog) will be teaching an online webinar on Thursday, March 11, on "How Do Agents and Editors Decide?" It's a 90-minute online class guaranteed to be an info-filled bonanza of advice and tips for both fiction and nonfiction writers.





ABOUT RACHELLE:


Let's cut right to the chase: Rachelle knows her stuff. Her publishing blog has been on the Writer's Digest 101 Best Sites every single year that her site's been in existence. If memory serves, she mentioned that about 450,000 people visited her site last year to learn from her. What does it all mean? Rachelle knows how to communicate ideas and tips that writers can take away.

She is an agent with Wordserve Literary Group.
She's looking at all genres of adult fiction except fantasy, sci-fi, and erotica, and prefers stories with strong characters and page-turning plots. Currently her favorite genres are contemporary women's fiction, historical romance, and romantic suspense. In nonfiction, she's looking for authors with strong messages (for either a Christian audience or the general market) and significant marketing platforms.

ABOUT THE WEBINAR:

Why do some projects get picked out of the pile by agents and editors while most do not? It's because great books that catch the eyes of the pros are a combination of an excellent idea, excellent writing, and, in some cases, an excellent platform.

In this webinar, writers will learn:
  • How to capture your book in a compelling hook that will draw the attention of agents and editors.
  • How to determine if your rejections are less about your project and more about the marketplace.
  • What is meant by the "competitive advantage" and how to know if you have it.
  • How to make your writing shine—taking an idea and fleshing it out with voice, narrative, point-of-view, and structure.
  • How to develop an attractive writer platform—connecting with other writers and individuals while making yourself a visible authority on a subject.
  • How agents and editors quickly look over a project and decide if it has the necessary elements to make them request more.
  • How to get your book published!
ASK QUESTIONS!
 
One of the best parts about webinars is that you get to interact and ask questions to the presenter. Rachelle will address writer questions in real time. If she can't get around to all questions during the seminar, she'll address them afterward and e-mail you the answers! No question goes unanswered, so sign up for "How Do Agents and Editors Decide?" today!


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# Saturday, March 06, 2010
Cover Band Soap Opera: Types of People at Shows, Vol. 2
Posted by Chuck

Looking through all the pictures of my cover band shows, you start to see the same things over and over again. In other words, a lot of people who come to our shows fall under a certain grouping, and these posts will help show you some of the characters we see over and over again. Here is Volume 2 (see Volume 1 here). Note: These are all real photos from my cover band shows. (I even know some of these people.)

4. THE CREEPY STARING GUY

Creepy Staring Guy (homo sapien crisis midlifis) is a harmless nuisance, but an unnerving one nonetheless. He oftens stands awkwardly close to the band, usually staring at the guitarist or bassist, sometimes without blinking for long periods of time. He's either a musician, examining the band's skill at close range, or just a very strange guy.




5. STAGE GIRLS

When that fourth drink has kicked in, these are girls who want to one thing: Dance! And dance they will. When one decides to cross the audience-band border, the floodgates are open, and more follow. Never mind the smiles and friendly demeanor of Stage Girls (homo sapien dancus babus); the truth is: They're very dangerous. Stage Girls result in the most amount of accidents per capita for cover bands worldwide. They spill drinks on surge protectors; they bump your mic; they try to play the instruments. It's all very crazy.

 


6. THE UNINVITED SINGER DUDE

Who cares that he wasn't invited onstage? This man is so sure of himself that he's coming up anyway. Drink in hand, he's a wild dude (homo sapien drunkus annoyus). There's no rhyme or reason as to when he'll suddenly grab the lead singer's mic and belt out a lyric. It's all random (fun!) and he likes it that way. Sure, you can ask him to leave the stage, but he'll be back, and he'll be drunker next time.


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# Friday, March 05, 2010
7 Things I've Learned So Far, by F. Gerard Jefferson
Posted by Chuck

This is a new recurring column I'm calling "7 Things I've Learned So Far," where writers at any stage of their career can talk about seven things they've learned along their writing journey that they wish they knew at the beginning. This installment is from nonfiction writer F. Gerard Jefferson, who edits The Weekly Vista blog


1. It’s not me; it’s the revision. (Or sometimes, it’s the shoes.) Yeah, you’ve heard about this revision thing before, and you’ve probably also heard that anyone—yes, even you!—can become a better writer. But I don’t necessarily agree with this world view. Here’s what I think. I think I’m the same writer I was seven years ago. I’m a better writer not because of anything I’ve written, but because of everything I’ve erased. You can become a better writer, too, but it’ll take some time, maybe even years, to become a better self-editor. The good thing about it is, as a wannabe writer, time is on your side.

2. That egg you see? It’s yours, and it’s all over your face. You’re going to make mistakes. Know that from the beginning. In your manuscript. In your formal requests for a prom date. In response to all the “Ewww!  I’m not going with you!” rejections you’re going to get. Some mistakes will be minor. Others might get you reported to your Internet service provider, or ridiculed on the blog of some famously anonymous literary agent/editor. But it’s okay. You can survive. Take that egg and whip yourself up an omelet, and while you’re at it, fix me some, too. Hunger is the perfect equalizer for embarrassment.   

3. Continuing with the prom theme, while you’re at home working on your moves, don’t forget the writer’s anthem: Back that thang up!  I’ll be the first to admit it: Redundant, as a word, sounds suspiciously close to dunce. But how do you think I felt when my Quantex computer died in 2004 and I didn’t have redundant copies of all my work? Now I’m somewhat of a Napoleon about backup systems with three tiers of tyrannical protection, but I sleep easy at night. Or, at least, I try to. 

4. Writing your book is just the beginning. I remember when I finished my first novel a few years ago. I thought the majority of the work was done. If I could go back in time, I’d slap myself. Hard.

5. Short stories are harder to write than novels. If you’ve been paying attention, you know airplane pilots have been all over the news lately, not for well they take-off, but how well they land. As a writer, your job is to land that big, hulking idea you’ve got, and make sure as few people as possible get injured in the process, or that your name doesn’t get associated with negligence. As one pilot to another: Just know it’s easier to do this when there’s a lot of runway to play with. 

6. However long you think it’s going to take, add five years. There are two things in life you never do: Never ask a woman her age; and never ask a writer how long they’ve been unpublished. If you decide to break this rule, and the woman/writer asks you to guess, always underestimate.

7. Temper your expectations. It’s okay to dream, but that deadline for finding a perfect New York agent that I’m sure you have? In my humble opinion, you should throw it out the window.


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New Agent Alert: Don Fehr of Trident Media Group
Posted by Chuck

Reminder: Newer agents are golden opportunities for new writers because they're likely building their client list; however, always make sure your work is as perfect as it can be before submitting, and only query agencies that are a great fit for your work. Otherwise, you're just wasting time and postage.





About Don
:
He comes to Trident as a 20-year publishing veteran in editorial and various executive level publishing positions. He has held senior level editorial jobs at Atheneum, Addison-Wesley, Viking Penguin, Basic Books, and was the Publisher of Smithsonian Books/HarperCollins. Don had published over a dozen New York Times Bestsellers and his authors and books have won numerous awards, including the Pulitzer Prize, the National Book Award, the National Book Critics Circle Award, the P.E.N. Faulkner Award, and The L.A. Times Book Award among others. He holds degrees from Gordon College and Harvard University.

He is seeking:
new literary and commercial novelists, narrative nonfiction, memoirs, biography, travel, as well as science/medical/health related titles.  And since he reads alongside is ten-year-old daughter, he has also developed an interest in young adult authors.

How to submit:
dfehr[at]tridentmediagroup[dot]com. Query first. Please send mss or proposals only upon request.




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Demystifying Contracts: What Every Writer Should Know
Posted by Chuck

At the SCBWI 2010 Winter Conference, agent Edward Necarsulmer IV (of McIntosh & Otis) gave a presentation called "The Real Deal about Contracts." At McIntosh & Otis, Necarsulmer handles his clients’ contracts with publishers. Other agencies have contracts departments. Either way, both agents and authors should understand the ins and outs of contracts and the process of negotiating rights with a publisher.




Donna Gambale blogs at the First Novels
Club and is the author of a mini kit,
Magnetic Kama Sutra. She’s currently
revising her young adult novel, Multiple Choice.


WHAT'S A CONTRACT?

At its most simple definition, a contract is a legal document saying what the publisher is going to say or do, and what you, the author, are going to say or do. It should be fair and clear on both ends.

Oftentimes, a publishing house will offer a basic contract to an author, and it’s the agent’s job to negotiate better (and more specific) terms. The agent explains everything to the author and discusses his/her options before continuing negotiations. With each revision, the agent goes through the contract with line-by-line vigilance, making sure the author has what he/she needs and what the publisher promised.

HOW MONEY WORKS

The most obvious part of a contract involves negotiating author advances and royalties. Of course! Check out this post for complete details.

PRIMARY RIGHTS

Primary rights include the original edition of the book and paperback reprint rights, but they may also cover foreign territories/translation rights. The standard grant of rights is for the publisher to print/publish/sell/distribute your book in the English language. Your agent would probably want to retain foreign rights, but that depends on a cost/benefit analysis. Meaning, is it worthwhile to attempt to sell your book to foreign markets?

SUBSIDIARY RIGHTS 
 
Here's a post breaking down subsidiary rights. Necarsulmer believes that it’s preferable for the agency to retain as many subsidiary rights as possible in-house because then the writer only has to give 15-20% of earnings to the agent instead of also splitting 50% with the publisher.

These rights include the following:

     •  Audio rights. Generally an agent also tries to retain these, but it depends on the earning potential for the author of the agency shopping the book versus the publisher.
     •  Film/TV/dramatic rights. Should be retained in-house. These rights are important because of the possibilities to help boost the sales of your book.
     •  Graphic novel rights. These should be negotiated as something entirely separate from your novel.
     •  Commercial/merchandising rights. It’s also best for your agent to retain these rights. These include plush toys for picture books, Edward Cullen dolls, etc.
     •  Electronic rights. Because this is ever-changing, Necarsulmer includes a clause to renegotiate the terms of electronic rights in one to three years, to keep it labeled as an ongoing discussion. Plus, he ensures that, as much as possible, he and his clients have the opportunity to approve electronic rights decisions before they’re made.

Other elements of a contract Necarsulmer mentioned include the following:

     • Publication timeframe. There’s also frequently a clause that a publisher must publish your book within a certain timeframe. With picture books, this can be slightly different because authors and illustrators have to be coordinated.
     • Author copies. Lists the number of free copies an author receives, plus discounted pricing for additional copies.
     • Warranty and indemnity clause. This covers the author under the publisher’s insurance (for libel, lawsuits, etc). Another clause under this includes bankruptcy—what happens if the publisher goes out of business?
     • The agency clause. This outlines the author’s and publisher’s relationship with the agent. For example, noting that all sums of money due goes through the agency (the author benefits when the agency’s accounting department double checks payments), or listing what percent of earnings goes to the agent. This clause possibly requires payment to the author from the agency within a certain number of days.

Necarsulmer’s presentation emphasized how an agent is a valuable ally who looks out for the author’s best interests during complex contract negotiations. A skilled agent keeps contracts from becoming intimidating so that the author can focus on what’s really important—writing.

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Agent Advice: Tamar Rydzinski of Laura Dail Literary Agency
Posted by Chuck

Agent Advice is a series of quick interviews with literary and script agents who talk with Guide to Literary Agents about their thoughts on writing, publishing, and just about anything else.

This installment features Tamar Rydzinski of The Laura Dail Literary Agency

She is seeking: Tamar is not interested in prescriptive/practical nonfiction, humor, coffee table books or children’s books (meaning anything younger than middle grade). She is interested in everything else, providing it is well-written and has great characters.



GLA: How did you become an agent?

TR: In college, I didn't know what to do with myself one summer and a friend of my mother, who happens to be an author, said, "I think you would love being an agent."  She got me an internship with her agency and she was right, I loved it!  So in a way, agenting fell in my lap and I am eternally grateful for it.

GLA: What’s the most recent thing you’ve sold? What’s something you represented that recently came out?

TR: The most recent thing I sold is called Blood on the Moon and it's a paranormal YA series about a college freshman who learns the true meaning of sacrifice and the dangers of falling in love, especially when werewolves and vampires are involved.  
      
A couple of books of mine that have recently come out are Shadow Magic by Jaida Jones and Danielle Bennett, the second book in a wonderful fantasy series and The Secret Diaries of Charlotte Bronte by Syrie James, which fictionalizes the love story between Charlotte Bronte and the man who eventually became her husband.

GLA: One of your favorite categories is women’s fiction. What draws you to this category? Why the love?

TR: I love women's fiction because I'm a sucker for relationships of all types--romantic relationships, friendships, relationships with your surroundings; I love when the setting takes on a life of its own and becomes a character in its own right. And I think that often, women's fiction does that best.

GLA: How can writers make their submission break out of the pack?

TR: In general, the way to make a submission stand out is to do your research--if you mention that you read such and such book represented by our agency and your book is reminiscent of it, then I am more likely to take notice. And, of course, writing is key. Query letters are hard, but they are the first thing I see so take your time, days if necessary, and make sure that it is well written and there are no typos.

GLA: You look for kids writing. Can you be more specific about what you do and do not want to see?

TR: I look for middle-grade and above, so no picture books and no chapter books.  I do love fantasy of all types, though I think there is a lot of room for realistic books as well. And I am a big fan of dystopian, though I generally don't like apocalyptic fiction. And series are generally more intriguing than stand-alones, though I definitely have stand-alones, too. I know this doesn't truly narrow it down too much, but that's because I love almost everything!

"Shadow Magic" is a book Tamar repped


GLA
: On the subject of young adult fantasy, this is a category I don’t read too much. Can you help me (and other readers) understand some of the basic subgenres of the category?  For example, what classifies something as “high fantasy”? Etc.

TR: Well, the way I classify them (which isn't scientific and not necessarily even correct) is that in high fantasy, an entire world is created; it doesn't take place on what we recognize as the world as we currently know it.  It usually has magic or magical creatures of some sort, though there are some exceptions.
      
Low fantasy takes place in what is recognizably our world, but has traditional magical creatures.
      
Paranormal fantasy also takes place in what is recognizably our world and has vampires, werewolves, zombies, ghosts, etc.  Characters that are human, or were once human, but have evolved into something else.

GLA: You take a lot of nonfiction subjects. Is it as simple as “Give me a good idea and a good platform and we’re golden”?

TR: It is! Platform is key, though our agency has had success with Skinny Bitch, where the authors had no platform! So if your voice or idea is incredible, then there are ways to get around the platform issue.

GLA: What’s the best way for writers to contact/submit to you?

TR: I prefer e-mail queries: queries[at]ldlainc.com. The guidelines for submission are on our website. Of course, I accept hard copies of queries as well.

GLA: What’s something personal about you writers may be surprised to know?

TR: One thing about me that people in general are surprised to know is that I actually grew up right here in Manhattan, where I live to this day.

GLA: Best piece(s) of advice we haven’t discussed?

TR: Make as many connections as you can in as many different places as you can.  If an author was referred to me by another client, or someone I know, their query and material go to the top of the pile. And once your book is sold, it's helpful to know lots of people to help get the word out there.


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# Wednesday, March 03, 2010
Footnotes: 5 Articles on Writing Picture Books
Posted by Chuck

"You have to write whichever book it
is that wants to be written." ~ Madeleine L'Engle

Footnotes is a recurring series on the GLA blog where I pick a subject and provide several interesting articles on said topic. This week, I’m serving up five articles on writing picture books.




1. Ten Myths about writing for kids. Do you know what they are? Check out the list on the Hogwarts Professor blog.

2. Picturebooks vs. Novels. Agent Michael Stearns discusses the uniqueness of representing picture books versus other genres.

3. Saying a lot with a little. Thus is the fine art of writing a picture book.

4. Three times a charm. Author Pam Calvert discusses the Law of Three and other tips for writing humorous picture books on her blog Woven with Pixie Dust.
 

5. Writing a picture book? Check out these 20 Do’s and Don’ts from Author Mem Fox.

This guest series by writer
Nancy Parish, who runs her
blog, The Sound and Furry.


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# Tuesday, March 02, 2010
Get Agents to Like Your Characters and Keep Reading
Posted by Chuck

If you've been reading my blog for a while, you know that one of my favorite books on writing is Save the Cat (and it's not even a WD book, so you know I'm telling the truth). Save the Cat is a modern-day look at structure and story, written by screenwriter Blake Snyder, a wonderful man who passed away recently at the much-too-young age of 52.



So why is the book called Save the Cat? One of Snyder's most basic points is that we (readers) must like the character we're following. If we see the protagonist do something kind or admirable in the first few minutes/pages, then we will like him. And if we like him, we follow his story and root for him to succeed in getting what he wants.

I recently read some pages from a novel-in-progress. I had some typical notes: "This is good ... this doesn't work ... cut, cut, cut." But the big point was that the protagonist was unlikable. When we first meet the main character, they seem annoyed, and in the middle of a frustrating relationship. We cannot be introduced to characters like this, because why would we keep following a character that is constantly agitated and generally unhappy? We need to root for them, and that's what the Save the Cat moment is all about. So let's look at some movies and identify early Save the Cat moments.

Miss Congeniality

Sandra Bullock is on a sting to catch a mobster. When agents ID themselves and hold the mobster at gunpoint, he starts to choke. But is he really choking, or is it a ruse? It's not clear. None of the male agents move, but Sandra scurries in to help the choking man. She cares; she has compassion. That's a perfect Save the Cat moment. 

The Hangover

This movie is essentially about three guys trying to find a fourth guy who's lost just before his wedding day. So which one of the three is the main character? The answer: None. The main character is actually Doug, the groom-to-be who's lost. The Save the Cat moment is very early when he invites his new wacky stepbrother, Alan, to Vegas, even though he doesn't have to. This makes us like Doug. And if we like him, then we root for him to succeed. To succeed means to get married. To do that, we root for his friends to find him in time for his wedding. Save the Cat.






Nottingham


A few years ago, a screenwriter re-envisioned the Robin Hood legend as told from the Sheriff of Nottingham's point of view. In this (unproduced) screenplay, the story begins with a battle. Meanwhile, underground, an Army Leader (actually the sheriff: our protagonist) is leading troops through tunnels for some kind of surprise attack. He stops for a moment to address his men, only to see that instead of looking at him, they're all staring at something else. It's the bucket of water he's holding. It's clear that they're parched. He takes off his own helmet and pours some water in it, instructing them to pass the helmet around and take one sip a piece. The whole thing takes about 7 seconds, and it makes us like this man. Save the Cat.

Sea of Love

I've never seen this movie, but this is the film where Blake Snyder identifies a perfect Save the Cat moment. At the beginning, Al Pacino, a cop, is arresting New York criminals who arrive at a location thinking they're going to meet some Yankees. When Pacino sees that the next approaching criminal has his young son in tow, Pacino makes himself visible, showing his badge. The criminal sees this, and tells his son that there's been a change of plans, walking away. Pacino says "... Catch you later." This is great. It shows Pacino is a tough cop but willing to give this criminal a break because of the kid, but the criminal is not off the hook. Save the Cat.

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7 Things I've Learned So Far, by Colette Martin
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This is a new recurring column I'm calling "7 Things I've Learned So Far," where writers at any stage of their career can talk about seven things they've learned along their writing journey that they wish they knew at the beginning. This installment is from nonfiction writer Colette Martin.




Following a career as a marketing executive,
Colette Martin is embarking on a second act
as a nonfiction writer. She writes about food
allergy solutions, corporate culture, working
women’s issues, blogging and social media. She
is the author of the When Fridays Were Fridays blog ,
where
she shares her views on life in Corporate America.



During my tenure in Corporate America, I was responsible for developing and marketing products and services. On the surface this may sound very different than the career I am now pursuing as a writer, but I am still developing and marketing a "product," and I am finding that many lessons I learned in Corporate America do indeed carry over into the writing and publishing world. Seven key things I learned are:

1. It’s not personal, it’s business. We hear a lot about employees in Corporate America who are unsatisfied with their performance ratings, or who didn’t get a raise or promotion. In the writing business, we hear a lot about rejection—writers who can’t get the book deal, and fear of agents and publishers. At a recent pitch slam I could feel the tension as the writers lined up to talk to the agents. But guess what? The agents were pleasant, easy to talk to, and just plain nice. They don’t want to reject your work any more than a manager wants to tell an employee they need to do a better job. There was no yelling and throwing of books. The truth is (are you ready to hear this?) not everyone can rise to the top. Just like bosses in Corporate America who need to hire the best talent for the job, agents and publishers look for the best product they can find so they can optimize their success.

2. It helps if you follow the rules. Let’s face it. Nobody wants to work with difficult people. There is always the exception of the employee who is so brilliant that management looks the other way, and if you are the next James Patterson then more power to you. For everyone else, just play nice. If an agent asks for a particular process or format, give it to them.

3. There is always something new to learn. The world changes fast. Technology changes. And yet it’s too easy to get stuck in the same old rut. The quickest way to rejuvenate your thinking and your work is to attend a conference, take a class, or just step out of your comfort zone and explore something new.

4. Keep your competition close. Uh-oh! Someone used your idea—they beat you to it! Or did they? As a product marketing manager, keeping a pulse on what the competition was doing was critical. But being first isn’t usually what counts, being better is. Watch what others are doing—closely—and do it better.

5. If someone else is succeeding at it, there is a market. Just because there are a handful of books already published on your topic doesn’t mean the market is saturated. If those books are selling well, that’s a sign that there is a market for what you have to offer. Use that as leverage to demonstrate you have an audience.

6. Everyone sees things differently depending on where they sit. There’s a term we use in the marketing world called the "value chain," which describes who the stakeholders are, what they get out of the deal, and how they make money. Let’s take the publishing process, for example. The writer, the agent, the publisher, the distributor, the bookseller—each see the process very differently based on what they get out of it. Get inside their heads. Understanding how each of these players views the world is a huge advantage for the person producing the product (in this case that’s you
the writer). And here’s a hint—they each care most about how they are measured and rewarded.

7. There is no one right path to success. I admit it. I’m an information junkie. So as I set out on this new path, I went in search of the how-to’s. It seems that every successful writer has written a book, or a blog, or an article on how to do exactly what he or she did. There is so much (often conflicting) advice thrown at us that it can be hard to get off the roller coaster. But I learned in business that while we can have role models and mentors, by the time it’s your turn to take that path the path will have changed. Everyone’s journey will be different, and we each have to go with our gut and do what feels right for us! 


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# Monday, March 01, 2010
How I Got My Agent: Ellen Bryson
Posted by Chuck

"How I Got My Agent" is a recurring feature on the GLA blog. I find it fascinating to see the exact road people took that landed them with a rep. Seeing the things people did right vs. what they did wrong (highs and the lows) can help other scribes who are on the same journey. Some tales are of long roads and many setbacks, while others are of good luck and quick signings.

To see
the previous installments of this column, click here.

If you have a literary agent and would be interested in writing a short guest column for this GLA blog, e-mail me at literaryagent@fwmedia.com and we'll talk specifics.





Ellen Bryson's book, The Transformation of
Bartholomew Fortuno
, comes out in June
2010. The story follows Fortuno, the world's
thinnest man, as he's hired by none other
than P.T. Barnum to work at a spectacular
American museum. See Ellen's website here.



REJECTIONS TRICKLE IN

When it came to finding an agent, I was not well prepared. I didn’t realize how many good web sources there were to answer questions; I didn’t do much research, and I never once wrote a good query letter. Mostly, though, I couldn’t find an agent because my manuscript wasn’t ready.  It took me years to finish a full draft—sometimes working steadily, sometimes not at all. I plugged away, enrolling in a Masters program to keep me working and, thanks to some really great teachers, help me improve. Eventually, I felt ready enough to send the manuscript to writer friends of mine and writer friends of others—anyone who was willing and able to give me usable advice. I rewrote, and unwrote, and rewrote again.

Finally, I felt I could reasonably say The End. Out went the manuscript to an agent that someone had told me might be a good fit. Back it came with a ‘no thanks’ but, generously, with notes. I took the notes very seriously and rewrote to try to answer points raised. Out it went again, this time to an agent I had researched and found to like the same kind of books that I liked. Back it came again, this time with nothing but a form letter. I sent it again and again—the results more or less the same.

These rejections weren’t fun. It didn’t matter that I knew it wasn’t personal. But I didn’t mind going back to the manuscript. Quite honestly, rewrites were work I really liked. In the work, I had control. It was the agent search that I found difficult. It all seemed so magical to me, and I did not feel like the hero of my story.

BRANCHING OUT

Deciding to try another tactic, I went to the writer’s colony Breadloaf, a humbling experience but my first chance to “pitch” in front of an agent. Talking about my manuscript to a professional was both nerve-wracking and instructive. It made me nervous. I did it anyway. And I left with a request from an agent to send her what I had when I felt it was finished. Wow, what a show of interest can do to renew one’s you-can-do-it sense of things. It took nearly a year before I felt ready to send her a partial and then, lo and behold, the whole thing at her request.

In a meantime, I sucked it up again, this time going to a local writers conference. I’m not particularly social, and events like this weren’t easy for me. But at this conference, I got lucky. I met a writer much further along the path than I was. In a moment of generosity, he said, “I’ll take a look at your manuscript if you want me to.” I loved him!  Then, when he suggested I send it to his agent, I was utterly beside myself. Since I hadn’t heard from the Breadloaf agent who still had my manuscript, and as she had not asked for an exclusive, I figured, what the hell. His agent turned it down.

YES, YES, YES!

My friend then suggested another agent he knew: Mollie Glick. Why not? I sent Mollie a quick e-mail, telling her who I was and who had recommended me. After reading my first three chapters, she asked to see the full manuscript. On the day before Thanksgiving, Mollie called to tell me she liked the manuscript, but asked if I was willing to work on it. Yes, I said. Yes, yes, yes!

It took two more years of back and forth, including six months of research, until Mollie was happy with it. I dreaded her editorial letters but understood the points she was making and did my best. The big changes I had to do alone, but both of us did line-editing for misspellings, dropped or repeated words, and flabby writing—all the painstaking stuff. After that, it didn’t take long for the manuscript to sell. That moment was, well, wonderful!

So what did I learn through all of this? I learned that it takes what it takes. A manuscript is never done, but it needs to get to a certain point before anyone will be able to see it. Because I didn’t know what finished meant, I sent it out too early. I sent to only one agent at a time even though no one asked me for an exclusive. As a result, I often waited many months to hear back. Finally, and this is what an author friend of mine said: It's not a real book until the professionals get a hold of it. But that’s another story.



This post is an online exclusive complement
to a spotlight on Ellen in the March/April 2010
issue of WD. If you don't have a sub to
Writer's Digest, what are you waiting for?
Get one now!

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Kids Contest Winners Announced!
Posted by Chuck

Judging is complete and here are the winners for the second "Dear Lucky Agent" contest, which focused on kids writing. Congratulations to all winners. We had about 400 entries, which was amazing. The current contest (goes till March 14) is for writers of YA and adult paranormal romance and urban fantasy.

GRAND-PRIZE WINNER: The Not-So-Ordinary Summer of Emily Bartels, by Jeni Bell: Twelve-year-old Emily Bartels joins the swim team in an effort to get closer to her sportswriter father, but gets more than she bargained for when she ends up on the Pee Wee team, swimming with the kindergartners and first-graders.

TWO RUNNERS-UP: Life and Beth, by Lisa Amowitz: When 17-year-old guitarist Beth Collins is scouted by a mysterious arts academy, she soon finds it's not her killer chops they're after, but her other killer talent—the one for controlling death.
     The Suspicions of Cairo Jones, by Mary Danielson: In 1920s New York, Cairo Jones, teen reporter, is on the hunt for that big story that will launch her into a real newspaper job, but when a front-page crime hits too close to home, it will take all of her investigative skills to save both Cairo's dreams and her family.


YOUR AGENT JUDGE: Jennifer Laughran is an agent with the Andrea Brown Literary Agency. Books she's repped include:

    


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